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heavenlydogdog: His sarcasm on point.
I would love to have a reinactment of garra vs Lee but garra being able to somewhat keep up with weightless Lee using the heavinly breathes but when Lee activates the gates he has to use his sand (I see what you did with iron sand).
His sand should faster then the ot(original timeline garra) his chakra is good (espicialy since that's him without using shukakau, and that shukakau is a lot less powerful than kurama and the seal that naruto has conveerst kurama chakra into naruto's) speed is excellent considering his size, vitality should a bit higher (junchiriki) but it's reasonable, strength is on point since garra is always a little frail since he was born prematurly.
Now the strength is it with chakra enchancmet or without (every ninja could use chakra to enhance their strength but to varrieng degrees).
Overall very interesting I hope the jonin sense would teach him something new like how to use wind chakra to envmchance cutting power or how to throw wind blades at the opponent (since suna has the most amount of wind users they should have more jutsu)Gaara · C31
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SmilingReader: Bru’s plans of world domination ended as abruptly as it began 😭Gamers of the Underworld · C37
Eerii: I'm attached to Cramer now, he's a good sport! He accepted the name Cramer and he valiantly fought the goblins over and over! I hope he Survives, maybe becoming another combat trainer? He certainly is pretty decent at combat, and he'd probably work for free!Gamers of the Underworld · C38
Daoist635625: Can you imagine the lives of these simple beings. Not knowing what is their fate. They think of themselves with pride but it matters not as they are just a minor mob to killGamers of the Underworld · C38
Adypoker: It's Kobolds not houndhead men...
And Kobolds are said to be descendants from Dragons!Gamers of the Underworld · C39
arbiter: I think ill stockpile for now.. You feel me? I dont know, but i feel like it's lacking about something, but yeah, novel's great, love the concept, maybe i needed more chapters.. so..
See you guys!!
Thanks for the chapter
If it turns to premium, then ill be back fastGamers of the Underworld · C37
BigiNove: Houndhead men? you mean "Kobold" ? is this... a mistake in translation?
do you call dragon "lizard with wings" instead ?Gamers of the Underworld · C33
kugguj: Wait... you mean Kobolds, even Google translate changes it to kobolds. HEADHOUND MEN? waddafuq?Gamers of the Underworld · C33
Anubis: I- have no idea what author just said but imma act like i didThe Iceman · C15
Ghostman: After reading the chapters on opening day, I must say this story is unique. Dungeon stories aren't rare but this is a very interesting opening. Look forward to more.Gamers of the Underworld · C12
Legs: Pretty boring, switches all over the place. No foreshadowing of introductions, too many plot lines occurring at the same time.
Nothing much to add besides this.Synthetic Survivor: Machine Age
AliM: I plan to go back and fix them, it gets better after a few chapters, I hope you enjoy the story and give it another try.A plant's life
EndlesslyHarem: Every novel that I think smells of ***** must be youThe Avarice System
Synthetic Survivor: Machine Age
Eternal2145: Her lies the rambles of a madman.
I was around chapter 20 i gave up yup i gave up. Its to slow paced and nothing really happens.
Ex: spends 4-6 chapters trapped inside shell/clam all he does is absorb, then gets out and eaten by a bird and guess what he is now trapped in its stomach and all he does is absorb. Wth do something. Of course if you like snail pace this is for you. It might be good but its a pain to keep reading chapters wher he does the same thing as the last 2-3 chapters.
Kinda like dragon ball just lots of less action and takes longer to do any thing.Ball of Nothing
A plant's life
AshKami: That just makes him same as the canon Gaara. I'm pretty sure even canon Gaara was at least genin in all stats and jonin in chakra - without training. With training this Gaara should have at least low-chunin in all stats and elite-jonin or low-kage for chakra.Gaara · C30
Hmasjll: Even though I'm super happy you have updated I really think you should change Gaaras' stats, he literally has a system and has his father as his personal teacher...like come on aren't you underestimating him a little?
^^Please understand Author in not giving hate, just trying to give you some constructive criticism^^Gaara · C29
heavenlydogdog: A bit of a nitpick:
Gara is a jinchurki his physique is beyond most ninja so he should be in mid chunin ranges (he is thirteen years old when itachi was thirteen he killed his whole clan jonin and chunin i believe garra is more talented 9hysically than itachi) his durability in the chunin exams was godly he was able to survive five gates Lee who would be bale to flatten most jonin (yes jonin)Gaara · C29
jesusguero25: Dude why is so freaking weak! Did ya nerf so that you could keep it canon? At least you should have made him elite chunnin in all stats bruh!Gaara · C29
Simeon_7610: Omg Gaara is so op after 8 years of constant training he’s already at a low-genin level......... 😑🤨
Why is he pretty much genin level in all stats. Aren’t you underestimating gaara’s talent a little too much?
In the anime he is already much stronger than he is now, and may I remind you, in this fanfic he’s trained pretty much constantly ever since he was born. In this fanfic he has also become “friends” with shukaku and isn’t being controlled.Gaara · C29
Grayscale: Barely stronger? Which part of "crippled one of the 4 strongest families single handedly without spiritual essence" did you not understand?Way of the Devil · C452
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