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Curse the Mainframe! · C208
3 days ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
The Mech Touch · C970
3 days ago

Gregory_Ferreira: Manohar is the most likely suspect... I doubt it would be one of those from the old guard... And none of the other characters participated enouth to become important... Well except the other guy from the healing department... But Manohar has that insane vibe to him

Supreme Magus · C201
1 week ago

scarlett1414: Is Wanemyre under mind control or what? 😱

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Supreme Magus · C201
1 week ago

ReadsWebNovels: Probably a modified slave collar as mentioned earlier.

Supreme Magus · C201
1 week ago

000ZERO000: I guess he is the Legendary Mechanic because of how legendary his tanking ability is.

The Legendary Mechanic · C563
2 weeks ago

MoonLord: If you read this chapter with some sad violin music, you're emotions will multiply 100× times...

The Legendary Mechanic · C562
2 weeks ago

GDindyal: It's so sad that the mutation source had to die. I was thinking maybe it could become like the VR Arosima's family and become HX's Smaet AI. But, controlling people, who in turn will control machines. Only the bad guys of course 😁

The Legendary Mechanic · C562
2 weeks ago

sleepylily: wow...this world even has sentimental cracks...you surprised me again dear author!

Curse the Mainframe! · C141
2 weeks ago
What happened to the ash phoenix? View More
Curse the Mainframe! · C139
2 weeks ago
He wasn't pushing himself, but digging his hand into the wall... Ouch! View More

cpugremlin: Im sorry but this is really bothering me, i don't understand how he managed to slow himself down. Generally if you push on something while in free fall you will just push yourself away from it. Unless he was able to brace his back against another wall at the same time. I was rooting for awakend tree roots caching him! .... rooting *waggles eyebrows*

Curse the Mainframe! · C28
2 weeks ago
Hope the long chapters are over and done with... Can't wait for the return to daily releases..... View More
The Ultimate Evolution · C1390
2 weeks ago

jensseng: This is done as part of a review swap, but I haven't finished the entire 100 chapters. It’s not because the story is not good but I figured by the time I could finish all posted chapters, it would take me a month or something. By the way, this is the first five star review I’ve ever given. As of writing this review, I'm only at Chapter 26.

Updates: Don’t really have any issues with update speed since I can’t even manage to read all chapters yet.

Writing: Your writing is excellent with a strong list of vocabulary. I could perfectly envision the world through your narration. There were a few minor errors such as incorrect punctuations for dialogues, but it didn’t impede my reading comprehension at all.

For example:
Original >> "Alek-sandros." She said his name while testing it on her tongue.
Edited >> "Alek-sandros,” she said his name while testing it on her tongue.

Characters: I like the slow build-up of the MC. The MC is intelligent, resourceful, meticulous but also vengeful and ambitious. I wouldn’t necessarily call him the typical protagonist. He seems more of an antihero to me, but it’s always a lot more fun to read a protagonist that isn’t black and white. Lenia intrigues me as well. I love how ‘inexperienced’ and ‘childlike’ she is in the beginning but gradually, she is learning to become more individualized.

World design: The world is still being built and we learn a little more about the world as each chapter progresses. I haven’t read all the chapters so I can’t say much, but as of now, I really enjoy the world design. There are some mysteries surrounding the world, but I think this is where I’ll have to read more chapters to uncover the world’s mysteries.

Story development: Since I’m barely halfway through the story, I can only comment up to what I’ve read and so far, the story development is fantastic. Even when I was at chapter 12, I thought everything was well paced (be it story or character development) so I totally don’t understand why some reviewers were giving this story a bad review. A good story always takes time to build its character and plot. I’m glad you are taking your time to do so and not jumping the gun.

All in all, it is a well-written and well-developed story with enough mysteries and action to keep you wanting for more. I’m definitely going to keep this story in my library and finish up the rest of the chapters! I’m so excited to read the rest of the chapters. MUST READ.

BELOW ARE MY CONJECTURES AND CONTAINS A LOT OF SPOILER (I couldn’t stop myself from commenting on some things so forgive me for the essay-like response. Also forgive me if I got these religious reference and/or lore incorrect as I’m not an expert in this area. I merely did some rudimentary research on the subject):

Reading all these comments criticizing you about how difficult it was to get through the first 10 chapters, which was super short and barely enough time for any real development in my opinion, made me super confused about the harsh/biased comments. So I decided to go back and re-read the beginning chapters and even did my own side research on this whole Tower of Babel, which I had no knowledge of beforehand. And boy were there surprises for me. Obviously there might be a chance that this is all in my head and I’m just overanalyzing.

After researching what the events surrounding the Tower of Babel was, I think I could understand the beginning (seemingly confusing) chapters. According to wiki, the story of the Tower of Babel (in the Book of Genesis) happened after the Great Flood and was during a time where there was only one single human race, where everyone spoke the same universal language. However, due to pride and arrogance, the humans built the Tower of Babel to reach the gods, which infuriated the gods. God punished them by dividing humankind into different race and cultures. In the beginning chapters with the two soldiers showed the MC (aka the mysterious “soul”) being killed and then his soul fled and ended up revisiting/recalling his first initial life as An-Namrud—the life that set everything in motion henceforth.

