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I really like this. I can defo tell the writer isn't a pro or anything, but they actually tried to make a fucking story. Even if it's kind of a wish fulfillment story, the MC didn't get 15 wishes from some god. He didn't get ludicrous magic power. He just worked for his skills. It's OP, but it's not stupid OP.

The biggest weakness of this story is the grammar and dialogue. The character is also incredibly edgy so if that's not your taste you might not like this.

I would say give it a try, you might enjoy it. View More
[Transmigration]
4 days ago
You argue like my ex. You tryna tell me you weren't angry? Smh. Some people just feed of internet fights I guess. I'm done replying View More

amaturewriter: again why do you think I am angry?..at best I am annoyed, annoyed at you saying something which I didnt say

The Muggleborn Conspiracy
1 week ago
Even if it was (it wasn't). That still doesn't call for your attitude. Dude you've got anger issues if that's the reaction you have to someone disagreeing. View More

amaturewriter: you just said i said something and yet everything you said about what I said was wrong....what do you expect?

The Muggleborn Conspiracy
1 week ago
Overreact much? Lmao. I said I disagreed with what you said. Is that not allowed or something? Where did you see me discredit you? Smh. Read my comment again then look at how you reacted dude. You flipped out like I insulted your ancestors. View More

amaturewriter: This is epic but kinda seems pointless and stupid....here me out....

the MC dosnt know anything important....he dosnt have any knowledge about the OOTP [it hasnt been shown...I mean dude didnt even know bills wife]....he dosnt have any knowledge regarding the prophesy/ horcruxes/ etx....so him going back in time seems pointless, he is just a side character .....but it is interesting.... if you get over the pointless MC...its cool cause here we have an MC whilst he dosnt have any knowledge he has other types of knowledge..cause he was a criminal..

suggestion: dont make MC a naive idiot that dives headfirst into confrontations, or tell others he is from the future...make him smart and cool not an idiot........make him OP...like beyond everyone...dude has over a decade of preparation time, and dont neuter him Add some romance and fluff...just build it.


**; no bash but honestly hufflepuffs are useless....loyalty my ass....those cunts betrayed HP during second year...and the 4 th year......no benefit of the doubt was given to him despite him being their savior,,,,all of em thought he was the heir or was cheating..and too anyone that says that they helped harry during the war...well duh!...they were against a being that wanted them destroyed...many puffs werent purebloods.....point is, at the end of the day the puffs are worthless cunts that are basically useless, they were sheep that couldnt stand up for themselves.......[cedrick, didnt even help harry by giving him a clue about the dragon]......just my opinion

The Muggleborn Conspiracy
1 week ago

Billy_Corona: The MC is muggleborn who has been disenchanted with the magical world after the hardships he faced upon graduation. The story features the events close to the moment of his death and sudden transmigration back in time to his 11 year old self.

The beauty of this story is that the OC doesn't know what we know about horcuxes and ****. He's just fed up with how his life turned out and decides to beat the pureblood at their own game.

By forming a movement, not unlike the various Unions you know and from there prepare for the war he knows will come to the best of his abilities.

He doesn't believe in dumbledore or tossers like him making him a true third party in this game of thrones between Dumbledore and Voldemort. Just like his name suggests, he is grey in his alignment. A neutral, or in American terms and independant striving for equal rights.

Its a fun read so far and definitely different from the other things I'm used to reading in HP fics, which makes this a welcome niche approach.

Hense my high rating.

The Muggleborn Conspiracy
1 week ago
Heavily disagree. People who are hesitating to read from this review should defo give this a read. This story doesn't follow canon. There's no room of requirements abusing. No fucking Hermione romancing for the 1000th time... No "Evil Dumbledore" stupidity.

This is one of the most entertaining stories. And you're insane if you don't think the MC is OP. He's already got a fully functional secret society of wizards going. This guy is set up to be the next Voldemort for gods sake! View More

amaturewriter: This is epic but kinda seems pointless and stupid....here me out....

the MC dosnt know anything important....he dosnt have any knowledge about the OOTP [it hasnt been shown...I mean dude didnt even know bills wife]....he dosnt have any knowledge regarding the prophesy/ horcruxes/ etx....so him going back in time seems pointless, he is just a side character .....but it is interesting.... if you get over the pointless MC...its cool cause here we have an MC whilst he dosnt have any knowledge he has other types of knowledge..cause he was a criminal..

suggestion: dont make MC a naive idiot that dives headfirst into confrontations, or tell others he is from the future...make him smart and cool not an idiot........make him OP...like beyond everyone...dude has over a decade of preparation time, and dont neuter him Add some romance and fluff...just build it.


