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But isnt flaws of characters thete for developments? And if he too trusting than you want him to supsect everyone for no reason? "The person help me. That must mean he has a ulterior motives?" But in the end he was only doing because of the kindness of his heart but if its not your cup of tea i get it View More

Pripriri: I don't really like this coz mc is just So stupid and so trusting for me and wth he tried helping the other mc? I don't understand at all..
So advice don't read this if you dont like moron mc and don't have a goal mc and just following events in anime and he is the one solving Subaru problems.
What's the point of helping this stupid Mc??
Rezero is dark anime for me.. Having a stupid moronic Mc here is just so bad

Starting life in another world
1 week ago
Huh?..... View More

Wujin: This story is so sad, I hope she avenged her master at the end. Too bad they didn't end up being together. She found out that the guy is a shemale actually. So sad ending....

Douluo Dalu : Frozen Heaven Spear Lord · C1
1 month ago

Arunavazael: The story and concept is good. But the writing quality no less than mtl novel.
The novel is more like putting prototype story , unedited from writing condition ( Capital letter, (.) (,) and etc. ), grammatical, and vocabulary. It's mess. It's get better in latter part but not that much.
It's often require the reader to auto-correct the sentence by them self to understand what are they read. It was annoying to some extent. It's like reading mtl. So bear with it, but maybe the writing goes better. I hope.

Douluo Dalu : Frozen Heaven Spear Lord
1 month ago

bloo: Wasn't he supposed to be leaving?

Fate/Heroes · C7
1 month ago
No. No to harems View More

GedonistOver: Harem? Hope so

Fate/Heroes · C5
1 month ago
That makes no sense View More

TYErannical: He was Transage's sometimes he felt like 15, sometimes he felt like 16, and he'd even felt like 60 sometimes. who are you to judge you bigot.

A Lazy Man's Adventure · C5
1 month ago

Aldunhokoron: Make her a lesbian! No man is great enough for the MC!

Child Of God · C1
1 month ago
Rssg? View More
Sage of Darkness · C1
3 months ago
You do know that you're also a hater yourself? View More

T20Nemesis: Stop what doing read and support this novel it’s damn good as for ya haters the 🚪 to your left don’t ever come back if nothing nice to say....as for grammar police we appreciate ya honesty alway appreciated but not those that are barbaric haters... thanks for calling and book hotel room for this novel enjoy you’re stay as for the haters your rooms lead to the swine pits now grab the damn shovel too shovel all the damn hate from ya mouths... remember call ********** for perfect NICE enjoy stay thank you muhaahah

In Resident Evil, but it's slightly different...? (Temporary hiatus until the 1st)
3 months ago

SamStrike: MC is too op, and why does he use a sword? I was really hoping for him to use a Trident, he is the son of Poseidon after all and I am tired of MCs always using swords.

The system is too op too, it was said to just use it for keeping track of growth but it's not different than the average op system where you can buy whatever you want :/

RE: Percy Jackson World
3 months ago
👍 View More

Erosire: Finally figure out the tag thing :D

Master of Time
3 months ago
Put a harem tag in your novel would ya? View More

Erosire: I dont need to do any of that. Enjoy the story or not is up to you, mate.

Master of Time
3 months ago
TTNH is okay, WOTMW is slow for me so i kinda dropped it. And Chat group i didnt really like the mc but i stopped reading the novel idk why.. View More

Anort99: Transcending the nine heavens, Warlock of the magus world, Cultivation chat group. TTNH has the best character development. Even the villains are well written

Legend of Swordsman
3 months ago

Fatty_Cream: Before you go on a three paragraph rant about how I'm an uncultured swine who can't understand this "complex" fast-paced novel please be patient with me, or don't, either way, it doesn't make a difference.

This novel is a pretty much-overdone cliche of the vicious cycle of "revenge" with a sprinkle of poor writing. Put down your torches let me elaborate. Pitchfork down? ok

so essentially, the basic introduction of the plot is the overdone checklist of cliches, a beautiful unrivaled girl who no other can rival? check. Betrayal of a said beautiful girl or literally anyone close to him? check. What's this he's also trash but somehow the reason he's trash is cuz of a thing no one else has and now he's gonna prove the haters wrong? check.

