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When god created everything the Excess of his powers were left behind and after thousands of years humans have learned how to harness and use that power which they called "Mana". Unfortunately the human vessel was too small to inherit the complete powers of god so they separated it into three equal parts. The power to Destroy, to Change, and to Create. From these powers the three main jobs were born into the world. The people who inherited the power to destroy were called "knights", the ones who inherited the power to change were called "Sages", and lastly the ones who inherited the power to create, they were called "Dream Masters" The greatest dream master that ever existed ran out of his lifespan before he was able to achieve godhood so he decided to leave everything behind as an inheritance to his last disciple however, he would never have thought that this disciple of his would take thousands of years to inherit all he had, not only that but thousands of years later Knights, Sages, and Dream Masters have long disappeared from the world and became mere legends that people would tell their children. This is the story of Leo the last Dream Master and his path to godhood.
When a god creates a new world it is tainted by evil that wants to return everything back into nothingness. The Living beings must fight back and only when they cross this obstacle will their world be free of destruction. Unfortunately only a very small amount are able to survive so the gods have created something to give them a better chance. They created the Heavenly Market System! We follow the story of Lucca who was brought to this world on the brink of destruction, he must buy and sell for the sake of the world!
Isaac is brought into a world to save the small amount of humanity that is left in the face of giant beasts with a taste for human flesh.
A boy who has been bed sick since he was born finally reached the end of his life. Fortunately the gods decided to give him another chance and allowed him to be born into a new world. The only problem was that, he was not human! "I was only joking when i said that all I needed was a healthy body and that i didn't even need to be human OK? You didn't have to take it seriously!!" The frustrated scream of a little manta reverberated in the dark underwater world.
Draco_Vermiculus: Was this dropped or is it just haitus?The Hollow God · C25
Huskeylord: <Starting to spin a grindstone> Jealous? I'm not jealous. <starts sharpening my axe> Definitely not jealous.The Hollow God · C25
kvng_zeno: The end nooooooo author San pls updateThe Hollow God · C24
Sven123: So, if he can control every single part of himself, does that mean he can change the size of his "tail"?The Hollow God · C22
SangN123: Title still should be call Malik the Manta not Blanta XPThe Hollow God · C21
no_life: Finally he or she is back thanks for the chapter keep it up 👍👁👁👍The Hollow God · C21
_ophelia_girl: Oh God, I should say I really enjoy in reading this. I feel I'm in the book and everything is happen.. I can feel them. The writer make the design of novel very well I can feel I'm in his place and everything is happen for me...
Thank you writer, you done well👍👍The Hollow God
SiberianShepherd: I'm glad you updated I shall give you my last two stonesThe Hollow God · C21
Real_spam_bot: Is another chapter coming soon.The Hollow God · C20
REINCARNATOR: Read until latest chapters am quite satisfied with this one
Like the new non human mc and the unique turn of events give me a good unpredictable feeling and I like the way you get the world building process nothing feels too rush to give all the details about the world where the mc currently it,then for the characters
It's really hilarious 😂 for me the interactions something make me laugh and emotional and for the story development there more chapters to come am sure the dear author will surprise me with laughter and bits of drama keep up the good plot author san
Overall it's a good start.
Also my English is just my second language.The Hollow God
valiantxvillainous: Hello! I was told to give as honest of a review as possible so here goes!
Firstly, I’d like to say that the Hollow God was a fun and entertaining read, alive with action and an enigmatic and intriguing world. There’s always more to discover and a fight to be had. The descriptions are vivid and do their job well in feeding the reader’s imagination. The story is rife with action, and well-described battle scenes to keep you on edge. If you like cultivation novels with a fun and interesting spin, this could be the title for you.
With that being said there are a few things I’d like to bring up to the author. The quality of the first two chapters strands a strong contrast against the rest. While I applaud the author for improving the quality of his craft, I don’t think it’s a good thing to keep the introduction to the story subpar, as it’s extremely important in hooking the reader. Writing mistakes seem throughout are the most prevalent in these two chapters and I highly advise the author to go back and revise them.
