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I couldn’t believe it when I found out that Frieren was defeated by Solo Leveling for Anime of the Year and before I knew it, I was suddenly transmigrated into the Solo Leveling world without my consent.
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I kinda dont understand how you're able to write longer sentences correct and then make so many damn mistakes in those short ones or just straight up miss words
From reading so far I can say this is a good binge worthy fic. I'm looking forward to read more so don't drop this ok author? . Or else old evil Larry will be hunting you down and put you in peenar explosion chamber so BEWARE DON'T DROP THIS OK?
This is a rare solo leveling fic, and it is really good. I wish there were more chapters.
it pretty good so far only thing I don't like is how he's hiding behind a mask for no reason. also don't like the high school bit that feels a little over done. but other then that pretty good so far
It is really good I couldn't find any grammatical errors and if it will continue with that update schedule (after one week hiatus) the update schedule is really good too My only regret is I found this gold with soo little chapter cout. Have a great time while writing I hope you succeed.
Its actually pretty interesting, I like how the mc isnt an extreme in all the usual tropes of an mc. Plus the pulls he is getting from the gacha so far arent making him immediately op, so thats a plus for me. One of the best things I like in gamer/gacha genres is that the skills or pulls they got can mesh to make him better, like with the divine protection and fels, keep it up man. Hope you dont stay away for too long, this is a pretty good read already.
It's a good story that it's no rushed, one that you can read without burning your brain trying to decipher what was written there. In comparison to other stories this one it's a decent one
I can't comment on the writing quality, as I'm using Google Translate. I would like to see more consistent updates. The concept of the story is good, but there are some inconsistencies (the student lives alone without a guardian), but this can be attributed to a world where people are constantly risking their lives. I am also curious about whether the protagonist will use science and technology in magic (such as mana batteries or energy conversion into mana). As for the protagonist's character, I can say that it suits his childlike body. The story is good, and I will be waiting for updates.
Awesome story, I really like it. I hope you continue releasing many more chapters in the future. [img=update][img=recommend]
Focus on tightening the small grammatical errors and add stronger reasoning behind the MC’s actions. Giving the MC more internal monologues would also help the reader understand their mindset and actually feel what they feel. That’s the difference between the forgettable junk we read every day and something that comes close to peak fiction. P.s Im giving constructive criticism since this seems promising good job author. P.s.s All roads lead to Rome.
It's nice to see something like this it's honestly refreshing and I haven't found too many stories like this and they always turn out great so keep up the good work I'll be watching this masterpiece unfold
Really good solo leveling fic!!! A little fast paced but the world is nonetheless really fleshed out and Charakters are also nicly written
honestly pretty good, glad to see you updating again and keep up the good work.
pretty good fic that has interesting worlds' magic included. As others have said, if you keep consistent it'll be the best path forward
I like how it's going I am a little sad because why you decided to go on a hiatus you shouldn't stop writing something just because it isnt popular thats how you have a unfinished book its a problem that plagues all authors they make a book they enjoy but it doesn't get the views they like so they abandon it making a new fic over time it happens again and again until they are either no longer writing fics they like and only following whats popular or they stop completely never making fics again sometimes they realize start making fics for themselves again but thats rare dont become one of those who strives for popularity make fics because its what you like to do