Merit is to be made that cliches were created because they work and blah blah blah, please shut up the only reasons cliches work is because it panders towards a certain demographic and said demographics are also the types to forgive this godawful terrible blight on storytelling. The concept is the only thing supporting this work, like for Allah's sake the characters are so god damn one dimensional, not a single one person has a fucking personality, not a one, and no calling someone trash over and over again or being slapped in the face does not count as them having a personality. That my friend is just a face slap, gosh i think the author of this work only creates characters to face slap and boy, do they get face slapped quite a fair bit.

TLDR; Cliche Tropes overused, a boring world(like seriously all i know about this world is that a lot of sects exist and that they have an epic gladiator arena) and poor character development. I would rather read those CEO novels instead as they are forced to actually make the readers engage and care for their characters.

Legend of Swordsman
3 months ago

SpicyChickenNo1: Medicine knowledge. It's no 1 fav knowledge of another world 😌
But if you are a dentist, you will get a dilemma whether it is going to be useful or not 😂😅

The Empress's Gigolo · C4
3 months ago

ElsQuin: This is my first time hearing someone boast all of his skills in one breath-hahah the poor guy. I bet job interviews feels like this 😆😂

The Empress's Gigolo · C2
3 months ago

Draconax: THIS IS AN ACTUAL REVIEW WITH DETAILS AND SUMMARY. READ IT.

IF YOU WANT TO GET TO THE REVIEW, SKIP THIS PARAGRAPH. First, I would like to say that this novel deserves a higher rating than it currently has. Why? Because several people have left one-star reviews, claiming that the other novel in the "What's Next" section had more reviews. This is not true! Also, the original novel is NOT DROPPED. These rumors have been propagated by one single user who has also been leaving hate comments and abuse. Now, onto business.

Overall Summary: I've only read to chapter 10, the latest chapter released, but it seems pretty good so far. The basic premise is that there is a character, named Lin Yun, living during the apocalypse. It's a magic world, but they used up all of the mana, and now there is none left, and their world is ravaged by disasters. The main character is originally from Earth. However, this seems unneeded as it is not relevant to the story in any way as far as I can tell. Lin Yun is struck by a mysterious phenomenon, causing them to transmigrate into the body of one Mafa Merlin, a 9th Rank Magic Apprentice. Mafa belongs to a trading company called the Flashing Gold Chamber of Commerce, and is very wealthy. However, his father was with their fleet of ships transporting several extremely valuable goods when a storm struck and sunk the fleet, killing his father and bankrupting the Flashing Gold Chamber of Commerce. Artemis Fowl, anyone? Now, creditors are coming to collect, but Mafa has no money to give them. Lin Yun, however, retains the knowledge of his two past lives, and is aware of several advanced techniques that would not exist for centuries, allowing him to advance into a 1st Rank Mage. And I can't reveal any more without spoilers! Yay!

Translation Quality: 5/5: Not much to say here. Good grammar, slightly odd sentence structure, but that could be more due to the original style than the translator's style. Thanks for translating this, Shiraishi!

Stability of Updates: 5/5: This one I can't really judge, since we haven't had any updates, but the original mass release (10 chapters) was enough to get a basic idea of the storyline, and apparently there will be 14/Chapters per Week, or 2/Chapters per Day. Thanks for translating, again, Shiraishi!

Story Development: 2/5: Unfortunately, I'm going to have to give this one a 2/5. Why? Because there's not really a plot. Yes, I am perfectly aware that I have only read 10 chapters and that there is probably an actual plot. Here's the problem. The MC is insanely OP. He's aware of advanced techniques, looks like an alchemy genius, and so forth. That's the problem with so much future knowledge. Additionally, there is so much FACE-SLAPPING! Like, so much of it. It's the equivalent of... let's imagine you're in a technology competition. There's a really rich kid competing with you who has gotten this far on money alone. But now, he has to compete based solely on his skill... and he produces the technology needed to go faster than lightspeed. This is through no fault of your own, the problem is that the kid is from the future and knows how to build stuff that comes in several centuries. Do you see the problem? Now, let's say the... government wants his stuff. Unfortunately, the kid can also build giant mechas, plasma cannons, interstellar ships, and even technology that can stop a nuke. That's what the equivalent of this is. There's not going to be much of a plot because the MC is just THAT OP.

