LALMON

1yr

Commented

"you trash are you courting death. you dare to kidnap a jade beauty in front this young master" would have been a better.

"You trash, you can't hold back your lust, and are going to kidnap a girl?"

Reincarnated as a second generation villain

Eastern · abinn

LALMON

1yr

Posted

Lets talk about the goods of the ff 1. its a haikyuu ff. 2. its a haikyuu ff and that's about it. Now for the bad 1. Shotacon (aunts thinking about a newborn. u need some help bro) 2. Training. MF is training at the age of 2 I thought the ff was chillin and here this dude is trying harding at the age 2. 3. Very slow start plus short chapters. as of writing this review there are 18chps and he was 7 years of age maybe more since he moved to japan. (Please understand that this review is a personal opinion and do give it a try before skipping. There not many chapters so it doesn't take much time plus not many haikyuu ff out there as well.)

LALMON

1yr

Commented

this whole pronoun thing is cringe.

"I will use them as its pronoun to avoid confusion since its voice sounds more feminine." The HPSC agent explained, before continuing, "Once she woke up, she looked around then became stiff on the chair." He paused, "As if waiting for something."

Ghost in MHA

Anime & Comics · Maiku_Surudoi

LALMON

1yr

Commented

Not a fan of abilities that require luck. anyways it was good while it lasted but this is it for me. I hope the best for the author and his future work.

ch 35 Devil Fruit Abilities

Vice Captain of the Straw Hat Pirates

Anime & Comics · Evil_Paragon

LALMON

1yr

Replied to Abordoaj

didn't even realise that was i was reading it as gomu gomuno lol

"Gomu- Gomu- Bazooka!"

Vice Captain of the Straw Hat Pirates

Anime & Comics · Evil_Paragon

LALMON

1yr

Replied to VoidSystem

also his talking like he has feathers on his wings. didn't know dragons had feathers

Slowly, I lowered one of my wings to test the water, careful to only using a small part of it, I had some concerns over what would happen If my wings got wet, flying would definitely be a pain then.

Reborn as a DRAGON

Fantasy · Immortal_Simo

LALMON

1yr

Replied to Jesus_Lasso

remember the guy who spent a week or more to avenge a people he didn't know. lol

NOTE: I read lots of crossovers Naruto/GoT. Many times Tobi sends Naruto to Westeros to get rid of him and such. In those stories Naruto still has his chakra yet he struggles a lot to get by. He is a shinobi why dont steal the coins he need? Same with other people of other fandoms with powers that would allow them to steal without being caught from any House. Why dont do it? Morals?

A Shinobi in Westeros

Book&Literature · Eden_of_Kovir

LALMON

1yr

Commented

don't know how to swim, just throw yourself in the river. what could go wrong xD

You don't know how to fly? Just lift yourself into the air!

Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)

Anime & Comics · Draugzel

LALMON

1yr

Commented

is this gonna continue. like where she covinently forgets memorable moments. i mean u can forget things but u can also remember. like when she went on the river or swung on the rope.

The next morning, Wells was found dead right outside the wall. He had volunteered to keep watch over the night, so no one had seen him get attacked, but everyone assumed it was the Grounders. I had some suspicions since I remembered that there was something important tied to his death, but outside of the major plotlines and some random details, my memory was spotty to say the least. I just wished that I could meet Katye already, but I did not know who she would be, which would make things a lot harder for me unless she did something very out of character.

The 100: Rise of the Elemental Warrior

TV · Azazii

LALMON

1yr

Commented

isn't this a bit dumb though. its like saying your 1m height is different to my 1m height. I'm fine with him being lvl 20 going against lvl100 since in terms of games class and race gives different stats at same level but 1 unit of strength of should be equal to 1 unit of strength.

[Your level and stats do not correspond with the norm. For example, with a strength value of 100, you might be able to go toe to toe with a creature with a strength value of 150]

RE:BORN Zombie

Fantasy · Killix_Kreed

LALMON

1yr

Posted

Its written in present tense. If u don't mind reading in present tense then give go if not then don't bother. ..................................................................

Black Lotus: Twin Star Exorcists

Anime & Comics · DSComeback

LALMON

1yr

Replied to ZeOwl

lmao u just can't handle criticism. tell if i'm wrong and say the first 10 chapters is not stupid. i didn't even write something misleading. i didn't even write the fact mc has a stripper name.

My Hero: Quirk Evolution

Anime & Comics · ZeOwl

LALMON

1yr

Posted

So read upto 10 chapters and i can't bring myself to read more. Basically, MC was arrogant in his school, no mention of him being the bully so just arrogant. And kids in his school didn't like it so they decided to kill him and his family. See how stupid this sounds and all his classmates knew about the plan the girls didn't like the plan but they sat on the sidelines and did nothing. Only two boys were against it but again nothing no idea if they were threatened or not but as you guessed it the plan went through and the kids brunt his house down along with his parents. MC survived due to his quirk but his parents were not so lucky. So anyways he gets temporarily adopted by mirko goes back to school breaks couple of bones of student there and is ploting revenge and i don't know how he'll avoid being the prime suspect and i don't wanna find out. So yeah i find it too stupid to read more.

My Hero: Quirk Evolution

Anime & Comics · ZeOwl

LALMON

1yr

Commented

Moooooreeee i need more

ch 18 Chapter 18

Haikyuu: Rise To The Top

Anime & Comics · My_Dixie_Rekt

LALMON

1yr

Replied to SurelyNotEli

shocker isn't a superhuman but he is eren's mom killer. eren is spiderman and spider man is superstrong, the guy can lift a train. +he has superspeed now which is weird and underwhelming considering how it's been used. and he struggled like a bich to kill his mother's killer. there i read enough

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LALMON

1yr

Replied to LALMON

and flash, did i read wrong or didn't he get the smashed around like loki did by hulk.

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LALMON

1yr

Replied to SurelyNotEli

shocker isn't a street thug?

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LALMON

1yr

Posted

was expecting a lot when i read about author's promises of proper grammar, character development, etc. but the story is written in present tense and everytime i read my brain tries to read it in past tense in which most of the books are written. then there are fights which are meh, i still don't understand how flash survived the beating. the fight with shocker was not shocking(bad pun intended). this version of spider should have been unhinged with killings and all but it still feels weak. I understand he doesn't want him to become op from the start but he should be pretty op for street lvl thugs especially since he's not holding back.

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LALMON

1yr

Commented

moreeeee feed me more chapters

ch 0 6 Chapter 6

Haikyuu: Rise To The Top

Anime & Comics · My_Dixie_Rekt

LALMON

1yr

Commented

time for new adventure. First things first, lets punch a tree.

My favorite game in my past life was Minecraft, and now I had my platform, privacy, and the power to do whatever I want. I can't wait to begin my adventure.

Minecraft Player reborn as a God

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