Bulbasaur - Profile

I don't know why Webnovel censored, "Adult" but that is what the censored word is. For the author who was so curious. This novel just gives me the feeling I had when I read books in my middle school's library. Stuff like The Mysterious Benedict Society, Eragon, and the Magic Tree House series. I am really enjoying this book; keep up the excellent work!

With the writing style and the story development so far, this novel reminds me of the young ***** novels I would find inside my middle school library. I was pleasantly surprised when I started reading this book and am glad I found it. The main characters are all unique and quirky (A bit too much at times)but still feel like teenagers. The powers are all unique and stray from the usual cultivation novel. The individuality of each ascendant power gives creative room to the author without making the characters feel invincible. I hope they do a good job steadily increasing the character's limits as the story continues. There are good backstories and motivations for each character, and the grouping doesn't feel forced. (Even though they were literally forced together.) I hope the author can do a good job displaying emotional and mental tension between them all as the story progresses. All in all, I have enjoyed what is currently here, up to chapter 32, and I hope this story continues even if the time between chapters is a bit long.

I am glad to hear that, and I hope you continue your story. I in no way meant to discourage you and am excited to see how your writing progresses. Keep up the good work!

This story has piqued my interest, but I do not know why it has been given its current rating. The author is not native to English, so I would not recommend reading this novel if you are looking for easy reading. I read what I could but have yet to find anything substantial in the story, as it is buried in grammatical errors. I will be checking on this book to see how the author improves, and I hope they continue their writing. For now, however, this novel reads like an MTL. (Machine Translation) TL;DR The story looks interesting, but the grammar needs some work.