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Sovereign1996: 1) The concept is such that it has a lot of scope. The MC can create all kinds of stuff like modern appliances, mystic tools used by cultivators, military weapons, instruments which combine modern and cultivation techniques (such as a very low altitude satellite or a drone, etc). In short, just about anyone one can imagine, and its selling point is the part where MC astonishes others with his superior instruments.
2) The MC can be shown to occupy a no man's land, which he develops into some kind of organisation like a clan, sect, company, kingdom or empire.
3) The MC can win multiple battles against other individuals or organisations, with his superior instruments and modern knowledge.
4) The MC can woo many girls and ...(you know what I'm talking about)
These were the possibilities, and I rated as such.
1) Writing is not fluidic. It doesn't feel smooth. Although I didn't find any major grammatical mistakes, the scene description feels broken.
2)The author is totally not good at writing romance. All romance scenes are cheesy, however they are not unbearable.
3) The MC does not feel ambitious. No signs of organisation building. It won't be interesting to read the MC living like Tarzan in the forest.
4) There is no awesomeness factor in MC's cultivation technique. It is kind of boring.
** I've written such a long review as I have a lot of expectations from this web novel.The Geared Immortal
Elusive_Renegade: 2nd Gen -
Ying Luozha -> Zhu Yi
Xu Yunsheng -> Zhu Yi
Li Xingfei -> Wang Lin
Liu Xiafeng -> Xiao Yan
Fatty Yan Wuwei -> Xiao Yan
Xiao Huanzi/Zhao Huan -> Yue Hongyan
Dao Yuting -> Wang Lin
Zhuge Wanqiu -> Shi Tianhao
Zhou Yuncong -> Yang Qing
Huang Zhenting -> Shi Tianhao
Yang Tie -> Zhu Yi
Sun Xueer -> Zhu Yi
Ke Jing -> Yue Hongyan
Is that what you meant?History's Number 1 Founder · C1041
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