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  • Lorian Ellins [Dropped]

    Lorian Ellins [Dropped]

    Fantasy

    Lorian found himself in the medieval European style world, thinking he went back in time. However, upon inquiring, he realized history, customs and as such were different. This was a whole new world he knew nothing about. A place where powerful were respected and feared, a place where monsters and different races existed. After a lucky encounter, Lorian manages to secure a job, home and survival. However, the world is large and ready to be explored. Lorian won't be lost in mediocrity. This is his destiny. Nonetheless, everyone starts from a low point in life. Fast growth and OPness seemed impossible even with the help of system. , Life is neither game nor a bunch of numbers. It's far more complex and unpredictable. We don't know where we stand in the future, or is there even future prepared for us? I always thought that overused motto in wuxia novels, '' I want to control my destiny '' was cliche and we had less control over our lives as they are dictated by many other factors. This world taught me otherwise, thus this place shall be my new beginning. '

  • I reincarnated into a bat (Dropped)

    I reincarnated into a bat (Dropped)

    Magical Realism

    His only wish is to find a way to turn back into a human and live a life without regrets. Book cover artist: Jeko98

  • Underworld Emissary

    Underworld Emissary

    Fantasy

    This is the story of the depraved fiend who sold his soul for the power for revenge. For bringing justice to himself, he will do anything.

  • High L☼rd Calamity [Dropped]

    High L☼rd Calamity [Dropped]

    Fantasy

    In the sea of stars, the experts gather. Their origins, mindset, and experiences differ, but they have something in common - they all speak the language of power. The absolute might, that nothing can chain has the power to silence everything. In all eras, there were always people who ruled and those, who were ruled. Only the mightiest can set these laws and control others and their own fate. The path of the sovereign is filled with blood and corpses. Calamity was neither the fiercest nor mightiest man to have lived. He was born the day his family was massacred, hence his name. His name held another meaning, the hope, that one day he would return as a calamity to his enemies. Considering his talents and background, he reached unimaginable heights and fulfilled his family's last wish. Unfortunately, his end wasn't pleasant. He died in the hands of junior, whose realm was lower than his. He had worked harder than others, yet it never truly made up for the gap between him and those who never lacked the care of mighty experts and had access to limitless cultivation resources. Still, at the peak of his life, he was pretty strong, but never did he have time to settle down and enjoy what he had. He had come that far with undying persistence and unshakable willpower in the first place, but...it still wasn't enough. Before his soul was destroyed along with his body, he resolutely decided to give everything up and flee for his life, as he escaped with the secret technique, towards an unknown destination. As fate would have it, the luck was on his side this time, as he managed to successfully give himself the second chance. Will the scenario repeat itself, or will he walk upon the path of the sovereign in this life? God only knows...

  • Destiny Cultivator

    Destiny Cultivator

    Martial Arts

    Some people are born with silver spoons in their mouths, while others not. People aren't born equal. From birth, they are set apart from each other by destiny... There are some individuals, however, whose fate cannot be measured even by heavens. They are not born as oddities. They become...destiny cultivators, the devourers of destiny. Ren was born with thin, fragile meridians. Not to mention having a talent at cultivation, he was diagnosed to not live a day past 40 years. Humiliated, beaten, despised...he was fated to die a mortal, but everything changed that day, the day of his awakening. Join the journey of Ren, who changes his fate by killing and devouring the destiny of people, who wouldn't even consider him an ant in the past. PS: I don't own the cover. I got it from here -->https://www.pinterest.com/pin/488640628301758022/

