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Yup….. this episode made me drop the whole series now. Cringey chapter
He had 4 blocks, not 4 steals in the previous chapters. Better edit that while its early
Ooofff, first page grammar errors are tough to ignore.
This is the only novel ive read the first 6 chapters in (not even short chapters) and the story is still mysteriously shit. Dropping it
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Good novel. The writers grammar and storytelling is great. He/she adds proper description of the scene to paint the image , and the main protagonist is like-able. Good job.
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Yeah. The indian english sentence structure around those chapters bothered me so much.
I cant get past the poor english grammatical errors. I know the author is from india but it really bothers me. The lack of vocabulary and sentence structures make it feel like the characters are all 5 year olds. "Master, what master call Yunyun for?" Grave looked at Yunyun and speak. "Playing time is over."
Bad grammar and poor spelling errors. Tsk tsk tsk
Theres a big difference between 1life/sec and 10 life/10sec recovery.
Constitution 10 = 300 Life, 50 Physical Defense, and 10 Life/10s Recovery
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