Zeph

1yr

Replied to dimv

Does a character really require a love interest?

ch 366 Lessons of History

Zeph

1yr

Commented

Show, don’t tell. This kind of statement dampens the mystery surrounding their future relationship. We already knew there might be potential conflict based on previous writing, now it’s solidified.

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Zeph

1yr

Commented

Doesn’t seems likely seeing as he literally has to scan his surroundings to “see”.

Especially because he was so focused, Nial didn't even realize that there were more than a hundred dead-tired, and injured young Originals lying on the ground around the portal.

Zeph

1yr

Commented

Sounds safe and totally not endangering your prodigies… again.

The military didn't provide many pieces of information. Rather, they wanted the participants of the Teradan military camp to figure out everything by themselves.

Zeph

1yr

Commented

Really? No one ever came up with this conclusion? Doesn’t make sense. Also, that’s all he’s giving her in terms of information? That’s like nothing.

Miranda chose to believe Nial's words. There was no reason to do so, but if she were to be honest with herself, it was the first time a theory about the dungeon portal's existence and creation made somewhat sense.

Odyssey of the Blind God

Fantasy · HideousGrain

Zeph

1yr

Commented

I don’t know how many times this needs to be mentioned, these chapters feel like word padding.

Yet, his physical strength had been enhanced to a much higher state owing to the Curse he had bound to his mana core.

Odyssey of the Blind God

Fantasy · HideousGrain

Zeph

1yr

Commented

Adopted?

That was because my mother ad-...I mean, when my mother and I lived in a different shelter I learned a lot.

Odyssey of the Blind God

Fantasy · HideousGrain

Zeph

1yr

Commented

Just dump them out if you need space later, like what?

But after thinking about it, it was likely for them to encounter a few dozen groups of monsters on their way to find the hidden basement of the Teradan military camp.

Odyssey of the Blind God

Fantasy · HideousGrain

Zeph

1yr

Commented

This entire chapter could be summed up in a couple of words: ”I’m glad I had the procedure done, my past self would struggle/die”.

ch 200 Chapter 200 – Accumulated Power

Sword God in a World of Magic

Fantasy · Warmaisach

Zeph

1yr

Replied to CelestialFaith

I’ve felt the same way.

ch 144 Chapter 144 – The Night

Sword God in a World of Magic

Fantasy · Warmaisach

Zeph

1yr

Commented

Kai?

However, they had to leave the crater and return to the Labyrinth sooner or later — not only to escape the black water, but also because there was nothing to hide behind on this vast muddy plain. If any flying Nightmare Creature decided to attack them from above, the cohort would have no defense against it.

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

Zeph

1yr

Replied to Unchanging

Does that justify killing another student?

'Don't let your past ruin your future.'

Sword God in a World of Magic

Fantasy · Warmaisach

Zeph

1yr

Commented

I don’t like the MC tbh. Hoping he gets beat to death.

ch 124 Chapter 124 – Crossroads

Sword God in a World of Magic

Fantasy · Warmaisach

Zeph

1yr

Replied to Cultured_Daoist

Kira doesn't have that ability.

Neither of them was tired, but they did not go back to the cave and remain on the platform. Kira needed to expel the pollution on her body and Zatiel had to wait for Ezequiel and Sophia.