**; no bash but honestly hufflepuffs are useless....loyalty my ass....those cunts betrayed HP during second year...and the 4 th year......no benefit of the doubt was given to him despite him being their savior,,,,all of em thought he was the heir or was cheating..and too anyone that says that they helped harry during the war...well duh!...they were against a being that wanted them destroyed...many puffs werent purebloods.....point is, at the end of the day the puffs are worthless cunts that are basically useless, they were sheep that couldnt stand up for themselves.......[cedrick, didnt even help harry by giving him a clue about the dragon]......just my opinion

The Muggleborn Conspiracy
1 week ago
This is a pretty entertaining book. But now I find myself skimming these chapters looking to see when Dark souls ends View More
Elder Blood Witcher · C209
2 weeks ago
Oh yucky I'm gonna dip out. You telling me Black Widow, an "infamous spy" as you put it would start blushing like a schoolgirl on seeing some handsome dude? That sets the tone for what kinda story this is View More
A Father In Marvel · C5
3 weeks ago
Please dont turn into that other father in marvel story where the author spent half the story wanking off to how handsome and perfect the MC is.

You've got a good thing here, it's hilarious thinking about some chubby guy whooping ass. View More
A Father In Marvel · C3
3 weeks ago

Sorcery_Mirage: yeah

Fate/Heroes · C7
3 weeks ago

sadark: boooooo why is he still in gotham?

Fate/Heroes · C7
3 weeks ago

edward_martin: Talia isn’t that beautiful to have that effect

Fate/Heroes · C7
3 weeks ago

PoeticSonic: No it's more like they are a whole realm higher than him (step sis and step bro) AND he specifically doesn't want to ruin his father's marriage by telling him as he guess they are doing what they are doing because they want to ruin the marriage. No one offended him too much, and didn't get what they deserved without reason.

Let Me Game in Peace
1 month ago
Thank you! View More

Azunyan: This is going to have spoilers for up to ch 17. Go away if you don't want to be spoiled. GENERAL SUMMARY:The story begins at a sort of mid point after an event. The MC who is a certified genius at the high school he goes to got beat up by this girl who had no reason to beat him up. (turns out she is his step sister bc his dad is going to marry her mom. He also has a step brother that ain't friendly either) Now the MC discovered that a phone that was stored in their house and forgotten was a relic from ancient ruins that his grandfather helped in excavating. That phone allows him to basically raid dungeons with a game avatar and reviving the avatar only costs a drop of blood. However, all that the avatar collects in the game translates over to reality with benefits. Because of that, the MC keeps on playing that and sleeping so other people think that he got into a slump and gave up on trying. MC obviously proves that he is fine and dandy later on, but somehow no-one seems to be aware of that because his step siblings think he is trash and the other teachers are just unaware. Luckily there isn't too many side character that are rubbish. The step siblings tho... they just suck. OPINION: So I think that this story is worth a read. The MC has an apathy about him that makes him not really care about others except his dad so he sort of just strolls along in life while others seem to care a bit too much about details. However, this makes it really difficult to get a read on the MC, I mean he didn't care that his step brother basically screwed up his chance to be on a really good team for practical examinations. Like the personality of the MC in a phrase would be: calm to the point of being apathetic. The other side characters were reasonable and had common sense in their actions. Step-siblings not really tho. They are just out to make the MC miserable. The general world set up without factions and crap is really similar to shadow hack, modern cultivation stories, and dungeon raiding kind of stories. At a certain point in time, dimensional zones AKA dungeons appeared and monsters came out from those. Humanity adapted to it and now there are special abilities and other cultivation like crap that are present. Currently tho there seems to be no threat of monsters coming out or anything like that. That about wraps up the review.

Let Me Game in Peace
1 month ago

Azunyan: When I thought of Japanese MCs it was like this. Someone steps all over them and they feel the injustice of it, but they never do anything in retaliation. With this MC, someone steps all over him, but he doesn't feel injustice or care because it doesn't matter that much to him. Hope this helps.

Let Me Game in Peace
1 month ago
So when you say apathetic, do you mean he lets people walk all over him? I mean, he doesn't need to be the crazy xianxia MC but does he at least have a backbone? From what you're describing he sounds like one of those insane japanese MCs. View More

