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This story is just all over the place.
An editor would be a serious help, but that wouldn't fix basic giant plot holes in even the first chapters.

After he dies helping a woman getting robbed (by getting stabbed in the chest) he gets picked up by some entity that basically finds his death soo praiseworthy and noble that they want to grant him another life. But not before he gets a chance to see if he could have changed something about dying by doing things differently.
He is shown another reality where he still dies (after
trying to distract one of the robbers by throwing his soup and so he gets beaten and THEN stabbed) and the situation is basically the same.
The entity then says that the second death was way less prayseworthy (mind you, he just did one thing differently hoping to get a better outcome. Beginning, end and even his intent in the situation stay the same).
thus, for his great deed, our hero is rewarded with rebirth in a different world we do not get information about yet. As he wishes to be a shelter for the ones in need and a helper to the weak etc. (typical nice guy stuff) the entity also grants him the carriage of immortality (also without info to go on).

our MC the awakes in a prairie next to his carriage pulled by a donkey. By looking into the carriage further he finds out that it provides him wiht basic seeds and that he can create stuff from the plants he inputs. He then leaves his carriage in the wilderness to go around on foot to find stuff for his carriage, is completely oblivious to not knowing this new world and its creatures, finds his first plants and starts cultivating them where he arrived (yes, he literally makes a field in the wild next to his carriage with his donkey just chilling there).
what he hasn't discovered is that he has been spotted by a goblin who gets his friends to rob the MC in the night. They get eaten by wolves in said night, though and only the first goblin survives to ask the MC for help. In the next days the mc helps the goblin get better and then the goblin kinda stays and learns from/helps the mc make his little farm in the wild.
The mc 'fortifies' his camp somehow though it is not elaborated at all on how anything really looks and what dimensions it has besides the carriage.
then his goblin gets some friends because their village has been raided by a monster and the mc lets them stay but also wants them to work for food (which is fine), so now our mc lives with 13 Goblins who peacefully and instantly adapt to helping him do fieldwork which they have never done before. This includes pregnant goblins and 'mc-is-a-virgin' joke.
his first goblin casually ranks up into a class which doesn't seem to have existed previously but no reason or reaction is given. But the goblin can talk now and calls him master.
He also thells the mc about a human village a week away that the goblins 'have traded with' and the mc decides to go there 'when he has enough resources stocked'. Those amount to cheap medicinal pills he can make with his carriage from the stuff he has planted.

There is some kind of leveling system for the carriage and the world has some kind of cultivation system that is just shortly mentioned and quite convoluted. The mc seems to have to gain points but he doesn't get to really know how. He seems to start at the first level of cultivation but has never fought and doesn't get any technique.

After a week of farming and stuff the mc leaves his goblins to care for the plants and goes to the human village. As he leaves the goblin tells him that they want to go to their old village to look for usable stuff and he reacts by thinking that he is goink go work them harder wen he gets back. I'm mentioning this because i raised an eyebrow here as this is a crass break from the mc's supposed nice character.
and then he instantly goes to the human village and on gets asked who he is, keeps silent for some reason and BEATS THE FIRST GUY THAT ATTACKS HIM BY COPYING WHAT THEY DO. View More
Carriage of Immortality
4 months ago

I_Miss_You_Mom: rejects loving things when he just taken oit grasshopper from there??