Another thing about the first chapter, I’m a little unconvinced with the first person narration used here. The majority of the book is written in the third person and the shifts in perspective can be jarring. But beyond that, the first paragraph introduces a character who is detached both emotionally and physically from his environment and first-person narration excels at diving into the mind of the character. If this character is emotionally closed off due to his circumstances then he becomes difficult to emphasize with and you lose the advantage of using first-person narration. Not to mention, the character’s personality takes a rather drastic shift after this chapter so I don’t see how it’s necessary to write in the first person. With that being said, the characterization drastically improves after the first aforementioned chapters and is definitely something the reader can look forward to when reading this book.
The writing style, as mentioned before, is vivid and captivating. It’s fun to read and entices the imagination. However, the author often makes small mistakes(like frequently forgetting to capitalize) or using cheap gimmicks(such as employing asterisks for action) in his writing. I would really appreciate it if the author went back to try and correct more of these errors, as they are rather frequent (of course, I totally understand the occasional typo here and there but these small, obvious mistakes are extremely frequent).
The author also has the habit of info-dumping with large, intimidating paragraphs. I highly suggest to break these up in one way or another, as they can be both daunting to the reader and also boring. On top of these long info-dump paragraphs, they also often featured confusing run-on sentences as well. Please break up your sentences! And/or add commas to make them more legible. Luckily the author doesn’t do this extremely often but it does come up occasionally in the story.
As for the plot…I’m not really sure what the plot is. The general direction of the story feels extremely vague in the first few chapters. There’s a lack of conflict or overarching goals. It’s just fighting, powering up, exploring, rinse and repeat. I wish there was more of a plot direction from the very beginning of the novel that would have lured me farther into the story.
With that being said, the world is still fantastical and for many, this is enough of a good reason to pick up a book and turn to the next page. The characters are also cute and well-written so that’s something to enjoy as well. Kudos to the author and I wish him good luck with his writing!The Hollow God
TheLordOfOrcs: Can't you order it online most transport firms still workThe Hollow God · C20
Pons: Fucking hell I thought it said "so my mother died"The Hollow God · C20
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IWRobot: this is my brief analysis of the story so far(chapter 16),may contain minor spoilers,
Story - 5/5
Not a genius idea but it do it very well,reminds me an anime from past year Honzuki no genkokujou,one of the few isekai animes that are worth watching, has a simple idea but fulfills its purpose in the gorgeousness of its simplicity
Stability of updates - 5/5
Dumb thing to exists,take your time to do a great story
World building/background - 4.5/5
One of the most important aspect on a isekai is your world building and The only problem is because for a ocean you can do a lot of a things with it,the ocean has divisions,depending on which ocean you are(pacific,atlantic...) the vegetation and species of animals change,you can give a lot of details for describe the environment,it doesn't have to be credible but there are a lot of things to explore in the ocean,but despite that, the work gives you a very good feeling that the characters are in the ocean and that’s what matters.
Characters - 5/5
For me, the most important element of a story(so I'm going to write more here).I usually think that a story has good characters if you can imagine knowing them in real life or, if not, there is some deep reason behind it,and this work suceeds.
The crab has an explanation in its acts in chapters after its presentation,and the thing that really stands out is the MC,a person with an obsession with knowing how a healthy life works,seeing he discovering new things and the new world and exploring it is simply splendid,the most immersive thing I’ve ever seen in a story until is a character knowing new things,like a manga called Oyasumi Punnpun,a manga that has some of the deepest characters ever created, this manga has its highest points when the protagonist is getting to know the things of life,i felt at some times reading this like I felt reading Punpun,I hope this work reaches the level that was Punpun.
Enjoyment - 5/5
The most important thing when you reading something,this is a very fluid story just go read and enjoy.
Fluid like a wave on ocean.(haha)The Hollow God
Snoodle_Booper: Probably the best reason for why someone became an author lolThe Hollow God
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fazegamer777: Like it so far, just hope no turning human permanently.👌👌🙌🙌👍👍👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯👍👍👍👍✍️✍️🤟🙏🙏🙏🙏✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌The Hollow God
HRez: Unique concept really interesting start to a story you could say a breath of fresh air. Excited to find out what happens in the future of the characters development. Good stuff keep it up!The Hollow God
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