An-Namrud, the Arabic name for Nimrod, the king that supposedly rebelled against god and said to be Noah’s descendent (and when the system popped up telling the MC his class was “Human Ascendent”). Clearly from the beginning we can see the MC and Ishmael failed to defy the gods and was punished instead, one to be imprisoned in a mask and the other to suffer the continuous pains of reincarnation. Then the scene flashes to the husband and wife. It might be to illustrate the unintended ‘loophole’ and the birth of the “soul eater” because next, we see the “soul” going back to that reincarnation plane with their mini conversation before the soul is reincarnated again, this time into Aleksandros. Something obviously went wrong here because he retained his memory.

As for Aleksandra and Lenia, I was weirded out by the creation scene in the brothel house. But then, I wondered, are they some kind of allusion to Adam and Eve and the Garden of Eden? The image is just too similar. There was no need for Aleksandro to be undressed when all he did was use blood from his arm. So why go the extra mile to add in the description about the unabashed nakedness? Garden of Eden…paradise of pleasure…what symbolizes it than the brothel house? Eve was created to be Adam’s companion similarly to how Aleksandros created Lenia to be his second-in-command. Out of curiosity, I searched up the meaning of Aleksandros and came to “to defend man” whereas Lenia was linked to Helena/Magdalene…Mary Magdalene who was viewed as the sinful/promiscuous woman and former prostitute? Certainly this can’t all be a coincidence? I also wonder if the jealousy trait will end up being “the forbidden fruit”? There already seems to be a foreshadowing of the consequences of Lenia’s free will. I fell like all that leveling up thing, although fun, needs to be peeled away to discover the hidden themes underneath. There's so many allusions and references to lore and traditions, etc. Of course, since I'm only on chapter 26, I could be dead wrong about all of this but these are thoughts that kept nagging at me and I had to put it down.

Anyways, this is already in my library and I will be slowly finishing the rest of the chapters :) By the way, this isn't usually my type of genre but I'm so freaking intrigued so I'll be following it. I love a novel that shocks my brain.

Empire of Souls
2 weeks ago

Keriv136: Thank you for the excellent review and I am truly happy to see the thought you put into everything and that you get a lot of what I was trying to do with the fiction. Your thoughts are pretty much spot on in most places and I can see you are a deep thinker who analyzes the tiny details that others might miss. I can't tell you how glad I am to see this. This is the kind of thing I want and hope to see as I am writing.

Empire of Souls
2 weeks ago
Maybe it was an app formatting issue.
Elliot cleaving with flaming axe.
Break.
New paragraph starting with ape having tricks of its own and grabbing his divine device 😂. Admittedly not a big issue. Cheers! View More

Tomoyuki: Wait, what? I thought Elliot attacking was in the previous sentence. Was it in a different paragraph? Sorry about that.

Summoner Sovereign · C70
3 weeks ago
Great story btw, love all the genre subversion/bashing. Keep up the great work! View More

Tomoyuki: No, read clearly and carefully. The Ape grabbed Elliot's Divine Device before he could hit it, stopping his attack.

Summoner Sovereign · C70
3 weeks ago
I get it now, but between paragraphs, the subject of the pronoun 'his' isn't stated clearly, since Elliot wasn't named in the new paragraph. The only subject given is the ape at that point in the paragraph, so the grammatical association would be that 'his' refers to the ape. Sorry for going all grammar nazi. Thanks for clarifying. View More

Tomoyuki: No, read clearly and carefully. The Ape grabbed Elliot's Divine Device before he could hit it, stopping his attack.

Summoner Sovereign · C70
3 weeks ago

NP_3228: U know the dragon is suppose to be water according to asian culture. Surprisingly, the tortoise refers to earth which is why the color black. Turtle would make it water. Dragon has Azure (blueish color) in its name for water. Another note, white tiger would be wind, but alot of games make him lightning so its cool.

Summoner Sovereign · C72
3 weeks ago
The ape has a divine device??? View More
Summoner Sovereign · C70
3 weeks ago

NAJ_P_Jackson: Major Verle giving some good advice to Ves. I feel like Verle is acting more like a grandfather or Uncle to Ves than his family.

The Mech Touch · C970
3 weeks ago

Yukidaruma: Last chance. First! Thanks everyone ^^

Paradise of Demonic Gods · C1163
3 weeks ago
Poor Alloc... View More
The Mech Touch · C969
3 weeks ago

Sean88888: The amount of spirit stones a chapter costs is actually calculated automatically based on the chapter length. The reason this chapter costs 3 times as much as a normal chapter is because it's 3 times as long as a normal chapter.

The same will be true for the next chapter, so...save up your spirits stones :-)

The Ultimate Evolution · C1387
3 weeks ago

Sean88888: There will be no chapter published tomorrow because the next chapter is 3 chapters long and this chapter is almost 1.5 chapters long, so I need a bit more time to do the translation.

The Ultimate Evolution · C1386
3 weeks ago
Dayum! The silver title finally came to be. That replication ability is op as hell. View More
The Ultimate Evolution · C1380
1 month ago
What's the lie??????? I need to know!!!!! View More
The Devil's Cage · C1402
1 month ago

Pipps: Wow, so much thought going into one squeeze, only in TUE...

The Ultimate Evolution · C1373
1 month ago
Wow, so much thought going into one squeeze, only in TUE... View More
The Ultimate Evolution · C1373
1 month ago

MenaRi03: The first volume of the novel is done. The rights for publishing for the second volume needs to be done for the translation to continue.

Taming Master · C598
1 month ago

MenaRi03: The first volume of novel ends here... Hence did the translation. Once the rights of the second novel is taken over, we'll start the translation

Taming Master · C598
1 month ago
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