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  • Another world lls

    Another world lls

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    When the universe ends and you are given the option to choose your next life, what options would you take ... Taking into account that you can pay for it. My level of English is not enough to write a novel, so I've translated it with the google translator, so if you see some strange word or sentence, tell me to keep it in mind for the future.

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Al principio yo también tenia pensado hacerlo crecer cuando tenia alrededor de 15 años, pero luego me di cuenta de que Goku creció alrededor de los 17 o 18 años, por lo que lo atrase. View More

oscar1234: cuando va a crecer en db eran par de años par de años luego otro par decídete por favor buena historia

Another world lls · C121
1 week ago
I understand that it may sound a bit crazy to choose the sacred attribute, when Lilith is a demon, but keep in mind that the additional damage is for attacks. So as long as I do not decide to attack Lilith with lightning, she will be fine ... Besides that because she is a demon does not mean that she is evil ... In general, that the sacred attribute will not affect her dual cultivation with Lilith. View More

SilentByakko: So, you are telling me that, even though he said he wanted to get yang to be useful to his fiancé(assumably through dual cultivation), who happens to be a f*cking succubus demon, he still chose a sacred yang?!?!?!?!

Another world lls · C120
2 weeks ago

SilentByakko: So, you are telling me that, even though he said he wanted to get yang to be useful to his fiancé(assumably through dual cultivation), who happens to be a f*cking succubus demon, he still chose a sacred yang?!?!?!?!

Another world lls · C120
2 weeks ago
Please continue. View More
Fate Factory: A Certain Emiya in Fantasy Harvest Moon · C3
2 weeks ago
Although what you say is true, in the end, I made this decision to make known that the lineages in my novel have character and lineages cannot be added just like that. And coming from such a 'proud' lineage, it is enough that he left some properties like longevity among a few other things. View More

Bibon: I kinda dont get why the demon blood was basically removed it would have been a great use for them and it made him unique compared to other sayians

Another world lls · C103
3 weeks ago

Bibon: Couldn't he In theory "Combine" some of those Skills together to "free" up some space might not be much but could be enough to give him enough room to start growing the Soul?

Also why did you pretty much completely remove the Demon Bloodline? It was Fun to see and have even more so with that Bone Spike on his Tail to use as a weapon and what not.

Another world lls · C118
3 weeks ago
The truth is that this is what will happen in future chapters. View More

Bibon: Couldn't he In theory "Combine" some of those Skills together to "free" up some space might not be much but could be enough to give him enough room to start growing the Soul?

Also why did you pretty much completely remove the Demon Bloodline? It was Fun to see and have even more so with that Bone Spike on his Tail to use as a weapon and what not.

Another world lls · C118
3 weeks ago
You may be right on some points, but with the decisions of the MC at that time, I wanted to demonstrate the personality of the MC in his previous life. A cowardly and insecure person, a passive person who doesn't take a risk ... That's why he had so few points of karma, since he never struggled to do something good. I know that your decisions are not the best, but your decisions at that time are what define the MC before you reincarnate. View More

Zeno: The reason why he does not choose dragon ball is stupid in my opinion, when you get to that world, you look for the dragon balls and ask him the desire to trust you, unlimited bravery! The most logical reason was the danger he represents. Zeno-sama´´ since if you don't like it, you could eliminate it, the world of dragon ball is the best option to reincarnate for anyone, you just have to find the spheres and make your wish, the only worrying thing is ´´Zeno-sama´´ ´, although that can be solved with some desires, become super strong and create a technique that resists the elimination of ´´zeno-sama´´, or simply become stronger than him, even if it takes thousands of years.

