An excellent first chapter!
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The name of that game? Gwent
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It's just low spirit particle density. Get to a place where they're thick enough and even liquid Spirit Pools are a thing.
"Unlike Cultivation Online, cultivation is much slower in the real world, which isn't really that surprising. And with a lack of treasures to assist us, we'll be even slower." Yu Rou mumbled.
Cultivation Online
Games · MyLittleBrother
Now, I hate the teacher as much as y'all, but at least he did change his mind rather than stubbornly sticking to his original, foolish decision.
They had made this suggestion earlier and even said the same thing to Del. informing him there might be more danger up ahead. Still, he decided to progress anyway and now he was saying travelling upward was a bad idea.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
No question for why things are cycled around the rain? Nothing about what makes the rain safest to move and feed? What predators are disadvantaged by the rain? Well, count yourself another anti-fan, Del.
"I think so," Del replied. "I think these beasts reacted to the rain. They seemed to appear and disappear at the same time as the rain appeared and vanished... Luckily for us, in a place like this, the downpour might be strong, but it doesn't last for long. However, we don't know when the next downpour will be."
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
The Good: The editing rarely makes mistakes and the writing is straightforward. The story moves along at a pace that laughs at the slow pace Chinese stories love. The author seems to have a vision and is writing it. The Bad: We're definitely in wish fulfillment territory. The thing that seemed to take the longest was the MC getting his system. The MC borders on leaning on his plot armor and the 4th wall intentionally. Everything is kind of canned otherwise. Dateless loser? Quest to get one. Best friend shows up and immediately offers up his sister. Lots of things are explained by info dumps. The system is so helpful that the MC doesn't have to be smart. Multiple times the MC is in danger or is greedy and with a smile and raise of the hand, the system or the world bend to his will. I have put food effort into reading this, but even I have to stop after a few chapters to give myself a break. I've never seen MC struggle to overcome something and by now, I'm kind of tried of looking. The characters are uninspired. The author, as far as I got, worked too hard showing us that their talent was wasted telling instead of showing. Most of the author's weaknesses are in their interpersonal and cultural understandings. The greatest moment I encountered in the story, where the author was showing their spark, was when the FL spoke French. It was an opportunity for many things, but many, if not all, were wasted. The MC apparently spoke French too, a dead language, in the future, in an area with predominantly Chinese names. It could have been a moment to show the MC having a gap in his knowledge, and thus himself, or to use his skills or the system to overcome. Instead the MC was too cool for human weakness and was perfect. Yay. My final conclusion is that while I look forward to the growth of this author, I'll be looking forward to their next book, rather than more chapters of this one. Whomever their editor and proofreader is, they have my praise and I hope the author realizes the blessing they have.
If you're that impressed, then I'm disappointed that you don't support him by pointing him in a better direction.
"So just working on old classes, that are not really used much anymore." Laohu spoke a little surprised again as he expected more. Then Laohu says. "Well, it seems like you are squandering your talents, however just make sure you treat my daughter well."
Life Drain System
Fantasy · Yueliang_Haizi
Ah yes, advertising the details of your strengths and weaknesses. Not like anyone in this universe would be curious about that, especially after they killed off the rest of your superpowered family
"That sounds about right. I am still trying out many things, but Sir Laohu is the epitome of strength." Yueliang answered.
Life Drain System
Fantasy · Yueliang_Haizi
It's something of a status indicator when someone switches language for the conversation partner. Whomever switches is taking the lower status, usually out of respect. With this being a place of service, to the plebeians, it's fine to make them speak French instead of Chinese, but for any guest, honored guest or VIP, this would be a major breach of status, forcing the guest to submit to the servant. I understand that this may be used to show the humility of the FL but if so, it shows that she doesn't understand her status or place.
"Here we are." She said cutely as she brought him inside a massive sky scraper. Then walked towards the desk assistant. Beginning by saying "Bonjour, pourriez-vous s'il vous plaît informer mon père que je suis venu." (Hello, could you please let my father know I have come.)
Life Drain System
Fantasy · Yueliang_Haizi
With this being China? Yes. You'd be seen as spitting in the face of a "top doctor in the world" as a not doctor and not peer. Unless he delicates out procedures, (spoilers: he doesn't) the only one you're calling incompetent is him. Are you trying to tell me that his fabulously rich parents didn't start with the best doctor they could for their cash cow?
"With that being said, there's no way someone healthy would suddenly lose their ability to move their body and see, so we could only conclude that it is a new illness that can avoid the detection of our current technology. I'm really sorry that I cannot be of more help to you, Young Master. I am also really ashamed to even call myself a doctor whenever I am before you..." Doctor Wang sighed.
Cultivation Online
Games · MyLittleBrother