Moments

generic petty characters, de ja vu incurring sentiments, there's nothing new, sigh... View More
Assassination System · C2
3 months ago
oh ****. another plot hole. sect leader or whatever attacked trash mc and he still lives. spilling litters of blood doesn't cover the difference, knowing, 1 realm difference in these sorts of novels is immense. Besides, if attack is dealt out of anger, there's no way they would hold back, so he shouldn't have lived. third plot hole, I'm out. Sigh... View More
Assassination System · C1
3 months ago
the first chapter and two plot-holes already, one, mc's described as timid and cowardly by nature, but the manner of his death contradicts it. Second, if his father is extremely strong, why does he have trash talent? For obvious purposes...Still, I think it's too much of a waste to abandon it so soon, so I'll give it a chance. If third thing pops up that doesn't make sense, I'm out. Sigh... View More
Assassination System · C1
3 months ago
...as long as you're happy :D It seems I was wrong this time. Now that I think about it, some quality tsukkomi isn't that bad to read (in which I mean yours). I was just fed up with people trying to act smart by nitpicking about things. Writing 'perfectly' is quite impossible, such things do not exist. If one wants, everything can be criticizable. I felt you were acting too smart, but then I realized, there are some people who act smart and ARE smart. As a latter case, plus as many people appear to agree with you, who am I to tell you what to do. I was just mildly dissatisfied with something else, which I complained about in the wrong place. Sorry for wasting your time :D Keep up the tsukkomis, if it's like stress relief to you write as much as you want! :D View More

Multipartite: I may indeed be suffering the effects of a cognitive bias(?) I cannot currently find the name of, in which (to paraphrase) the inherent quality of specific things I'm not familiar with is treated by me as better than that of things I am sufficiently-familiar-with-to-recognise-errors-in.
While this may have affected the intensity of my emotions (and my likelihood of reading chapters past this one), I have hopefully avoided making any thus-influenced comments regarding the work or its author, my comments staying on the level of specific content-targeted tsukkomis.

The appropriateness of pouring it out and the place:
So far, other than asking questions about things I'm curious about, my main reason thus far to open chapters' comments sections has been to tsukkomi something that bothered me, whether a story part that seems to make no sense or a character choice that seems to make no sense (which I believe I understand to often be intentional on the part of the author, as with choices of low-competence cannon fodder characters).
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The relief I feel after a tsukkomi is the same as the relief I feel when I read that someone else has already made the same tsukkomi (and thus no reason for me to--I instead tend to Like those comments, and smile when others Like or reply with agreement or food-for-thought to my comments). As an example, the doubts about cancer cells dying from the methods used to prevent new cancer. ((In chemotherapy, you don't kill cancer cells by making all your cells healthier, you kill them by making all your cells sicker with poison and letting the fast-proliferating ones bear the brunt...))
In websites in which I would have to register to comment, I feel an uncomfortable feeling from not sharing such reactions with others.
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'place' versus 'pouring':
If pouring is appropriate, but the place is not, then I am troubled as to the recommended venue--it does not seem appropriate to me to grab a non-reader, start a lengthy explanation of context, then finish by explaining why a part made me want to tsukkomi. (In contrast with commiserating with others whom I know have also just read the same chapter.)
If the pouring itself is appropriate, then I am put in mind of how using a punching bag is said to be a bad way to process anger, because of strengthening the association between discomfort and violent impulses. I am troubled if my reactions and comments become harsher and more unpleasant for others to read over time, fed by the feeling of relief I feel when I write them.
(As such, I have aimed to think seriously and thoroughly about your expressed concerns (especially imagining that likely others have felt the same and said nothing) and my own thought processes.)

Having thought about and written about my own thought processes, may I ask for your current thoughts and if you have suggestions for what my outlook should be?

Low Dimensional Game · C12
10 months ago
Umm, I respect your professionalism, but this isn't the place to pour it out. I mean you can, but it looks really lame. I mean, you can't expect the writers of mecha novels to be full-fledged mechanics, right? Just like that. It's stupid. This is clearly a fantasy story and fantasy means bull****ting. Yeah, it must be painful to read for those who are well versed in the topic the author is bull****ting about...but, there's no helping it, I guess. You can't make everyone happy. At least, some people will buy it or just pretend to believe it, or simply ignore it, to enjoy the story. View More

Multipartite: This is my (career) field, so is a bit painful to read described here.

