ShEsHy

11mth

Commented

Snowden didn't escape to Russia. He was on his way from Hong Kong to Ecuador, and while he was in Russia waiting for his flight, the US cancelled his passport, leaving him stuck there.

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Getting a Technology System in Modern Day

Sci-fi · Agent_047

ShEsHy

1yr

Replied to Veinydique

"A Will Eternal" Why? Seriously. The MC in that web novel is just plain autistic. He's basically Steve Urkel (for anyone over 30 ;)), in that he constantly fucks shit up, then wonders why people get pissed at him. It's especially annoying because, out of the hundreds of Xianxia stories I've tried to read, A Will Eternal is the one that comes closest to having an actually good reason for the MC to cultivate in perpetuity (he wants to live forever).

ShEsHy

2yr

Replied to Zynze5151

Not all of them. It's only when there are a bunch of characters with names that only differ by a single letter or syllable.

My Wife Turns Out to Be a Vampire?

Fantasy · Feng He Jin Qi Le

Saying "it's destiny" is not an explanation. It's bad writing, on the level of mind control. It takes away any character agency because it turns their every action into something that was destined/supposed to happen. It's forcing the plot, nothing more. I'm out.

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The Ultimate Support Character

Fantasy · Dyrem

ShEsHy

3yr

Replied to NandoXD

Taking a break, I guess. This whole thing feels like filler, because after this whole mess is through (sometime next year I guess) and the MC returns, there's a big, fat "Meanwhile..." waiting where we're gonna have to suffer through months of chapters about how supermegaawesome the MC was on the xianxia/wuxia side of the story during all this.

ch 245 242 Downfall

Factory Inc.

Sci-fi · Gravedagger

ShEsHy

3yr

Commented

Is there any chance the MC will return before the end of 2020? If not, please let me know so that I can stop reading, since I don't care much for fillers.

ch 234 232.1 A certain Lalafell pt.2

Factory Inc.

Sci-fi · Gravedagger

ShEsHy

3yr

Replied to KingofMortals

The current chapter (226) showed great improvement, to the point that I didn't need to re-read anything several times to understand it, like I had to in previous chapters. There was an easily noticeable improvement in grammar, though admittedly sentence structure still needs work.

ch 225 225

Factory Inc.

Sci-fi · Gravedagger

ShEsHy

3yr

Replied to Gravedagger

Honestly, if this is helping, I shudder to think what state the unedited text was in. I mean, we're talking several grammar and/or sentence structure errors per sentence here.

ch 225 225

Factory Inc.

Sci-fi · Gravedagger

ShEsHy

3yr

Commented

You know, it's ironic that an editor would name themselves "King of Mortal". Pretty much says their (lack of) skill level in their name.

ch 225 225

Factory Inc.

Sci-fi · Gravedagger

ShEsHy

3yr

Commented

5 bucks says that's what's locked up on earth.

So when Arc heard there's Dragon on Beast Forest he was shocked. Because according to Adam the Dragons hated Adam and his kin. Mainly because they are the ones who hunted the dragons.. And it was Adam who locks up the king of Dragon with the help of the gods.