Another world lls · C2
3 weeks ago
I can't promise you anything, since I have my own plans for those issues in the future. But I don't deny that I can feel influenced and change some things ... I don't promise anything, don't get your hopes up. Greetings. View More

DragonGodSmith3000: I believe this should also help with super sayian which should naturally unlock the Lightning element from the bloodline I really hope you use it to it’s full
Potential ss2 basically turns ppl into flash without needing to run theoretically you should be able to harness that escaping ki that’s turned elemental ki into attacks that don’t waste your energy especially after its become a form that can be sustained indefinitely also I hope his energy isn’t the generic blue as everyone should have different energy colors I’d definitely like to see red purple or gold. I wonder is their a way for mc to unlock legendary super sayian in the shop by acquiring it or in this one novel with twins the mc is purifying his energy veins to become like Broly as he’s born with a pure body which allows him to have no bottlenecks an grow faster etc

Another world lls · C117
4 weeks ago

DragonGodSmith3000: I believe this should also help with super sayian which should naturally unlock the Lightning element from the bloodline I really hope you use it to it’s full
Potential ss2 basically turns ppl into flash without needing to run theoretically you should be able to harness that escaping ki that’s turned elemental ki into attacks that don’t waste your energy especially after its become a form that can be sustained indefinitely also I hope his energy isn’t the generic blue as everyone should have different energy colors I’d definitely like to see red purple or gold. I wonder is their a way for mc to unlock legendary super sayian in the shop by acquiring it or in this one novel with twins the mc is purifying his energy veins to become like Broly as he’s born with a pure body which allows him to have no bottlenecks an grow faster etc

Another world lls · C117
4 weeks ago
It seems that you have not yet understood that this is a very different version of lls ... Because in the original novel it follows that rule, in my version it is not like that ... Besides that the MC seems very strong, it is also not something so exaggerated as Yue Yang. Keep in mind that in my story there are different world rules ... The grimoires are different from the original version itself, they do not have any sort of separate classification for strength as in the original. View More

WolfLord: So in that case the original MC was never needed so he wasn't born

Another world lls · C114
1 month ago

WolfLord: So in that case the original MC was never needed so he wasn't born

Another world lls · C114
1 month ago
Unfortunately it will still take a year or two to grow ... but I will try to make time pass quickly ... View More

Mask: Quick question, when the MC will grow ?

Another world lls · C114
1 month ago

Mask: Quick question, when the MC will grow ?

Another world lls · C114
1 month ago

WolfLord: I've been meaning to ask what's the timeline in this long live summons world is it after the original MC or is it just one where the original MC was never needed because the original MC was someone from the world tree and only male get born with his powers when they needed and if that's the case are any of the original characters running around

Another world lls · C114
1 month ago
The truth is that the timeline has nothing to do with the original novel, since the MC expressly asked the celestial office worker to reincarnate him, to reincarnate him in a time of peace ... To express it in some way.

So in the world of lls that I am writing, there will be no great ploy to destroy the world or anything like that.

Although later, I suppose that I will add some kind of dangerous situation so that the MC has some kind of pressure on his adventure. View More

WolfLord: I've been meaning to ask what's the timeline in this long live summons world is it after the original MC or is it just one where the original MC was never needed because the original MC was someone from the world tree and only male get born with his powers when they needed and if that's the case are any of the original characters running around

Another world lls · C114
1 month ago
No, he will only stay as an Ozaru overgrown for this occasion ... View More

MrPoproly: yeah i know , but will he transform now for the tribulation

Another world lls · C113
1 month ago

MrPoproly: yeah i know , but will he transform now for the tribulation

Another world lls · C113
1 month ago
The truth is that on this occasion, he accessed the Ikari state as Broly in his last movie, at least that's what I tried to emulate that time.

This time, the goat is due to excess energy from the moon that Luna has transferred to it ... It is too much energy from the moon for a normal transformation in Ozaru, but it is still little energy from the moon to go SSJ4 ... View More

DragonGodSmith3000: Technically he already has when he condensed his ape form but he had no control over it as it was way stronger then the regular ape form

Another world lls · C113
1 month ago

DragonGodSmith3000: Technically he already has when he condensed his ape form but he had no control over it as it was way stronger then the regular ape form

Another world lls · C113
1 month ago
unfortunately not yet. View More

MrPoproly: Thanks for the chap. will he go ssj4?

Another world lls · C113
1 month ago

MrPoproly: Thanks for the chap. will he go ssj4?

