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I agree that it is a writing style and not a bad one for its purpose of covering up the author's inability to write engaging action scenes.

The author just takes it to an extreme that pushes my tolerance a bit, but I didnt drop this until other factors added on top of it. If it was my first Xianxia I probably would of enjoyed it to a point. View More

EpicEvan: Dude It's a style and I for one hope for its resurgence

The Eternal Supreme · C8
6 days ago

weirdgeneous: it makes me wonder the same question too , why am i still reading this ?.

The Eternal Supreme · C22
1 month ago

TheFaceless: the mc and many other character inside the story are simply too shallow, to the point that i found it impossible to connect to them.
moreover someone whose total age is over 30 and had been holding back emotion such as anger and hatred shouldnt be so emotional and babylike like the mc.
the english was filled with numerous typo, even my 3 stars are only there because this is a chinese novel platform, which lowers my the standard of english fluency.

Supreme Magus
1 month ago

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Supreme Magus
1 month ago

Hjkoi: I don't have the patience to read it anymore. It's just like DBZ where monologuing is taking way to much precedence. Can't forget about the annoying amount of pointless detail and nameless character reactions.

Paradise of Demonic Gods · C957
1 month ago

Yojimbo88: So trashy novels with sociopathic MCs living only for themselves are for adults? Sounds more like something a 13 year old edgelord would enjoy before they turned into a bitter incel when they got older.

Birth of the Demonic Sword
1 month ago

RockNRage: the prob of this novel is that MC has no growth or dept, at all. He starts a psycho (for no reason, is stated that on earth he was an avrg joe) and remains such, with no change. The secondary chars are all super shallow too. They are either there to be killed by the MC ad give him resources or to blow sugar up his ass saying how strong he his. William, the first master, is the best built character. June was laughable and so Ivor and the academy headmaster. zero depth and 0 personality.

Birth of the Demonic Sword
1 month ago

3KBytes: I completely agree with this review. The mc is unreasonable and do not care about anything but himself. The latest chapter was really bad, it was probably there only so he could get some spoils from the lady.

Birth of the Demonic Sword
1 month ago

DrewWells: I like a MC that goes around killing people, but he should have a decent reason, in this story The MC kills people on a whim that dind’t do anything to him, moreover he Is completely hypocritical, blaming others for thing he is the first to do.
It would made sense if he was born in a devious place and he can’t distinguish right from wrong, but he had a loving mother and teacher, and he was already an ***** when he came in this world. He knows perfectly right from wrong, he simply is just a shallow character that only cares about power and goes around killing people on a whim.
And he is so cliché, he’s like the villain of too many stories, the baddies that what more power because he want’s more power and is evil because he’s evil without and proper reason.
I hope that everybody knows that power, as much as money, it’s just a means, not the final aim, and reading about a MC that wants power without any other aim it’s quite boring. And again I would like and accept if there was a psychological growth, but fro. The beginning to the end he is the same.

Birth of the Demonic Sword
1 month ago

WoofWoof: Grammar, mostly prepositions need improving
Side characters are always watching the MC
Nobles are more rotten
Interesting novel...
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Birth of the Demonic Sword
1 month ago

Dakratas: MC is too much of a sociopath. He kills people if things are invonvenient for him. I read around 180 chapter only to drop it after that. Mc's personality is not compatible with mine. He is the person who wouldn't care to kill millions of people only to make his goal easier by 5%. I read a lot of novels including Warlock of the Magus World but somehow the mc of this novel triggers me.

Birth of the Demonic Sword
1 month ago

IndomitableTruth: I tried, but the MC become too OP and the stories had too many clichés, the evil nobles, the ruthless MC for no good reason etc...

Birth of the Demonic Sword
1 month ago

Alessan: Darn Mr. Translator why do you gotta use big fancy words like matriculate. Is it so hard to say just say “enrolled”?

Lord of the Mysteries · C966
1 month ago

frealzilla: Yeh I know every 20yo peasant should be a genius who expects every stranger to be a disguised mage that he has known for 5 minutes.

Paragon of Destruction · C3
1 month ago

Chaoticmike: The mc isn’t dumb he has no knowledge about magic he came from a commoner family and the empire keeps anything related to magic or any supernatural power away from the average person

Paragon of Destruction · C3
1 month ago

Hamdi_Korreshi: It’s not the plot, it’s the way he weaves his words to create a living world. While the plot might be generic it’s better than most novels who just make the mc op and no emotions.

