Webnovel Author: StupidNovel - Fanfic&Novel Collection

Thank god you answer it dude. The thought of MC become gay keep come to my mind that I get sleep deprived for almost 10 years

The dialogue is too cringe. you need to try fix the dialogue a little bit. every thing that MC do doesn't have to said out loud. Other than the dialogue, it's all okay.

good luck with you all, I am out. No argument at all, it's just, this novel is not for me

Personally, I like this way. He's not OP yet, but have tendencies to be OP. Not a harem seeking yet, but have tendencies to do so. IMO, maybe the pace need to be quicken. There's some useless thing to say, something like CEO who keep busying himself with his paper. This kind of thing isn't won't change your story at all. So it best you can do some editing maybe? Ah I know it needs money or even time to do so. But it will make the story more enjoyable to read. Last thing, you're doing great. IDK how many original novel out there that I drop because the story isn't relatable or the plot is so forced that it makes you cringe. At least for now, I like how it progress, slice of life novel with harem romance in the future in modern world, with not so OP (yet) MC that doesn't depend too much on system.

IDK bout U, but just with this one chapter, I already hate MC

Nah, I think everyone else do think like that

At this point, the only novel that I read in this website is your fan-fic dude. When there is no update, I don't even access the web at all Lol