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This whole translation needs work. English does have gender. Is the name of the vampire Ellis or Alice? Is the said vampire a he or a she? Quit changing back and forth. While the story may end up being good, it does nothing if it's unreadable. Please, if you are going to put it on a site that eventually charges per chapter, as well as self-advertising, at make it worth it.

So far, while the story has real promise, the manga is better translated. I keep scratching my head trying to make sense of what's written.