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Moved into Anakin before the events of episode one. Experimenting with the Force, waiting for Qui-Gon, earning what he can. Ahead of Coruscant and the dubious prospect of becoming a knight. The canon is not retroactively changed, but from the moment Anakin arrives on Coruscant, the plot, the sequence of events, changes completely.
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I hope the MC ends up with Ahsoka, she's my favorite girl from Star Wars besides Padme is kind of useless, she basically just gave Anakin trouble, the only thing I remember her being useful for is when she stole something from a her ex-boyfriend who was on the side of the separatists
So far it's a great story. However the grammar is absolutely horrendous, very difficult to understand.
everything except grammar, correct terms, and spelling is great. Problem is, the ungreat stuff gives me diarrhea.
The grammar is really bad but it gets better. But the first few chapters will seriously give you a headache. I really like the novel but I will stop reading because one thing that is just not acceptable for me : It seems like all the romantic interests will die. The first girl just die when his ship is attacked. the second girl is met when he travels into the past so she is long dead when he returns to the present. I really don't want to read a story where every female leads we get attached to dies.
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it was great, but "kingdom building" somehow ruined it for me. for me SW universe have only 3 good points - force, lightsabers and lore(which includes only previous two points). everything else in this universe is nothing special, including politics and technology. chapters are gigantic which is good. mc seems to have become op but was not truly tested in battle with any enemy, i mean lightsaber battle. mc is good with technology. ff lacks adversary. I would actually prefer him to continue playing in his own sandbox with force and lightsabers. new applications and smth like that. but AT is rly good. have a vision or had - here I'm not sure now. but no matter what i recommend to read it, because mc does not follow the canon and does his own thing. btw he is not sith. ))) gl
very good, not boring, goes a different way than other similar fanfics, sometimes maybe too verbose but I prefer that than too cursory writing.
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Lastima que deserción y todo iba tan bien, empezó con un desastre de escritura pero con una buena historia de fondo, despues se olvido de una heroina para que cuando por fin habíamos aceptado a la otra solo pasara eso sin ningun motivo asta en las peliculas hicieron un mejor trabajo dando pistas y un motivo logico por lo que se cambiaria la mentalidad del personaje para siempre y aqui nomas puf y lo que sigue enserio que lastima y que forma de arruinar una historia.
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Me alegra que no sigas el canon a la fuerza, no soy un gran fan de la franquicia pero me gusta como va la historia, es buena historia sigue con el buen trabajo
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Juss didn’t like the story elements yu added like the lightsaber crystals being buyable and juss how the force was used instantly with no training overall meh
Quick and dirty, but undestandable. I am not a nitpicky english c*nt. Good work.
The story is entertaining enough, but the orthography, o god the orthography, trying to read this is risking a aneurysm for bad grammar, I don't know if it is a bad translation or bad redaction, but it really kills the enjoyment
Good story, but you can tell it was written by a nationalist. Usually they are chinese, this time it's a Russian. It is a good story. Don't get me wrong, but what the MC does leaves me scratching my head. Oh, and the usual, there are typos, storyline jumping around, or timelines that do not match.
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