Another world lls · C113
1 month ago

DavidEzeM: Ohhhb solo pasaron dos años. Me gusta eso. Aunque no entendí lo de el cultivo. ¿Lo perdió y debe volver a empezar? ¿Solo lo está suprimiendo? ¿Las otras personas ya no pueden sentir su cultivo por la diferencia de energía (ellos sienten Qi pero Arthur esta cambiando a Ki)? ^.^

Another world lls · C113
1 month ago
Sobre el tema del cultivo... Arthur se podria considerar un lisiado, ya que el ya no posee un nucleo de energia. Lo que ha pasado en realidad es que Arthur a cambiado totalmente de sistema de cultivo, anteriormente tenia que refinar con energia extrangera su nucleo de energia, para aumentar su capacidad maxima de energia y calidad, por lo que los cultivadores son capaces de sentir el nivel de cultivo de los demas sintiendo la calidad de la energia que emite los nucleos de energia... Es algo asi como una especie de rasgo indicativo, que Arthur ahora no posee. Normalmente cuando un cultivador pierde su nucleo de energia, su energia... Qi en este caso se disipa, ya que el cuerpo no es capaz de retenerlo... Pero ahora Arthur usa su propio cuerpo para almacenar su energia, eso es algo que los demas no pueden hacer... Ademas, ha conseguido una cantidad masiva de energia, ya que comparar las reservas anteriores de Arthur con las actuales, es como comparar el agua que hay en un baso, con el que hay en una piscina olimpica... Volviendo al tema... Los cultivadores son capaces de sentir la energia en el cuerpo de Arthur, pero no saben identificar en que nivel de cultivo esta, ya que no conicide con su propio sistema de cultivo. View More

DavidEzeM: Ohhhb solo pasaron dos años. Me gusta eso. Aunque no entendí lo de el cultivo. ¿Lo perdió y debe volver a empezar? ¿Solo lo está suprimiendo? ¿Las otras personas ya no pueden sentir su cultivo por la diferencia de energía (ellos sienten Qi pero Arthur esta cambiando a Ki)? ^.^

Another world lls · C113
1 month ago

LarryZarus: Thanks for the chapter.
I remember reading one DB fanfic where the mc became Yamcha, and struggled to not say stupid stuff, but it would just slip out. He figured it was something like Tourette's.
So, even a different soul with foreknowledge could not truly alter Yamcha's sad, sad existence.

Another world lls · C109
1 month ago
You are well on your way, and I will explain later. View More

fearlessj2008: Not sure if lls is really that much weaker considering what he was able to do at the end of the series.

Another world lls · C109
1 month ago
No vas mal encaminado, y si, Lilith lo acompañara en varias de sus aventuras por el multiverso. View More

DavidEzeM: Espero que para el siguiente capítulo ya se enfrente a Piccolo y vuelva con su prometida, tener que contar que no hace casi nada ya se volvió aburrido... ¿Además, puede traer a su prometida a otros universos?

Another world lls · C108
1 month ago

DavidEzeM: El debe aprender como mejorar la maquina de gravedad al menos, el DR. Brief solo la hara a x100 como en el canon, pero si quiere mejorarla tendrá que hacerlo solo, sin contar que debe esconderla de Vegeta... No soy fan de una relación seria con Bulma por su personalidad que no va con el MC. ^.^

Another world lls · C107
1 month ago
Ya tengo planes para el tema de la maquina de gravedad... Y en cuanto a Bulma, no va a estar en una relacion romantica con el MC, van a ser muy buenos amigos, pero solo eso. View More

DavidEzeM: El debe aprender como mejorar la maquina de gravedad al menos, el DR. Brief solo la hara a x100 como en el canon, pero si quiere mejorarla tendrá que hacerlo solo, sin contar que debe esconderla de Vegeta... No soy fan de una relación seria con Bulma por su personalidad que no va con el MC. ^.^

Another world lls · C107
1 month ago

DavidEzeM: Siempre me pregunté porque los que deciden reencarnar en DBZ de otros fanfiction no buscan el laboratorio de el Dr. Gero y unos días antes de que libere a Lazuli (Número 18) cambia la programación a "Locamente enamorada de Arthur" y cuando Gero la libera ya tienes una esclava/amante! Tal como hizo Momonta de Overlord. ^.^

Another world lls · C105
1 month ago
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