Paragon of Destruction · C2
1 month ago

KamlaArts: How long has it been since I have last had the privilege to read a light novel written with such superb writing/grammar/structure, and so forth. Actual English, or well American English but ya'll get me. Not complaining of others, just appreciating the 'breath of fresh air', as it were. Deep gratitude to author and translator if there is one. :D

Paragon of Destruction · C1
1 month ago

SmilingReader: When teachers say that maths can be applied to everyday life I wonder if they meant you were in another world trying to become a sorcerer 🤔

Throne of Magical Arcana · C602
1 month ago

Looogan: The third cocoon is obviously for Susie. 🐕

Lord of the Mysteries · C948
1 month ago

Evil_For_the_WIN: Just like his fanfic of one piece, it was good at the beginning but MC is too focused on getting pussies and using ****ty means to get them. There's so much potential wasted for NTR. Maybe it get better after but I don't know. Another thing is why do you think that murder technique of Earth can beat Naruto's where they spit fire and have all their bones out of the body without being injured. But for this part I understand that you used the idea of Chinese novel with their bull**** when an assassin in a peaceful (relatively) world is better in assassination skills than others of a constantly warring words.
The grammar didn't bother me as much since I used to destroy my braincells with MTL but it's 3rd not 3th.

Naruto: Sexual Strengthening
1 month ago

OldDaoistBlack: about chapter 1128 : This is what’s making it painful for me to keep reading this novel : the exaggerated bull**** feelings . For ****’s sake, he didn’t keep drinking for his family and his massacred clan SO why the hell will he keep dreaming about someone who wished to cuckold him , and for thousands of years at that. Fuck you author

Transcending the Nine Heavens
1 month ago

Aristotelis: It is a good novel not Like most xianxia novel full of fillers but after 200 chapter the guality became Google translation go to for guality translation https://walkthejianghu.com

Transcending the Nine Heavens
1 month ago

Shado: Overall the story is good but the translation is bad. The first 100-200 chapters were translated well but after the quality was staring to be sh*t.

Transcending the Nine Heavens
1 month ago

Ehbon: The best part is that Anderson absolutely isn’t acting, he’s just naturally that infuriating. He’s a born provoker. That’s why bad things constantly happen to him, he’s been provoking the universe since day one. Who else but Anderson Hood would randomly get bad luck, walk into a demigod, and get mind controlled for 2 months. He treats such an occurrence like a totally normal thing that happens to him all the time. At least nobody could say that his life is boring...

Lord of the Mysteries · C894
2 months ago

errantsystems: The reason why they havent done the experiment yet is because the (de Broglie) wavelength of a particle inversely depends on it's momentum, and electrons need a much higher momentum than photons for this due to their mass (so it's harder because they need a much smaller slit to see diffraction).

Throne of Magical Arcana · C593
2 months ago

Hjkoi: Has there been no editor lately? This translation has been alot more painful then normal to read.

Throne of Magical Arcana · C593
2 months ago
Ive been reading 2 chapters ahead, today's chapter was almost flawless so I think they either got a new editor or they were on break. View More

Asanda_Nima: Yeah, the quality declined recently. Or the translation is rushed because of this whole privileged bs...

Throne of Magical Arcana · C593
2 months ago
Has there been no editor lately? This translation has been alot more painful then normal to read. View More
Throne of Magical Arcana · C593
2 months ago

Jmitch1: I couldn't get past chapter 1. If I see the words "Dungeon Core" put together anytime soon, I'm going to kick somebody. The way this is written is so weird, confusing, and childish. If I didn't see A-Z, I would not be sure it was English.

I mean, Damn. And not to say the grammar was terrible, it's just... whoever edited or translated this probably doesn't use English that often, speaks often, or is still in High School.

That's all I can say.

Gamers of the Underworld
2 months ago

Grimhaven: Stopped at Chapter 25. Introduced best friend and some side characters but due to the fact that he's actually a 30+ year old transmigrator douche-bag, they get pushed to the side simply because he was too "mature" for them. Don't introduce characters in detail and with significance, especially "best friends" then dump them 10 chapters later because he's too grown for them. Lazy a$$ writing. And makes for a very unlikable MC. Verdict: dropped.

Nightmare's Call
2 months ago
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