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I’m really liking the way you’re writing Luna’s character it’s a refreshing change from loony lovegood to how she has abilities to see deeper into the magical world. I hope Harry gets his hands on the rest of the stuff in the chamber of secrets but what I would have like to see is Lockhart getting exposed as a fraud even if he didn’t end up in st Mungos long term ward.

Just started reading this today and I love the new path you have taken with Harry! I would like to see him explore more practical magic like wards and household magic like Molly does at home when he is able to. I also hope that you pick better subjects for him in the 3rd year. No one needs to be subjected to professor trelawney again. Also not have hagrid as a teacher but as an animal handler/assistant which would make it a better subject that Harry and Hermione have to take to protect buckbeak. I look forward to reading more of this novel

Thanks for letting us know I hope you post a comment here so we can follow your new novel and I am glad your dog is doing well.

This is an interesting story so far and I hope you continue writing this book, the best ideas for you that I have at the moment are, have him use an unexpected weapon not just a sword or war hammer perhaps a tetsubo or a staff along with his crossbow. have him learn some practical magic like a bit of healing and battle magic. I would suggest not having an amazing tamed beast for a while or one with great potential as that is getting to be very common and I would like to see him in larger than average height whilst in the starter city so people in his future party aren’t shocked and the last thing I would have him develop his perception or find skills/abilities about sight. Hope these help but if they aren’t going to work that’s not an issue either way okay! Happy new year

That’s how he ended up with the Chrysler building he was trying to buy the car company but ted got mixed up so I think it will be announced soon that he has either buys a car company maybe even Rolls Royce

Thanks for letting us know and I hope everything goes well for you and your family

Thanks for the chapter and I can’t wait for him to learn more with Nicholas

I had an idea that might help you with your problem with Aedan being that powerful. Have him visit the department of mysteries and find out the impact of circumventing a prophecy and have it be very dangerous to Aedan and Harry and then maybe have some artefact show him the consequences of messing with Voldemort

I think it’s Prince Philip that is behind this or Malfoy but that’s a bit too obvious to me

I hope this issue with his magic gets sorted out fast

Poor Ragnar

Wise move not prancing Madam longbottom

I’m glad you got molly, she was acting very entitled to Sirius’ s house

I want him to upgrade the phantom butterfly, I want to know what it evolves into

Well this was a great chapter, I admittedly love twisted revenge on stupid enemies but this was very well thought out

I’m glad that you made Ron be more like the books than the movies. Also I can’t wait to see the wedding

Glad you’re dealing with the bug lady early and it’s population not popularity when you’re on about half the females in hogwarts ok

That’s will shut those whinny brats up

What about his quest rewards?

Will you please sort out all of the names before you get much further there are so many different variations in this story it’s not good