Character Design: 4/5: This one's a bit hard to judge, since we've only seen about five different characters, including the MC. The MC himself is not that well-developed so far, but it's sort of funny to watch him drool over really common items since they don't exist far into the future. Going back to our earlier example, it's like the kid drooling over seeing a piece of wood. Maybe trees don't exist in the far future! Then, we have Raymond, the son of the old caretaker/housekeeper. He's a 5th Rank Mage who gets face-slapped by the MC. Then, Raymond is all, OMG, you're amazing, I'm gonna follow you around. He ends up getting amazing (to him) rewards from the MC, but the sad part is that the MC doesn't even notice... next comes the "uncle." Have you ever seen that trope where the family relative tries to take the MC's stuff after the parents die? Yeah. That's him, and he's the main reason that Character Design is losing a star.

World Background: 5/5: Again, not much so far, but it's pretty well developed. It's a world called Noscent, and personally, I think the whole, "running out of mana" thing is very interesting. The ranking system goes like this: Magic Apprentice --> Mage --> Great Mage --> High Mage --> Archmage. They have something similar for other jobs as well, like Alchemist. In the beginning, we also get some fun background info about what wrecked the world, and later in the book, about other cities and countries, and so forth.

Overall, this is pretty good, but there is likely to be a lot of face-slapping and MC being OP, so if you don't like this sort of thing, don't read it! I can't speak as to romance because we haven't even seen any female characters yet, so I don't know if there is romance. Also, Shiraishi is a very good translator! Thanks! I personally am going to keep reading this. Upvote this comment if you liked it so that more people can get ACTUAL reviews and not just random five-star or one-star reviews.

End of the Magic Era
3 months ago
Every notice how the cover is similar to iron fist (netflix series) cover? View More

Draconax: THIS IS AN ACTUAL REVIEW WITH DETAILS AND SUMMARY. READ IT.

IF YOU WANT TO GET TO THE REVIEW, SKIP THIS PARAGRAPH. First, I would like to say that this novel deserves a higher rating than it currently has. Why? Because several people have left one-star reviews, claiming that the other novel in the "What's Next" section had more reviews. This is not true! Also, the original novel is NOT DROPPED. These rumors have been propagated by one single user who has also been leaving hate comments and abuse. Now, onto business.

Overall Summary: I've only read to chapter 10, the latest chapter released, but it seems pretty good so far. The basic premise is that there is a character, named Lin Yun, living during the apocalypse. It's a magic world, but they used up all of the mana, and now there is none left, and their world is ravaged by disasters. The main character is originally from Earth. However, this seems unneeded as it is not relevant to the story in any way as far as I can tell. Lin Yun is struck by a mysterious phenomenon, causing them to transmigrate into the body of one Mafa Merlin, a 9th Rank Magic Apprentice. Mafa belongs to a trading company called the Flashing Gold Chamber of Commerce, and is very wealthy. However, his father was with their fleet of ships transporting several extremely valuable goods when a storm struck and sunk the fleet, killing his father and bankrupting the Flashing Gold Chamber of Commerce. Artemis Fowl, anyone? Now, creditors are coming to collect, but Mafa has no money to give them. Lin Yun, however, retains the knowledge of his two past lives, and is aware of several advanced techniques that would not exist for centuries, allowing him to advance into a 1st Rank Mage. And I can't reveal any more without spoilers! Yay!

Translation Quality: 5/5: Not much to say here. Good grammar, slightly odd sentence structure, but that could be more due to the original style than the translator's style. Thanks for translating this, Shiraishi!

Stability of Updates: 5/5: This one I can't really judge, since we haven't had any updates, but the original mass release (10 chapters) was enough to get a basic idea of the storyline, and apparently there will be 14/Chapters per Week, or 2/Chapters per Day. Thanks for translating, again, Shiraishi!

Story Development: 2/5: Unfortunately, I'm going to have to give this one a 2/5. Why? Because there's not really a plot. Yes, I am perfectly aware that I have only read 10 chapters and that there is probably an actual plot. Here's the problem. The MC is insanely OP. He's aware of advanced techniques, looks like an alchemy genius, and so forth. That's the problem with so much future knowledge. Additionally, there is so much FACE-SLAPPING! Like, so much of it. It's the equivalent of... let's imagine you're in a technology competition. There's a really rich kid competing with you who has gotten this far on money alone. But now, he has to compete based solely on his skill... and he produces the technology needed to go faster than lightspeed. This is through no fault of your own, the problem is that the kid is from the future and knows how to build stuff that comes in several centuries. Do you see the problem? Now, let's say the... government wants his stuff. Unfortunately, the kid can also build giant mechas, plasma cannons, interstellar ships, and even technology that can stop a nuke. That's what the equivalent of this is. There's not going to be much of a plot because the MC is just THAT OP.

