OriginLord

So I'm writing this more for the author than for future reader. The scoring isn't reflecting my opinions, I'm just following orders. I'm gonna stop reading as of chapter 42 cause I can't see where you are headed. In a world based on plots, relationship, wars and intrigue with an added gusto of dragons, your main character do none of this. He has unclear objectives has he never states them, leaving me wondering what is he pursuing, does he want to build his House so they may escape unscated from the Dance? I don't know it is never stated. His progress are happening in a way that leave me at least but I would guess readers in general feel like we aren't really part of the story, and while it is stated that he struggle at first before becoming adept, we don't see those struggles leaving the progress feeling bland as we didn't see him work for it. The systems feel forced, rather than a boon or a unique gimmick that give an interest to the story, it feels like a wheel that is used for him to know things he should not without being a real genius. But in my opinions the biggest downside is that out of the first 42 chapters, dialogue may not represent even the equivalent of one of them. This leave us stranded, with a seemingly well-known and accomplished character, of which we know basically nothing, in 42 chapters, I don't know his personnality, his goals, his dreams, or even the way he talks.