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I Hate You, Devil! · C125
3 weeks ago
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Ancient Godly Monarch · C2053
1 month ago

rg1400: Nothing can beat this pokemon fanfic.
It is brilliantly written, well-planned and perfectly organised. When you have an OP mc who knows what he is doing and still readily learns to improve without looking down on others, it creates the best story possible.

Journey Towards Greatness
1 month ago
Reading Status: C333
Nothing can beat this pokemon fanfic.
It is brilliantly written, well-planned and perfectly organised. When you have an OP mc who knows what he is doing and still readily learns to improve without looking down on others, it creates the best story possible. View More
Journey Towards Greatness
1 month ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Ring View More
I Hate You, Devil! · C104
1 month ago

rg1400: What to say, It is brilliant.
It is very brilliantly written and there is no hotch-potch rush till now so its absolutely smooth.
Love your work, keep it up.
everyone knows about how beautiful Eggy has been described to be but this had the most concise way, to describe her beauty. Perfect for fanfic.

MGA-- Martial God Asura Rebirth
3 months ago
Reading Status: C7
What to say, It is brilliant.
It is very brilliantly written and there is no hotch-potch rush till now so its absolutely smooth.
Love your work, keep it up.
everyone knows about how beautiful Eggy has been described to be but this had the most concise way, to describe her beauty. Perfect for fanfic. View More
MGA-- Martial God Asura Rebirth
3 months ago

rg1400: Ma your story, your plot is one hell of amazing but please check out before uploading. Read it as a critic of your work before posting or finalizing it. Best listen aloud what you have written with any text to speech or if you are using MS Word, just read aloud. You will find some nasty mistakes which you would be able to remove.

Celestial Peak · C46
3 months ago
Ma your story, your plot is one hell of amazing but please check out before uploading. Read it as a critic of your work before posting or finalizing it. Best listen aloud what you have written with any text to speech or if you are using MS Word, just read aloud. You will find some nasty mistakes which you would be able to remove. View More
Celestial Peak · C46
3 months ago

rg1400: Man, it is like you are writing a script. Try reading it and make it concise. You can skip some dialogues and just write them as reading the expressions on others' faces. The monologue, every time he thinks is giving me headache. If you are reading this then try displaying more concise emotions, character interaction and foremost. The story must always be told in the past tense. "A week after Wang Ling is(was) admitted to the Academy."

Celestial Peak · C45
3 months ago
Man, it is like you are writing a script. Try reading it and make it concise. You can skip some dialogues and just write them as reading the expressions on others' faces. The monologue, every time he thinks is giving me headache. If you are reading this then try displaying more concise emotions, character interaction and foremost. The story must always be told in the past tense. "A week after Wang Ling is(was) admitted to the Academy." View More
Celestial Peak · C45
3 months ago
Man, your characters are weak mean their attitudes do not suit their positions, background and even the plot you want to build around them. View More
Celestial Peak · C42
3 months ago
Reading Status: C34
you ****ed up a good story man. The strongest of an era has run away in fear that does not match the character. You should actually portray it as him being calm and collected in danger. Calculative enough to fool everyone. Seriously, he is portrayed as a scared little cat before his own family. It feels like he is just a very normal curious little kid. Man, he is one who stood at the top of the world, created a new world, where the hell is his pride...?
You quoted about the strongest seat has been warmed up enough and he is going to take it back then where the hell is his conviction to deal with everything. It is like a machine experiencing the fickle world for the first time but he has lived for a long time. Man, he has the soul of an experienced old man. So, beef up his character.
Man, read any novel where the main character has gone back in time or has stood up at the top of the world like Dragon-marked war god, Tales of Demons and Gods and Emperor Domination. The character or the attitude of the top dog in the world is what your story seriously lacks.
I get it, he is weak, the world is new, he has a family now but his mind and mentality should never behave like a 5-year-old kid he is a freaking 500-yr-old man. View More
Celestial Peak
3 months ago

rg1400: you ****ed up a good story man. The strongest of an era has run away in fear that does not match the character. You should actually portray it as him being calm and collected in danger. Calculative enough to fool everyone. Seriously, he is portrayed as a scared little cat before his own family. It feels like he is just a very normal curious little kid. Man, he is one who stood at the top of the world, created a new world, where the hell is his pride...?
You quoted about the strongest seat has been warmed up enough and he is going to take it back then where the hell is his conviction to deal with everything. It is like a machine experiencing the fickle world for the first time but he has lived for a long time. Man, he has the soul of an experienced old man. So, beef up his character.

