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I just got through this book. Why was it dropped!? I wanna keep reading it!

Okay so the story is amazing. No isekai and no super OP power fantasy. It is an amazing concept. The only issue is the grammar. You can easily read through most of it, but afree a few chapters it pulls you out of the story. It feels like someone put it through google yranslate and just dumber everything over without proof reading or editing

I can’t tell if the reviewer loves the novel or the author. Their wording is so maticulous and so thought provoking that it’s hard to tell

I thought this novel was familiar and I now know why. It’s a ripe off of Long Live Summon. The only difference is the MC doesn’t have copy abilities and slowly evolves and levels up with hard work. This story is very unsatisfying and everything just works out for the MC. There is no reprocessing for using a spell 12 lvls above his own multiple times and seems to have unlimited energy reserves. Also the story feels as though it was just put from pen to paper. Like they wrote “here is a fight. This and this happens. Fights over and done” it’s written as though there was no thought out into it. Like they wanted to write a fight scene, but the scene in real quick and continued with the story so they can return to the fight scene later to add details and never did. This novel feels more like one of those Chinese knock offs or hastily created movie with a similar name as a big box office movie just to make a quick buck

YES! Thank you! I hate how the author just copied Martial World. I was seriously hoping for a good ready, not to get a mnock off of a book that i already read twice before

I got to chapter 135 and noticed his system practically disappears and becomes a knockoff of Martial World. i dont mind the cultivation system cause I’ve ready novels where they have a body tempering and qi level so keeping track of both of them isn’t hard. I just hate how the novel changes like from one novel to a rip off of another

I just put up a review about this! Also thank you for reminding me of the name, I’m gonne go reread that novel. It’s been ages since i finished it

I was reading rhis novel, spending my hard eanred money and vounchers till i reached the first tournament arch and something fel….off. it felt like i ready this before, bht i read a lot so maybe its just multiple ideas and novels coming together in my head to make it seem like i read it before. Then i come to the part about reforging/repair the sword and the wlder from a clan/sect that declared him the one first rate genius and then it hit me. This remind me of another novel. One about a martial artist who finds a cube that fuses with his body and he gains overpowered skills and knowledge from where after the first training arch become the only first rate genius and gets help forging a spear just for him. Don’t remember the name, but where i am both novels are almost identical to each other and that just feels too weird to me

I love to read I can ignore most grammer mistakes easily But this is one of those stories that have grammer mistakes every few sentences that makes you feel like English is the author’s second or third language. The story is by no mrans bad. It’s one of the sites better stories, but the issue is that cause of the grammer pulling you out so often it isnt ranked higher. Author needs an editor to go through the existing chapters and edit out the grammer mistakes

The premise is good, though it feels obviously taken from other sources, but what story isn’t bow a days. i could barely get through the first chapter cause of the horrible grammer. Even if you can fix the grammer as you read it still makes it impossible to get too into the story. If the author can fix his grammer, make the story flow just a little better. I can see this story getting a manga adaptation, at minimum a fan made one.

Good idea, solid foundation... I live in Amerca, the way the author...describes things iT kinda throws me through a loop. God read, just not Sure i can stay with it

May i request you go back to the first chapters and fix the grammatical errors please. i was enjoying the novel and didnt kind them cause my brain fixed most of them, But after a while i couldnt filter it out anymore. The story is amazing, just please fix the grammer