Aside from "I found the very first human whose parents weren't humans!" (How are you even drawing the line?):

"I made mouse-human hybrid DNA, amplified it with PCR, then made blood from it and injected it into mice! Guess what happened!?"

"Wait, mammal genomes have lots of chromosomes and billions of base pairs, PCR can only amplify up to fifty thousand base pairs in a sequence at most, how did you..? And how did you even 'make blood' from that in vitro DNA, inject two of each chromosome somehow into a progenitor cell with its DNA removed somehow? That's something we can't even do yet with cloned animals though..? No, that aside, I assume it died from a massive immune system rejection of the foreign proteins, like when you transfuse an O-minus blood type person with AB-plus blood?"

"Not just died, it immediately EXPLODED!"

"...Are you sure you didn't inject /too much/ blood? How many millilitres into one mouse are we talking about, here?"

Low Dimensional Game · C12
10 months ago
I like how people call MC dumb, but if these people were in his shoes, I bet 99%, oh no, at least 99.9% would be dead a couple of times until now. (the main reason being the lack of plot armor) but seriously, is every one that smart, or is it just easy to judge from the perspective of a bystander? Probably the latter... View More
When A Mage Revolts · C123
10 months ago
GOD STOLE HIS BALLLLLLLS!!! SHAMELESS!!! View More
Profane Prince of Domination · C1
10 months ago
as calm as a eunuch in the whorehouse...that was literally the best simile I've ever heard! View More
When A Mage Revolts · C6
10 months ago
Reading Status: C50
If this story claims to be the second in terms of entertainment, none can say they are the first!
It's not like I like this novel or anything, baka~ View More
Black Tech Internet Cafe System
10 months ago

SubtomicLine80: If You Want To Read , Come Back Tomorrow

Black Tech Internet Cafe System · C50
10 months ago
Reading Status: C25
Incredible! This my fucking cup of tea! Finally! I've watched and read so much before I knew it, I became picky about what to read, but this one didn't disappoint me.
Also, I hope this bunch of arrogant young masters will taste what it's like to play dark souls and bloodborne, please include this in the plot, author-Sama! View More
Black Tech Internet Cafe System
11 months ago
thanks for reading! View More

Grum: Thx for the chapter!

Destiny Cultivator · C3
11 months ago
When I was writing, I thought about that, on one hand, there is unbendable stereotypical wuxia protagonist, on the other hand, the absurdity of it. The belief stems from something, right? It can be a personal experience or conclusion one comes to after overthinking. I decided to build MC's character from bitter experience. Showing weakness on a personal scale seems like a taboo for martial novel heroes, but if it doesn't have a base, it kinda appears one dimensional. I value realism in fictional novels. Let's look from MC's POV. Imagine someone tormenting you for something petty. You will hate them and the more they step on you, the harder you will struggle, but if it goes on for infinity, you will desire for it all to end! In MC's case, his innermost thoughts burst out when he was at his weakest, laying them out in the open. What follows is growth in character. I know, I might have violated wuxia novels unwritten rule to never kneel in the face of power! But I'll let this be one and only exception and the base of his personality. Thanks for pointing out your thoughts, I appreciate it. View More

GoddessBry: Eeeerrrmmm... why would he apologize? Even I know someone as stupid as her wouldn't actually do it. I'm disappointed... 😥

Destiny Cultivator · C1
11 months ago

FagBuddha: Plot armour comes with free toothpaste and toothbrush

Sovereign of the Karmic System · C3
11 months ago
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Underworld Emissary
11 months ago

rolov: it’s almost like he has one enemy throughout the whole story who keeps changing his name and cultivation, but never his mind-set... john meets the main character, insults him, coverts his girlfriend, then threaten him with the power of his sect, john get beaten up, then call his senior Joe, Joe he gets beaten up, the calls his father: sect elder, the sect gets involved, main character flees, returns and destroys the sect, but wait, the sect in under the protection of John who is from higher sect, he also has a senior named joe, whose father is the sect leader, ohhhh dear