Azunyan: This is going to have spoilers for up to ch 17. Go away if you don't want to be spoiled. GENERAL SUMMARY:The story begins at a sort of mid point after an event. The MC who is a certified genius at the high school he goes to got beat up by this girl who had no reason to beat him up. (turns out she is his step sister bc his dad is going to marry her mom. He also has a step brother that ain't friendly either) Now the MC discovered that a phone that was stored in their house and forgotten was a relic from ancient ruins that his grandfather helped in excavating. That phone allows him to basically raid dungeons with a game avatar and reviving the avatar only costs a drop of blood. However, all that the avatar collects in the game translates over to reality with benefits. Because of that, the MC keeps on playing that and sleeping so other people think that he got into a slump and gave up on trying. MC obviously proves that he is fine and dandy later on, but somehow no-one seems to be aware of that because his step siblings think he is trash and the other teachers are just unaware. Luckily there isn't too many side character that are rubbish. The step siblings tho... they just suck. OPINION: So I think that this story is worth a read. The MC has an apathy about him that makes him not really care about others except his dad so he sort of just strolls along in life while others seem to care a bit too much about details. However, this makes it really difficult to get a read on the MC, I mean he didn't care that his step brother basically screwed up his chance to be on a really good team for practical examinations. Like the personality of the MC in a phrase would be: calm to the point of being apathetic. The other side characters were reasonable and had common sense in their actions. Step-siblings not really tho. They are just out to make the MC miserable. The general world set up without factions and crap is really similar to shadow hack, modern cultivation stories, and dungeon raiding kind of stories. At a certain point in time, dimensional zones AKA dungeons appeared and monsters came out from those. Humanity adapted to it and now there are special abilities and other cultivation like crap that are present. Currently tho there seems to be no threat of monsters coming out or anything like that. That about wraps up the review.

Let Me Game in Peace
1 month ago

Elsontiger987: I sort of like the story but the mc is all kinds of ****ed up.I get people hated yun che becouse he did manipulate kill and also rape one of his future wives.But doing and torturing and putting him throgh this and also manipulating the mc's future wives is no fucking difrent if not worse then what yun che did.yes he killed alot but who hasent in that kind of world and environment.yes he manipulated but he cared and risked his life for them.The mc is just basically going after what yun che would have.it just feels like childish and petty jealousy gone beyond yandere wifu level.it dosent even feel like the Mc will love them only goes for them becouse of there beauty.

He goes from being a hero saving a little girls life to being reincarnated as roach as he was a hero to manipulating xia qingyue with lies about being a self proclaimed hero to then torchering and tormenting Yun che mentally for I don't even no because he hadn't even said why he's don't it or why he hates yun che.so it's kind of ****ed up.but hey that's what fan fiction are these days.

So even tho people may like this type of genre it's not for me.

P.S And author if your resulting on deleting people's truthful opinions about you novel like my last review it means your insecure and dont like to see bad coments and reviews.And if so just think and read the reviews of all the people who do like you story and ignore the bad ones.you may think becouse I'm giving a low rating that I'm belittling your hard work because thats not the case at all.its just that I don't like this particular story structure and the Mc's personality.

You have great sentence structures.good punctuation you have thought of your plot and had it planed out unlike some where they just write it on the spot.(guilty as charged 😅😅😅)So have more confidence.good luck with you novel.

Against The Gods with an Anime System
1 month ago

XuanXuan: ‘Splendid Story’ ‘Awesome Novel’ ‘This is a masterpiece’

...Those are the first words you’ll see in the review section, naturally that will make you want to read the novel. So i did, And what I saw is utterly disappointing. He chose to be reincarnated as Ceasar Clown from the start, Then skipped everything else. Like what did he train? How did he train? How the fvxk did he find the devil fruit? What the fvck is his ship??

Then came the Other Canon characters or atleast ones with the same name, cuz maaaan the characters are so one-dimensional.
“Give me someone and Money or I’ll kill you. “Ok” “Come with me or Ill hurt your sister “OK”
“Kill that man. “OK”

That’s all I know since I can’t continue further due to the sheer stupidity.

Makes you wonder how ppl gave this 5star.

One Piece: Caesar Clown
1 month ago

TalentlessAuthor: This story is just another one of those juvenile web novels.The God that granted him wishes indirectly calls the mc a bi.tch the first chapter. (very unbecoming of a literal God) The main character curses at the storm during the first two chapters. And the author's sense of Comedy is something that can be akin to the sense of humor of a ten year old who thinks fart jokes are funny. The MC also wishes for a system, the power to bend time and space, and an ancient legendary super sayian bloodline... Also, the grammar is unbearable. If your looking for something to pass the time, I would rather recommend playing video games or watching YouTube. If you want to slowly torture yourself, then I suggest Reading this.

