HedgeHerb

5mth

Commented

the 5 bil for a devil fruit is justifiable for the ope ope no mi cuz the WG wants to use the immortal operation ability but I think a mythical zoan is more like 2 bil and all those eikon devil fruits sound not that great ... I mean we allready have the tori tori no mi model phoenix and there are more than enough op devil fruits that you should be able to buy after killing the original owners + since when do devil fruits have genders? the manual costs are a little bit ridiculous ... I mean it's not like you become a master in those techniques just by reading a book. And with the upgrade and evolve a ship I am just confused ... considering the cost of materials to build the sunny was about 300 mil I guess the upgrade to level 2 makes it bigger and as hard as adams wood ... but level 3 ... a hard as porneglyphs?

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One Piece - I Am A Different Luffy!

Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague

HedgeHerb

5mth

Posted

You have to turn off you brain to be able to read this story. The inconsistency ist beyond limits and Character developement is non existent in the Chapters I read, Spoiler after this: The expierence points required to level up rise exponetially but the exp you gain from killing monsters is ... random? you get 2000 exp from either a level 13 iron boss or level 50 gold mob. and a level 24 silver boss gives 4500 exp. the exp required to level up to 50 is like 500 quadrillion if you do the math and you gain only 2000 exp from 1 mob? thats like 250 trillion lvl 50 gold mobs ... and then there is the skill which gives you stats for every 10000 kills ... and they say its trash ... bruh you can proc this skill 25 billion times while you level up once, thats billions of free stats. Charakter wise every girl in the world seems to be infatuated with his looks and they just turn into hoes in front of him ... why didn't he get a real f-rank skill like aromatic smell which makes you smell good or something like that. I mean his "F-Rank" skill ist 10% mana regen per sec ... I don't understand how broken those skills have to be at S rank ... 1000% of the damage recieved is dealt to the attacker intead? So all in all if you want to this story you better don't question anything, turn of you brain and just enjoy. Even tho this discipline cultivates the poison dao he is no match to this novel and says goodbye.

Talent Awakening: I, the Weakest Awakened, Start with Dragonfire Spell

Fantasy · Red_Skin_Duck

HedgeHerb

7mth

Commented

that doesn't make any sense, it should be "In his eyes, Rosinante was his adopted son, and with Rosinante saving Law's life, Law was essentially the continuation of Rosinante's life."

In his eyes, Trafalgar Law was his adopted son, and with Law saving Luffy's life, Law was essentially the continuation of Rosinante's life.

Sailing with Whitebeard: Starting with a Question

Anime & Comics · young_sunlight

HedgeHerb

9mth

Commented

Wait the strawhats are in dressrosa? I thought this was pre time skip ... isn't ace about to be executed? and Blackbeard should allready be a warlord i mean he captured ace to get the title

ch 37 37. The Horror Of The Mysterious Forces In The Sea, The Unspoken Kaido And Bigmom!

Bloodline: my bro ace got caught in war my family go to war with navy

Anime & Comics · Ahmed_Riaz

HedgeHerb

9mth

Commented

Ty for the Chapter :) so the Hyperbolic Time Chamber is next? looks like a lot from the DB Universe. I don't know if the Time Chamber is that usefull considering that the Beast Pirates have allready used up most of their potential in my opinion. Yes it will Boost their strengh levels by quite a bit but u also have to consider that they are aging. Just throwing every random bob or tom into the chamber doesn't make them strong ... they need an instructor and since the instructor will age with them they will be old as rosins after training like 30 guys. Without an Instuctor you can't expect them to reach any considerable power level ... other that they train in 10x Gravity there ... and don't forget the food consumption. I am contemplating which science discovery the beast pirates could need to get to the next level. something like the therianthropes genitic modification from killing bites could be nice and fit with the beast term, but that would be just artificial minks ... so meh I guess If we stick with the dragon ball universe the fountain of eternal youth would make the time chamber useful but at the same time making everyone immortal and then forcing them to train for like 20 years to make everyone a force to be recon with would make the future developement an exponentional curve which would ruin the story. Well I guess I am way into the thought and just have to wait to find out where this is going ... keep it up, I want to see where you take this story :)

ch 40 Chapter 40: New research is really expensive

Fourth Calamity of the Beasts Pirates

Anime & Comics · BlackGoku222

HedgeHerb

1yr

Commented

Either TenTen or Tayuya (the red haired girl from the hidden sound village)

No

Naruto: Uchiha's Genjutsu Demon

Anime & Comics · lazarus898

HedgeHerb

2yr

Commented

wait ... why did he escape, even tho Scabbers aka. Wormtail aka. Peter Pettigrew never appeared in the daily prophet. How did Sirius find out that Peter is out and about.

Nothing particularly remarkable happened in these days except for the fact that Sirius Black had escaped the Azkaban.

HP: I Have "Pure" Magic

Book&Literature · Snollygoster

HedgeHerb

2yr

Commented

he has to repopulate the sayan race

Both

A SAIYAN SURVIVOR

Anime & Comics · Antonio_Garza

HedgeHerb

2yr

Commented

Go full ham on the kingdom building and develop Uzu to something incredible.

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Anime & Comics · TacetIrae

HedgeHerb

2yr

Replied to Ferro

If you want to develop Uzu and introduce new bloodlines, maybe even from enemy villages, I'd recomend something like a "breeding" clan which consists of women who rape captured male ninjas to create new clans. It's new and you don't have to create some bulshit scenario to get some bloodline limits into uzu.

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Anime & Comics · TacetIrae

HedgeHerb

2yr

Commented

"you've choosen the best students, who could weaken the foundation of konoha so much that it is laughtable how konoha can still exist." (senju gone, uchiha gone, sakumo hatake dead, 3 S-class missing nin, tsunade useless and Danzo helping everyone against konoha while working on his coup)

"After all..."

In Kumogakure after adopting Hinata Hyuga.

Anime & Comics · Crystal_Cat

HedgeHerb

2yr

Commented

you can make them attack a navy base an force the navy to change the name.

A clash between Navy HQ admiral Kizaru and a young pirate from east blue ended with a heavy defeat for Kizaru! On the xxth of April 1514, Navy HQ admiral Borsalino, also known as Kizaru, was sent on a mission to retrieve 2 run away slaves after tries to establish communication failed.(BS but Morgan can't know what's not written in the report he stole and don't ask how he managed, he's just built different) According to secret sources, the Slaves were on an island, that's hard to reach for many which is why Kizaru entered the island alone after getting near the location by ship. After finding the slaves location, Kizaru unexpectedly ran into the 12 years young Jackson the Goliath after which a fight broke out. (I regret the nickname, I just thought it sounds nice back then and didn't think of the myth behind) During an intense duel between Jackson and Kizaru, which nearly destroyed the small city, the admiral lost and suffered lethal injuries, making it impossible for him to continue his work for possibly months. Another surprise is that the crew's members acted heroically and focused on saving as many civilians and even the slaves during the duel despite the danger. Although still young, Jackson won a duel against an admiral from Navy HQ, even almost killing him, this alone makes him strengthwise a candidate for being an emperor of the sea in the new world! Are we witnessing the rise of an, for now, uncrowned emperor?"