JefferyM

6mth

Commented

Dishonorable she sold herself and now is looking to renege.

ch 0 4 4. Tiptoeing to the last room

Forced To Marry The Devil : A Crazy Love Saga

Urban · go_kizy

JefferyM

6mth

Commented

Is this suppose to be a western fantasy? Because, killing a whole noble family for a daughter's murder, would be inviting rebellion, collective responsibility... Even killing a noble daughter without a trial, would be courting rebellion. I know in the east it was somewhat different, but the western names.. Even taking away the families nobility for her crime would court rebellion.

ch 0 1 The Start Of My End

I Only Care For Evil Duke's Child

Fantasy · I_am_Creator

JefferyM

6mth

Commented

The story king is dead, long live the king. He would not be a prince, in most hereditary monarchies accession is automatic upon death of the monarch. Unless there is some form of electoral process your MC woke up as the emperor not a prince. but then again it is your fantasy novel, but you should come up with some backstory to explain this anomaly..

Now that the Emperor is dead, the next in line for the throne would be Alexander Romanoff, i.e. him.

Reincarnated as an Imperial Prince

History · SorryImJustDiamond

JefferyM

6mth

Commented

The wife of an emperor is an empress...

Alexander Romanoff was the only son of Emperor Nicholas III and Queen Alexandra. The only boy in the royal family and has four sisters.

Reincarnated as an Imperial Prince

History · SorryImJustDiamond

JefferyM

6mth

Posted

The story seems nice and it is perfectly readable, but the writing is just so awkward. like, instead of using debit card, the author says gives the definition instead. I'm trying to get used to the awkwardness, but to me it just might not be worth it. I will give it a few more chapters...

Rebirth: Stubbornly Fufilling A Promise

Urban · Llaellen

JefferyM

6mth

Commented

Is Morgan a girl or a boy?

ch 0 8 Chapter 8: Concealment

Daddy! Come Home for Dinner!

General · Like Dawn

JefferyM

6mth

Commented

Maybe her grandfather realized she was most likely raped, therefore not to be blamed... like any decent person.

ch 0 7 IT'S OKAY TO PLAY AROUND

Chasing My CEO Husband

Urban · Sal_World

JefferyM

7mth

Commented

The story seems nice, but the incoherence gives me a headache. I would definitely be willing to give this author another try if their English improves or they get a good editor.

ch 0 2 Chapter (2): The CEO of River group

Her Hidden Marriage With Mr. Possessive CEO

Urban · Nazninimei

JefferyM

7mth

Commented

Does China, really allow employers to punish employees for not allowing themselves to be sexually assaulted?

ch 10 100% Luck

I Have Awesome Luck

Urban · Wu Xin 1008

JefferyM

7mth

Commented

Her brother is a mega simp.

ch 0 5 50% Luck

I Have Awesome Luck

Urban · Wu Xin 1008

JefferyM

7mth

Commented

It sounds like they only called him henpecked because he is henpecked.

ch 28 Chapter 28 Huo Yan's Grandparents

Rebirth of The Female Devil

Fantasy · DaoistStDV7U

JefferyM

7mth

Posted

Good story. The downside is the translation quality drops dramatically around chapter 64, so much so I had to drop. But, your threshold for headache inducing bad translation might be different then mine.

Thank you for Waiting, Mister Tang!

Urban · Yao Yao Xian Er

JefferyM

8mth

Commented

Don't you have to have matching blood types for a bone marrow transpant? And if so, then wouldn't it be impossible for the "real" daughter to be the real daughter?

ch 0 1 Rebirth and Return

Full-Level Rich Daughter Makes a Strong Comeback

Urban · Summer Powder

JefferyM

8mth

Commented

The highest denomination in the US $100 bill. 100 bills is quite a lot to carry around, especially in Americas card based economy. You can even get $1 lottery ticket with your card now days.

ch 0 1 10,000 Dollars for a Night (E)

Arranged Marriage: To Hear Your Voice

Urban · TheIllusionist

JefferyM

8mth

Commented

Shareholders are not responsible for corporate debt, unless the corporate veil is pierced, that is whole point in incorporation, limited liability...

ch 0 2 A Retard Getting Married

Mr. Ye's Wife is Sassy and Flirtatious

Urban · Midnight

JefferyM

8mth

Commented

I am assuming, sense they share the same last name, that half-sister and not stepsister, right? I know it a common mistake in Asian translations.

ch 0 1 A Retard and a Cripple, a Perfect Match!

Mr. Ye's Wife is Sassy and Flirtatious

Urban · Midnight

JefferyM

11mth

Commented

Maybe a grand niece?

Shen Yan saw Shen Xue's upset look. Although Shen Xue wasn't directly related to Shen Yu, she was still his granddaughter.

My Genius Sister is Only Seven!?

Urban · Tong Tong

JefferyM

11mth

Commented

Badly needs an editor, not unreadable, but about two notches from it.

ch 0 1 Pitiful Death..(Edited)

ETERNAL LOVE : A LOVE STORY

Fantasy · Kamlyn

JefferyM

11mth

Commented

What is wrong with this girl? no round trip ticket or explanation? showing any trust for someone she knows is a scam bag scammer? Stupid ditz would be my generous evaluation.

ch 0 8 HIS RETURN 1

I MARRIED A HEARTLESS BILLIONAIRE

Urban · Kourtney_Sspears

JefferyM

1yr

Commented

Can he opt out of the test by resigning ? If not a 90% causality rate for mages seems stupidly high. It would make recruitment hard, and is really bad if magical ability is hereditary.

ch 0 4 Death all around

Reborn as God: The strongest system

Fantasy · PillGrandCreator

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Thank you for Waiting, Mister Tang!

Full-Level Rich Daughter Makes a Strong Comeback

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Mr. Ye's Wife is Sassy and Flirtatious

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