Character Design: 4/5: This one's a bit hard to judge, since we've only seen about five different characters, including the MC. The MC himself is not that well-developed so far, but it's sort of funny to watch him drool over really common items since they don't exist far into the future. Going back to our earlier example, it's like the kid drooling over seeing a piece of wood. Maybe trees don't exist in the far future! Then, we have Raymond, the son of the old caretaker/housekeeper. He's a 5th Rank Mage who gets face-slapped by the MC. Then, Raymond is all, OMG, you're amazing, I'm gonna follow you around. He ends up getting amazing (to him) rewards from the MC, but the sad part is that the MC doesn't even notice... next comes the "uncle." Have you ever seen that trope where the family relative tries to take the MC's stuff after the parents die? Yeah. That's him, and he's the main reason that Character Design is losing a star.

World Background: 5/5: Again, not much so far, but it's pretty well developed. It's a world called Noscent, and personally, I think the whole, "running out of mana" thing is very interesting. The ranking system goes like this: Magic Apprentice --> Mage --> Great Mage --> High Mage --> Archmage. They have something similar for other jobs as well, like Alchemist. In the beginning, we also get some fun background info about what wrecked the world, and later in the book, about other cities and countries, and so forth.

Overall, this is pretty good, but there is likely to be a lot of face-slapping and MC being OP, so if you don't like this sort of thing, don't read it! I can't speak as to romance because we haven't even seen any female characters yet, so I don't know if there is romance. Also, Shiraishi is a very good translator! Thanks! I personally am going to keep reading this. Upvote this comment if you liked it so that more people can get ACTUAL reviews and not just random five-star or one-star reviews.

End of the Magic Era
3 months ago
And mostly how the **** am i closer minded? View More

Memecrouchet: I hate small minded people like you, what year are you living in honey get with the times and grow up or learn to keep your opinion to yourself. Didn’t anyone ever tell you that if you didn’t have anything nice to say then say nothing at all?

Ice God Douluo · C2
3 months ago
I hate people like you who preaches about these ****ty things and i dont give a ****... And let me tell you i will say what i want its called freedom of speech.. And you cant tell me what to do View More

Memecrouchet: I hate small minded people like you, what year are you living in honey get with the times and grow up or learn to keep your opinion to yourself. Didn’t anyone ever tell you that if you didn’t have anything nice to say then say nothing at all?

Ice God Douluo · C2
3 months ago

AshSatola: I was thinking the same. As I haven't started reading it. I came here for a serpent not a Gryffindor.

Serpent of the Chat Group
3 months ago
But the title is called "Serpent of the chat group" shouldnt he act like a serpent? View More

7H30V3R533R: Another irrelevant review, this isn't even a proper review.

The story is how it acts, it isn't how to properly act, no matter how annoying you think it is, it's a story.

A story is something to relate, a story of characters is how normal humans act and other things as well. A childish mc can even relate to you, even one childish thing you did.

Review yourself.

Serpent of the Chat Group
3 months ago

Naramasant: Frankly, I am relieved. To many harem makes everything dull. Rinse and repeat.

[DROPPED]Lost Amongst the Stars-A Marvel Fanfic
3 months ago
What i have been thinking lol View More

SirJoshOfSocks: I am getting a full metal panic vibe right away.

Adopted Soldier · C2
4 months ago

SirJoshOfSocks: I am getting a full metal panic vibe right away.

Adopted Soldier · C2
4 months ago

Grish99: well that escalated quickly

Adopted Soldier · C1
4 months ago

Leslie: Oh I love the first chapters writing style . Almost the same style as poetic writing as reading the lines flowed into one another, I appreciate this detail . And hope this work continues to display well written literature

Adopted Soldier · C1
4 months ago
That is what i was thinking too.. Like ofc it would attack you. You shouldve mind your own business... He fcking retarded View More

Mute: MC already seems retarded, surprised a spider attacked him after throwing a fireball at it.

Monster Pet Evolution · C1
4 months ago

PDeath: Pitiful author/translator. He doesnt even know gow to throw a fireball or spew lightning. That is like level one spells.

Monster Pet Evolution · C1
4 months ago

For_Great_Justice: So this is like a more Fantasy version of Hunger Games.

Omniscient Reader · C15
4 months ago
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