Low Dimensional Game · C1
6 months ago

ThrustThunder: If you'd like some suggestions of my favorite Novels you can find on Novelupdates:
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The Games We Play by Ryuugi (Kid gains power of Videogame Protagonist, Min/max's his skills. Must pretend to be Badass Mafia Boss to outsmart Godly enemies. The most Cunning/Crafty MC I've read in a long time.)2015
Dragonborn Saga by Don_Dokhmesy (Guy reborn into a overly Modded VR Skyrim World, Becomes Lord of Immersion!)2018
A Monster Who Levels Up (Guy transforms into Monsters as his trait, Uses their unique skills to become Op/Rich)2017
The Novel's Extra (Same Author as MWLU about Author who is trapped in his own Novel by a Ghost Writer, must make himself Plot Relevant to gain Exp) 2018
The World Turned into a Game After I Woke up (Guy's World gains Gaming System, Gets killed so much he returns to the past, Shameless looting ensues! Fast food)2017
Worth the Candle by Cthulhuraejepsen (Kid appears in a Battle Royal based of the D&D World he created, gets skillsheet, ruminates on tropes)2017
The City of Terror (Guy wakes up with a status screen in a fever dream city where it's kill or be killed by Chinese monsters of lore, becomes OP)2016
Seoul Station’s Necromancer (Guy returns from conquering a System World to find it has bleed into his own World, becomes OP)2016
The Arcane Emperor (Guy accidently transports himself to Game System World, Gets OP Learning class) 2013
Shadow Hack (Guy gets Shadow Clones to XP grind for him, becomes more OP every chapter)2017
Leveling Up And Becoming Undefeatable (NEET Reincarnated with a System that gives the Skills of Other Wuxia Protagonists, junk food writing at it's most shameless)2013
Invincible Level Up (Begins exactly as LUaBU, but takes a more serious World building approach)2012
Godly Model Creator (Kid in Superpower World uses ability to copy others skills to become OP, Kills his enemies!)2013
The Strongest Gene (Guy reincarnates to World of genetic modification with cheat skill of Luck. Creative face slapping abounds)2017
Rebirth of the Thief Who Roamed the World (Guy regresses and uses VRMMO to get revenge on enemies by creating an Empire of Brothers-in-Arms funded by Shameless looting. OG of it's Genre)2010
Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God (Rips off Rebirth heavily, but the release rate is exemplary and I've commented on almost every chapter)2015
Night Ranger (Transferred into a D&D VRMMORPG, Guy must gain Power before the Apocalypse happens)2015
Advent of the Archmage (Same as Night Ranger but more Magic Driven)2016
Warlock of the Magus World (Genius with a Biochip reincarnates into the wizard world, Devours his enemies. The best example of a *Ruthless* MC I've ever read)2015
The Wizard World (Chip story that has very detailed set pieces, like reading a vivid Lucid dream)2012
Age of Adepts (Another Wizard chip story about a truly guileful MC)2016
When A Mage Revolts (Guy reincarnates with a system that trolls him, eventually becomes the Hero of all persecuted Mages)2016
The Book Eating Magician (Guy's hand turns into a Grimoire that can eat books to learn magic)2017
Tales of Demons and Gods (Mad Snail's Novel, turned Manga, turned Anime about a regressor who uses his Advanced knowledge to become rich and slap faces)2015
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Black Tech Internet Cafe System · C1
6 months ago

Permotion: I now read till chapter 100, so the ending of the first book. Before reading this I already thought I found a few of the better novels and thought these absolute cliche cultivation novels absolutely disgusting. But compared to this, the majority of them cannot even be called something to read. Even if I just read about 100 novels and 1000 books in my life, far from knowing everything I would like, I can say for sure that this novel is in the upper 0.5%. In some novels, 100 chapters feel like eternity, simply because they are tedious and some people say "The story gets good from 200 onwards". Well, that just means that these 200 chapter are bad. In some other novels, 100 chapter feels like nothing because the story is good, easy to read and has hundreds of chapters anyway. But in this novel, these 100 chapters included story development, character development and especially FEELINGS others could only try to get across.

Do your best, author. I won't say your best is enough, cause you know that humans never have enough, but your best - is the best.

Legend of the Empyrean Blacksmith
9 months ago

felixf3600: Am i the only one who actually understands the way yi yun is behaving? The author is writing him to character. Yes he could trounce everyone there now but since the beginning he is not one to boast and reveal his strenght or attack first. He has been portrayed as a level headed guy.

Also as its been stated many times already, he does not want to disrupt the coronation. As we can tell from the writing yi yun could have mopped the floor with the person who caged him but he didnt becuase of that.

Why do some readers expect him to act in a different way from before?

True Martial World · C1538
10 months ago

q00u: Faxul: "Come with me. I found something."
Cinemasins: "You better take a look at this!"
[*DING!*]

World Domination System · C258
10 months ago
That's sad! Will you continue posting elsewhere? This story is too good to end yet! View More
Legend of the Perfect Emperor · C0
1 year ago
True View More

jati: I like MC who doesn't care too much about face..
Unlike typical xianxia MC..

The Legend of Futian · C52
1 year ago
Exp View More
The Legend of Futian · C52
1 year ago
Gonna be fun to read ^^ View More

Zacc: Poor foolish nobles. How could they not see this coming. Anyway now they will resist and be slaughtered by these seemingly weak women :D

Release That Witch · C866
1 year ago

Zacc: Poor foolish nobles. How could they not see this coming. Anyway now they will resist and be slaughtered by these seemingly weak women :D

Release That Witch · C866
1 year ago
Exp View More
Release That Witch · C866
1 year ago
Awesome thought to put a glossary here! Thx a lot on behalf of all readers that get confused by the charging names of planes and stuff between novels ^^ View More
Legend of the Perfect Emperor · C0
1 year ago
Nicely written, go on just like that, mate ^^
...maybe faster releases xD View More
The 7 Realms (Book 2) · C0
1 year ago
XP ^^ View More

Genesys: xp

History's Number 1 Founder · C648
1 year ago
Exp View More
The Legend of Futian · C33
1 year ago
Exp View More
Shadow Hack · C265
1 year ago
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