Baa7
1 month ago

Daoist444379: The MC is a full blown retard who tells people the future and says some bs excuse lol then he gets “strong” and goes to a random ship with Celestial Dragons and he just does nothing and becomes a slave.... yeah don’t bother reading lol the MC is a complete beta

Mythical Paramecia Fruit "Olympian"
1 month ago

LichRich: 1) Your MC is super OP.
Knowledge about his past life already cheat, but you're still adding more cheats:
- Soul Phoenix from owl (it's not pokemon to evolve like that)
- Winchester knowledge ( where it came from, if he's normal muggleborn)
- OP Artifact Hat
- oh, and don't forget this "Magic CORE" ****

Anything of this OP by itself, but together... You'll just drop this fan-fic soon, because:
1) it's boring as hell
2) to OP, if he'll not kill Volandemort with all his powers in 3-4 years that's will be really weird.
Right now your fun-fic looks like "Cheat Engine".

Journey In Harry Potter World
1 month ago
Super agree.
Advice for the author.
"Cheats" are okay in most stories, as something to differentiate your MC. Make him stand out from the pack. Harry potter is a bit different though. Just the knowledge of the RoR could make someone determined incredibly OP. It's one of those stories where being an '*****' in a childs body actually gives you a huge advantage, so adding anything on top seriously messes with the scaling.

Not to mention there's all sorts of whacky spells you as the author could invent. Maybe your MC runs into a tomb with books from ages ago! All sorts of crazy things. View More

LichRich: 1) Your MC is super OP.
Knowledge about his past life already cheat, but you're still adding more cheats:
- Soul Phoenix from owl (it's not pokemon to evolve like that)
- Winchester knowledge ( where it came from, if he's normal muggleborn)
- OP Artifact Hat
- oh, and don't forget this "Magic CORE" ****

Anything of this OP by itself, but together... You'll just drop this fan-fic soon, because:
1) it's boring as hell
2) to OP, if he'll not kill Volandemort with all his powers in 3-4 years that's will be really weird.
Right now your fun-fic looks like "Cheat Engine".

Journey In Harry Potter World
1 month ago
Redundant powers, why do people do that?! What's the fuckin point of a story if it's just a giant wankfest to the main character. I don't even know why I clicked this, just looking at the cringy title was a clear indicator. Sparda Gilgamesh Lucifer, lmao View More

leo26: I at first thought that it was a cool idea about using the power of accelerator because his power of vector is seriously op but the author decides to give him a system,a sharingan,instant whatever it is called, and gate of Babylon and instant regeneration all the while he is just 6 years old.Did I also say that he is a descendant of lucifer who will have a purer bloodline then lucifer becaus of purifying pills.Like what bull**** is it to make him completely immune to holy power. And most of the interaction are with just the system and the penalty of failing a mission is something severe like losing power('apparently mc is an anti hero,so that's why there is penalty otherwise he won't do the mission' is the reason the author gave which is pure bs)He also gets space manipulation and crash magic(at the age of 6).

DXD: Golden King of Lucifer
1 month ago

leo26: I at first thought that it was a cool idea about using the power of accelerator because his power of vector is seriously op but the author decides to give him a system,a sharingan,instant whatever it is called, and gate of Babylon and instant regeneration all the while he is just 6 years old.Did I also say that he is a descendant of lucifer who will have a purer bloodline then lucifer becaus of purifying pills.Like what bull**** is it to make him completely immune to holy power. And most of the interaction are with just the system and the penalty of failing a mission is something severe like losing power('apparently mc is an anti hero,so that's why there is penalty otherwise he won't do the mission' is the reason the author gave which is pure bs)He also gets space manipulation and crash magic(at the age of 6).

DXD: Golden King of Lucifer
1 month ago

Morvian: he's like slave of system, if he's out of control the system will whipped him so he can back to normal!~

Reincarnation of a living god · C2
2 months ago
Not sure if I'm a fan. He's constantly going insane, and the system is pretty much doing everything for him. Really hope it's not always so intrusive. View More
Reincarnation of a living god · C2
2 months ago
Lol I wouldn't have the balls to summon Aizen. His power is too freaky unless it was nerfed View More

Kickedelm0: Reward for mission Aizen or Alucard

Otherworldly Summoning System · C24
2 months ago

AlmightyAsterisk: Geralt explained it back in the story I don't remember exactly but it basically the wicher convertion speeds biological process in general thus witchers have higher stamina, strength, sped up maturing process with respect to normal people at that age and apparently increased libido.

Elder Blood Witcher · C56
2 months ago
Why does being a witcher make him older? View More

AlmightyAsterisk: But he is a witcher so biologically he is 14-15 and risryn after living so along will have a lose set of morals if any.

Elder Blood Witcher · C56
2 months ago
Didn't this kinda mess up the entire story? Lol. How will kid Irukas watch his parents killed by the nine tails now? That was a pivotal moment for his character development. Which in turn made him incredibly important for Narutos character development. Seems like this story is going completely. I don't think it was worth it just to have a childhood arc with fan favorites. View More
Reincarnated As Mizuki · C8
2 months ago
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