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Ancient Godly Monarch · C2053
rg1400: Nothing can beat this pokemon fanfic.
It is brilliantly written, well-planned and perfectly organised. When you have an OP mc who knows what he is doing and still readily learns to improve without looking down on others, it creates the best story possible.Journey Towards Greatness
Journey Towards Greatness
rg1400: What to say, It is brilliant.
It is very brilliantly written and there is no hotch-potch rush till now so its absolutely smooth.
Love your work, keep it up.
everyone knows about how beautiful Eggy has been described to be but this had the most concise way, to describe her beauty. Perfect for fanfic.MGA-- Martial God Asura Rebirth
MGA-- Martial God Asura Rebirth
rg1400: Ma your story, your plot is one hell of amazing but please check out before uploading. Read it as a critic of your work before posting or finalizing it. Best listen aloud what you have written with any text to speech or if you are using MS Word, just read aloud. You will find some nasty mistakes which you would be able to remove.Celestial Peak · C46
Celestial Peak · C46
rg1400: Man, it is like you are writing a script. Try reading it and make it concise. You can skip some dialogues and just write them as reading the expressions on others' faces. The monologue, every time he thinks is giving me headache. If you are reading this then try displaying more concise emotions, character interaction and foremost. The story must always be told in the past tense. "A week after Wang Ling is(was) admitted to the Academy."Celestial Peak · C45
Celestial Peak · C45
Celestial Peak · C42
rg1400: you ****ed up a good story man. The strongest of an era has run away in fear that does not match the character. You should actually portray it as him being calm and collected in danger. Calculative enough to fool everyone. Seriously, he is portrayed as a scared little cat before his own family. It feels like he is just a very normal curious little kid. Man, he is one who stood at the top of the world, created a new world, where the hell is his pride...?
You quoted about the strongest seat has been warmed up enough and he is going to take it back then where the hell is his conviction to deal with everything. It is like a machine experiencing the fickle world for the first time but he has lived for a long time. Man, he has the soul of an experienced old man. So, beef up his character.Celestial Peak · C34
Celestial Peak · C34
WangZiHan: Erm.. How about the not so fan of pokemon nor hate it.. Would u still recommend it? Since i have been avoiding it for now o.oJourney Towards Greatness
In Naruto As killua With Goro Goro no Mi · C0
Fever_D_Novel: Just focus on lightning and fire jutus and assassinations. Maybe haki but observation haki is must as eneru is genius in mantra. Make sure MC is not op as it will destroy the story after 15 to 20 chapters or early. Just develop lightning jutsu and fire jutsu like making kirin that sasuke make and try to make attack like the ice make of Leon from fairy tail (like living animals and bird).In Naruto As killua With Goro Goro no Mi · C0
Ryofu: Well personally, I'm against it, it's a fanfic about someone as killua and the Goro Goro no Mi not something else.
Changing the appearance + power of the MC change the Fanfic completely.
If you want to make a Fanfic of TGHS it's better if you create a new one with that background instead of changing this one completely.In Naruto As killua With Goro Goro no Mi · C0
Gamer2800: I request of u please dont add any additional story like gods,etc...In Naruto As killua With Goro Goro no Mi · C0
CutestReader: Don't do it, it will completely change the point of the novel and the power is way too op.In Naruto As killua With Goro Goro no Mi · C0
chaotic0fan0mind: no dont do it, most of the time the story gets destroyed if you give the mc powersIn Naruto As killua With Goro Goro no Mi · C0
《Infinite Stamina》 · C2
rg1400: Is MC strong or is he weak? He is always clear whether he will win or lose. This is the only MC who seriously does and does not use his brain.White-Robed Chief · C699
White-Robed Chief · C699
I am in one piece · C7
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