Ancient Godly Monarch
11 months ago
glad you like the story. :D There is no set schedule for the releases, as I'm just writing as a hobby. Roughly though, at least there'll be 1 chapter in a week at lowest. There's no exact date. View More

cherryfire89: How often is the release of chapter ? At the moment, I really like this story, it is well written

High L☼rd Calamity [Dropped] · C13
11 months ago
Reading Status: C10
Hope you guys like it. It's my first try at writing Wuxia genre LN. I've been a fan of this genre and admiring martial world concept for quite a while now. Let's see how it goes. View More
High L☼rd Calamity [Dropped]
12 months ago
It's not definite. All I know is, that the focus will be on skills, world-building, and relationships development for a while. View More

MegamanXcross7: So, how many chapters are we away from seeing another evolution/advancement?

I reincarnated into a bat (Dropped) · C21
1 year ago
I'm happy to see your story so high up in the ranks! View More
Rise of The Undead Legion · C1
1 year ago

Leydig: The church must be eradicated with the power of the bat god the only true god

I reincarnated into a bat (Dropped) · C18
1 year ago
Lurkers are weak against the light element View More

Solomon369: How did the R2 priest respond to an attack from an R3 creature? And why are religions in other worlds always shady? Thanks for the chapters!

I reincarnated into a bat (Dropped) · C17
1 year ago
Barely 5 chapters into the story and there's already so much nonsense. MC was supposed to be badass on earth, but once he comes in the cultivation world, his IQ plummets. Not only did he immediately announce his strength upon recovery, not bothering to go low key, but he also purposely offended Li Kun. He even says that he had from his eyes he read he's the type of person that can use any unscrupulous methods to achieve his goal. What bull****, MC acts like he knows he has some plot armor and enemies are just queuing up to get their ass whooped. Also, he mercilessly hurts his family without hesitation. What a bastard. I love cultivation novels, but unfortunately, their quality is just like vomit that was eaten, then vomited and again and again, recycled garbage... View More
War Sovereign Soaring The Heavens · C5
1 year ago
Yay. Thanks for reading! View More

Solomon369: Goodbye tiny bat nipples. And thanks for the chapter!

I reincarnated into a bat (Dropped) · C13
1 year ago
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Underworld Emissary
1 year ago
The first chapter and already bull****ting. Well, bull****ting's fine in fantasy novels, but illogical bull**** is hard to stomach. For instance, would you believe if someone told you to stock up your food, and some kind of virus is spreading, even if it was the closest person saying this? Nobody in the right mind would, and even if someone believed, he wouldn't actually go out that very day and buy weeks' worth of food. That's just, well, bull****! View More
Apocalypse Meltdown · C1
1 year ago
Reading Status: C44
Thou shall expect overpowered, badass villains in this story, lots of cool and awesome moments, beautiful deaths and the progressive growth of the MC. View More
Lorian Ellins [Dropped]
1 year ago

Mainwave: hi author i really enjoyed your writting. please continue the story is trully good until now. i will wait the next chapter to enjoy it tomorrow please continue this story to the end of it.

Lorian Ellins [Dropped]
1 year ago

Protovail: Really enjoying the novel so far and while there have been some cases that are awkward or weird, they’re not story breaking. It’s easy to tell the author has put in a lot of work for the novel and my only gripe is that there are more chapters and a more stable release. Would definitely recommend to all of those who don’t mind if a MC doesn’t become OP within a short amount of time. Keep up the good work author and I look forward to reading more.

Lorian Ellins [Dropped]
1 year ago

Mainwave: first i am childish i know sorry. mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeee

Lorian Ellins [Dropped]
1 year ago
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