Celestial Peak · C34
3 months ago
you ****ed up a good story man. The strongest of an era has run away in fear that does not match the character. You should actually portray it as him being calm and collected in danger. Calculative enough to fool everyone. Seriously, he is portrayed as a scared little cat before his own family. It feels like he is just a very normal curious little kid. Man, he is one who stood at the top of the world, created a new world, where the hell is his pride...?
You quoted about the strongest seat has been warmed up enough and he is going to take it back then where the hell is his conviction to deal with everything. It is like a machine experiencing the fickle world for the first time but he has lived for a long time. Man, he has the soul of an experienced old man. So, beef up his character. View More
Celestial Peak · C34
3 months ago

rg1400: get a new psychic girl to be his girlfriend

The 4 Elements · C2
3 months ago
get a new psychic girl to be his girlfriend View More
The 4 Elements · C2
3 months ago
it's good for reading once a day. A chapter a day is a healthy way to read. Any more it's bitter, any less is trouble. View More

WangZiHan: Erm.. How about the not so fan of pokemon nor hate it.. Would u still recommend it? Since i have been avoiding it for now o.o

Journey Towards Greatness
3 months ago
no more new powers please get a story rather than powers. View More
In Naruto As killua With Goro Goro no Mi · C0
3 months ago

Fever_D_Novel: Just focus on lightning and fire jutus and assassinations. Maybe haki but observation haki is must as eneru is genius in mantra. Make sure MC is not op as it will destroy the story after 15 to 20 chapters or early. Just develop lightning jutsu and fire jutsu like making kirin that sasuke make and try to make attack like the ice make of Leon from fairy tail (like living animals and bird).

In Naruto As killua With Goro Goro no Mi · C0
3 months ago

Ryofu: Well personally, I'm against it, it's a fanfic about someone as killua and the Goro Goro no Mi not something else.
Changing the appearance + power of the MC change the Fanfic completely.
If you want to make a Fanfic of TGHS it's better if you create a new one with that background instead of changing this one completely.

In Naruto As killua With Goro Goro no Mi · C0
3 months ago

Gamer2800: I request of u please dont add any additional story like gods,etc...

In Naruto As killua With Goro Goro no Mi · C0
3 months ago

CutestReader: Don't do it, it will completely change the point of the novel and the power is way too op.

In Naruto As killua With Goro Goro no Mi · C0
3 months ago

ElPiwo: no dont do it

In Naruto As killua With Goro Goro no Mi · C0
3 months ago

chaotic0fan0mind: no dont do it, most of the time the story gets destroyed if you give the mc powers

In Naruto As killua With Goro Goro no Mi · C0
3 months ago
no more extra power-ups, please. this power has limitless potential. He has a large amount of chakra and infinite endurance. if he learns the shadow clone technique then he could easily surpass everyone simply because he would never get tired. what others could learn in years or complete lifetime he could in seconds. View More
《Infinite Stamina》 · C2
3 months ago

rg1400: Is MC strong or is he weak? He is always clear whether he will win or lose. This is the only MC who seriously does and does not use his brain.

White-Robed Chief · C699
3 months ago
Is MC strong or is he weak? He is always clear whether he will win or lose. This is the only MC who seriously does and does not use his brain. View More
White-Robed Chief · C699
3 months ago
man download Grammarly or any other editing software or just type it in word before copy-pasting it here. Your spellings are horrible View More
I am in one piece · C7
4 months ago
better make it a pirate's tale instead of trying to get a harem or entering into romance ecchi stuff because it requires too much detail View More
I am in one piece · C6
4 months ago
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