McAwesomedude

2mth

Replied to Devil_Hex

Whatever happened to this fellow? Did he keep up with the training after this mum was cured?

Hatake Rei - One year senior

McAwesomedude

2mth

Replied to seal_teamvi

IIRC there are plenty of regular Unchida folk going about that aren't ninja, some dont awaken the most broken eye-power in-verse, or just get a single tome. So they are just civilians that work for/with the clan. The manga or anime never really throws around hard numbers about this stuff.

The man who I realize now that, if these memories are somehow true, murdered 67 of his relatives and traumatized his brother for life, simply because Danzo Shimura had asked him to.

Gaze Upon the World (Sasuke OC!SI)

Anime & Comics · Jackpot_kun

McAwesomedude

3mth

Commented

Think this chapter really sells why he is such a bad fit for the naruto setting; despite having years to train, plan and make preparations, at the end of it all, not matter how it's presented, the biggest move he makes in almost 200 chapters to change/improve anything is at it's core an impulsive action. This man was given every opportunity to improve his standing, mentality, mindset and relations, he knew enough to not at least be forced to grind as a genin and throw his life away in the ring for months, for the barest of minimums of power progression. He is impressive for a genin and is soon a Chunni, but that is the best that could be said. This man is not dumb as other reviewers has said relentlessly, no he is far worse; impulsive and tired. At this man's core, he can not sit down an think about his actions beyond what he has just done and his next healing session. By being an tired husk that grasps at any straws, any better way to improve ANYTHING, be it himself or others, he misses them consistently. The future and past might as well not exist to him. He refuses to sit down and think long term plans that fixes any issues. Even just knowing and acting on the broadest of strokes in this universe is a highway to endless opportunities. Something this man will never do. Also, that fact that this story got a romance tag, i legit pity that unfortunate woman or man.

ch 191 CH_6.20 (191)

Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

Anime & Comics · FictionOnlyReader

McAwesomedude

4mth

Replied to Silent_Oasis_00

Based on the average people's circumstance, i'm betting on a 50-60 'life-expectancy'. Sure, normal folk have potentially for a 80-life-span, but ya know how life is in tough times are.

Even a Postnatal Nine-layered martial artist would have a maximum lifespan of only 110 years. Liang Sheng could now easily outlive two Postnatal Nine-layered martial artists.

Immortality: My cultivation Has No Bottleneck

Eastern · The Old Chicken Eats Mushrooms

McAwesomedude

4mth

Commented

Not to be that guy, but instead of writing 'The Dragon King's wife...', just write the mother or something. So far the vampire aspect is the current focus, being the last boss and this being his flashback, the fact there is a 'dragon king' means nothing until this point, so having his title go before hers (vampire queen), which has actual contextual importance or whatnot makes no sense.

"I have a feeling our baby will be as powerful as you and grow to become a great Dragon King like you, My beloved honey, " The Dragon King's wife said with a soft smile, her voice filled with hope and pride for their child's potential.

I Reincarnated As An Immortal Bat Into Another World

Fantasy · Promezus

McAwesomedude

5mth

Commented

o7

The patriarch of the Rau Clan had died in this chaotic battle.

I Stack Attributes in the Apocalypse

Sci-fi · Cig, Coffee, And Tea

McAwesomedude

6mth

Replied to Nospacess

Think he is making a 'dig' at her, like, he knows she would love it 100%. But since she was so harsh and incredibly unfriendly earlier that day in that message, he just kinda decided to not involve her. Like, who invites people they dont really like to super important events?

"It's fine, I don't think she would have been interested in coming anyway. So, what was that about the fountain of youth?"

Dungeon Raider System

Urban · NanaiSensei

McAwesomedude

6mth

Commented

"... lingers past death." If this is the entity/person 'Death' that the previous parts are talking about, then this should be capitalized.

But when Life and Death meet again, their children come out to play with the mortal man for one last time. And together they create a memory that lingers past death.

My Dreamwalker System

Fantasy · Ashdenroth

McAwesomedude

6mth

Commented

Things are happening way too fast and seemingly without reason; first he is a child, then it turns out he got only 1 year to live, then abominations are showing up in town. At this stage, there is enough on the plate, but then it keeps going; he kills himself twice while looking on his status, after that he turns into an egg, starts slurping up (somehow) the intergalactic galaxy destroying juice, after that he becomes the picture of 'i want to scream but i have no mouth' and starts walking about, but heck that was not enough, now he is suddenly in a another world being attacked by a big rat after being mind-screwed by one absurd vision after another. Dude, there is no chance to breath or take any of it in. Since everything is happening every 2 seconds, it's impossible to care or try to make sense of any of it. I been hoping for the last 10 chapters that it will slow down and start to work through whatever is going, yet that is impossible, it's like a increasingly bombastic car-chase that goes on and on for over 30+ min.

ch 25 Rift State Rats

The Primordial Record

Fantasy · BRICKTRADER

McAwesomedude

7mth

Commented

"Death!"

I Stack Attributes in the Apocalypse

Sci-fi · Cig, Coffee, And Tea

McAwesomedude

7mth

Commented

That has to be an mistranslation. The dude haven't gotten that many skill ups

Free Attribute Points: 45

I Stack Attributes in the Apocalypse

Sci-fi · Cig, Coffee, And Tea

McAwesomedude

9mth

Replied to ArielBender

This is one piece my guy; realizations, haki, power-ups, new unorthodox techniques and sudden reversals in the heat of battle is all part of it.

Bizarrely, Rowan's head naturally moved, tilting just enough such that Mad Treasure's fist missed.

One Piece: Struggle of the Weak [Reboot]

Anime & Comics · BravoBuds

McAwesomedude

10mth

Replied to PAGBOLDTOPASSNALNG

It was very much implied that if he also approved of the mc, as the other examiner wanted, then mc would've joined the sect. But since he bickered, that allowed the young master fellow to happened upon the conversation and became the last 'vote' or final say that the mc would not join the sect despite the bandit clearing.

Fang Han was calm and composed. "I told you that I'm here to thank you. It's all thanks to you, the chief examiners of the Thunderbolt Dojo, who are blind and black-hearted, for rejecting Qin Huai. Otherwise, we wouldn't have been able to find such a good junior brother."

My Two-sided Cultivation: Starting From Collecting Experiences

Eastern · The Swordman Loves Not Onion

McAwesomedude

1yr

Commented

Imagine hearing that the cosmos is shaking and break, and then not knowing why it's important. Ya idiot you live in cosmos!

Wang Wei watched the program with full concentration. He did not know why, but he had a hunch that something bad was going to happen. Do not think that this is just his feeling. Ever since he was young, he always had an extraordinary intuition. That intuition had saved his life many times and even greatly helped him in his career.