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This novel is a VERY solid mid-tier novel. I, personally love necromancers and whether it's gaming or stories, will always be one of the first to pick it solely due to it being such an interesting way to explore any world a necromancer is in. Only I am a Necromancer's good points is that it has a solid sense of direction. You can sense that the author knows how he wants his story to end up and you can feel relatively comfortable reading it without finding any confusing plot points at time of writing this. Another point would be that there is enough character interactions to make the world feel lively and full without even taking into account the constant fighting. Here are my issues with this novel. Characters Motivation: We have absolutely zero idea what is motivating the MC and his compatriots. Besides the linear reasoning of, "Saving humanity and as many people as I can", we have no sense of deeper motivation. We don't know what he wants or what pushes him to carry out his goals. There's no sense of details to the characters. Character Design: The villains and notable characters are extremely stereotypical. They all fall under categories of, "The White Knight who wants to save everyone", "The Mad Scientists", "Mysterious figure who towers above everyone - somehow - and no one is sure if they're a foe or friend", "The comic relief sidekick", "The badass female sidekick who kicks everybody's ass", etc. The characters are definitely one dimensional. They all feel like something I've read tens of thousands of time. People are good just for the sake of being good. People are evil just for the sake of being evil. There's no distinction or anything unique about the characters or their personalities in any way, shape or form. Plot: This is probably my biggest gripe with the novel. The pacing is terrible. If you're someone who rarely reads books or is new to this kind of world and writing style then perhaps you won't see an issue but, quite honestly, this has one of the worst pacings I've seen in a novel. SO many really awesome things happen in this novel in regards to plot points. The issue is, there's ZERO build-up. It just randomly occurs and happens casually. There's nothing to get you anticipating or left on the edge of your seat. One second he's in trouble, the next second he's turned it around by an awesome unexpected development/power-up that happens so casually, you're just left feeling the exact same way you did a few seconds prior.
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She wasn't really looking for Dollar because of her grudge, though. Yisha wanted to get the Rebate alpha's scabbard back.

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Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim

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What has this gotta do with wanting a life-death enmity against anyone who gives you the slightest grievance? I said "petty" because his motivation & reason for wanting his death is so unmotivated and simple. If you're truly trying to say it's because he's so super prideful that he now can't bear any inconvenience then that's not pride....that's just a petty loser who has a lot of shameless and underhanded tendencies in their personality most likely.
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Looks like the battle begins

"I'm going to the Very High," Han Sen said emotionlessly.

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Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim

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Lmao. Right? Dumbass
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"I shouldn't have gone to that meeting. Even if I went, why did I have to test my talent for all of them to see? And even if I took the test, why did I then go on to help the God Spirit Touch evolve? That was just asking for trouble." Han Sen cringed at his own stupidity.

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Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim

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Reminds me of Ning Yue...damn, he was such a great character. Hope we see a resolution to his gender mix-up soon.

Lone Bamboo quietly looked out across the clouds, and he said, "The Very High can feel everything I feel. So, all I must do is not think or feel anything. I will only do what they want me to do. Then, Exquisite will only see what I want her to see."

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Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim

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Ah. Oh yeah. I just remembered Yisha's best attendant/confidante is also still trapped in that hall place still

She wasn't really looking for Dollar because of her grudge, though. Yisha wanted to get the Rebate alpha's scabbard back.

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Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim

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Lmao, it's funny how petty her grudge is. Lmfao.

"It is a shame there are no psychics here that can calculate the location of people. It is impossible to find Dollar now," Yisha thought to herself. She still hadn't let her grudge against Dollar go.

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Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim

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