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Elzurdomaldito

Elzurdomaldito

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I love pizza!!

2017-09-30 Joined Argentina

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huh?

Fortunately, she was still young, and her family hadn't had time to teach her too much about emotional matters. She didn't realize that she had unknowingly eaten a mouthful of dog food.

Arcane: Twin Cities Mechanic

Arcane: Twin Cities Mechanic

Video Games · TurdTranslations

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dont tell the people your plot points

Though from what I remember the main group targeting me would be the best to work with, they have shown time and time again in the various media that they are the good guys; and let's face it, Black Widow is very easy on the eyes so there's that.

Pokemon Master of Marvel (MCU)

Pokemon Master of Marvel (MCU)

Anime & Comics · GJCaesar

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it's about write right, if you have your brain stunted for reading bad Chinese quality fiction its not my problem

"If it's not too much trouble I'd really appreciate the help." Birch said with an honest smile. "It's no trouble at all since Gaia can easily break up this layer of rock and stir the soil nice and deep , you'll need a good bit of fertilizer though before you can really use the earth for planting berries but for grasses and trees it should be fine." I said while tapping into my farming skill knowledge. "How much fertilizer do you think I'll need?" Birch asked seriously to get an idea of what he's looking at.-

A random pokemon journey

A random pokemon journey

Video Games · loskro

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please, for the love of god, separate in paragraphs who is talking

"If it's not too much trouble I'd really appreciate the help." Birch said with an honest smile. "It's no trouble at all since Gaia can easily break up this layer of rock and stir the soil nice and deep , you'll need a good bit of fertilizer though before you can really use the earth for planting berries but for grasses and trees it should be fine." I said while tapping into my farming skill knowledge. "How much fertilizer do you think I'll need?" Birch asked seriously to get an idea of what he's looking at.-

A random pokemon journey

A random pokemon journey

Video Games · loskro

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here is an example of what is wrong with your Mc that attitude is cringe inductive in general another thing, separate in different paragraphs who is talking, is confusing

"You aren't by chance single are you?" Lily asked and May choked on her mouthful of food. "MOM!" she exclaimed with a bright red face. Lily scoffed at her though "Don't mom me! Alex here seems like a great trainer , he's fairly well mannered , handsome and can cook! It would be a shame to miss out on such a good match for you." she said reducing May to a blushing mess. "I'm flattered but I am not a fan of getting tied down to any one woman." I said honestly with a smile.-

A random pokemon journey

A random pokemon journey

Video Games · loskro

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inner monologue and his attitude in general with other people

A/N: There have been a few things brought up that I feel need to be addressed. First is that I don't get to pick and choose what pokemon gets trained , I use a legitimate roulette wheel for that. The only exception to this was Vulcan and that was merely because so very few pokemon fics allow the MC to have a legendary at all and none that I can think of showed the legendary growing strong after being weaker which was a huge pity in my opinion. Second was that a few people are wondering about how friendly he was behaving despite his recovering apathy. The answer to this is that he is a VERY good actor , which had been mentioned previously. His attitude hasn't changed or anything all that much but he is merely really good at faking it. Third is more of a personal gripe of mine but why is everyone saying "cringe" on the interaction between Alex and Emas mom? Like he's not flirting with her or anything of the sort but everyone seems to be thinking deeper than that for some reason I just don't get.

A random pokemon journey

A random pokemon journey

Video Games · loskro

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"A bit delayed but welcome to Littleroot Mister ?" she starts but awkwardly realized that I hadn't introduced myself yet. "Alexander drake , but I go by Alex" I say with a smile. "Mister Alex then welcome to the village! I am Emily Vine , but little May over there calls me aunty V." Emily says with a friendly smile. She was an older woman with a few wrinkles starting to appear but otherwise was fairly attractive. On her finger was a wedding ring however that told me she was off the market and thus I spoke in a friendly but neutral manner.-

A random pokemon journey

A random pokemon journey

Video Games · loskro

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Once I got too comfortable playing with emerald I moved on to fire red then heart gold after that and finally I was playing through Pokemon platinum for the first time when everything changed. I'd like to say that it was some grand spectacle but in all honestly it was not. One moment I was watching the credits of the game after defeating the champion Cynthia and the next everything went black. I am pretty sure I was instantly killed by the bolt of lightning that I had no way of predicting. I am also pretty sure SOMETHING had grabbed my soul at the moment of my death as When I woke up I was very much no longer on earth. My first thought of course was 'What the Fuck?'.

A random pokemon journey

A random pokemon journey

Video Games · loskro

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sorry, it wasn't that she run away because she's a hoe pr something like that?

After Brock finished Flint looked like he was barely keeping track of everything, but Brock said one more thing "And call Mom, she went out to look for you".

Pokemon: Radical Redux

Pokemon: Radical Redux

Anime & Comics · Katsu39

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The ever-reliable Earth Release: Earthen Dome hadn't disappointed, and he had effortlessly saved him from Viper's C-rank Water Release jutsu while getting more than enough water for Water Release: Eight Tentacles, which he had used to finish her off in conjunction with a hearty chakra augmented sock in the face. The Lightning Release: Shock gambit had paid its dividend in the fight's final moments as Viper was clearly expecting it, and the water tentacles had come as a startling surprise.

Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

Anime & Comics · FictionOnlyReader

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