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zouave

2yr

Commented

Better off playing the game but this is a great fanfic :)

ch 160 The Newly Obtained Council Hall

Lord of the Oasis

Games · Ji Mansion's Old Zhao

zouave

2yr

Replied to zouave

It wouldn't be as bad if the author has just said it's a fanfic..

Lord of the Oasis

Games · Ji Mansion's Old Zhao

zouave

2yr

Replied to Lightwind21

I don't personally mind fanfic but isn't this portrayed as original work but is actually fanfic? lol

Lord of the Oasis

Games · Ji Mansion's Old Zhao

zouave

2yr

Posted

Why are there these authors using other creators work as part of their story. I mean, the author could have easily created his own world but borrows more from mount and blade.. Similar cases in some other stories created by CN authors, it's closer to fanfic than original story.

Lord of the Oasis

Games · Ji Mansion's Old Zhao

zouave

2yr

Replied to BrokenH00k

ROTSSG has lots of plot holes also one thing that I remember clearly is pace is really slow in terms of chapters but if you compare real life time vs chapters it's crazy that only few weeks has passed and the chapters are like few hundreds lol Although, I did enjoy the novel. I may try this novel and hopefully it's good as I usually read reviews first.

War Online

Games · Snowstar

zouave

3yr

Posted

Chapter release was slow for me but it is what you expect from a quality work :) I highly recommend people to read this novel, it is one if not the best web novels out there. Also, as some said it's already completed. So, now is the best time to read it, just google it and you will see where you can read it for free, the author posted it in different site originally.

Mother of Learning

Fantasy · MoL

zouave

3yr

Commented

Sadly skimming chapters at this point. I will stick with ATG for *** scenes XD Anyway, good while it lasted.

ch 104 Delivering Herself to the Devil's Hand

Armipotent

Fantasy · HotIce

zouave

3yr

Posted

Lack of, lots of lack of research on the authors part. It would have been better if the direction of the novel was in terms of magic: this happens then this happens logic can be thrown out the window as long as the rules itself has created is consistent. What we have in this novel is building of technology products or items without the prerequisites being fulfilled. This is nothing to do with being a scientist but just a lack of attention to details on the authors part. No one wants a step by step instructions or guide to be read in these novels but that doesn't mean you simply ignore simple logic such as you'd need certain tools or techs to be advanced enough to make the said tools. You can't just simply bypass that just because of the system or knowledge you have. If that's what the author is going for then it's better to just ask the system to get them the said items instead of it being about creating technological advanced items.

I'm the King Of Technology

Fantasy · lumydee

zouave

3yr

Commented

The logic regarding power being fueled by bloodliners seems fine but cause and effect seems to be not so solid The original ability dying out cause of lack of source is understandable but suppose a fire ability burns a tree, the fire that is fueled by a user disappearing is fine but what about the fire being fueled by burning of wood itself. I am thinking in terms of the ability being a catalyst in this case at least. Anyway good story, keep up the great work!

ch 228 Eating Within The Chaos!

Supremacy Games

Sci-fi · MidGard

zouave

3yr

Posted

Original review: The MC especially to listen to was really cringy. I personally didn't like the way the comedy was shown, it felt forced to me. I am gonna update the review if it gets better / changes for the better. Updated review: I got back into this novel after forgetting about it. Great thing about it is I could remember more and more as i kept reading. As for my original review I can't remember where exactly that happened but I continued from chapter 90 or so and it's not bad at all, updated the review from 3 to 3.6

Supremacy Games

Sci-fi · MidGard

zouave

3yr

Commented

I won't judge the story yet but I guess where you live and experienced makes a difference. I find it really hard to fathom why anyone would do such a thing to a kid. Anyway, I am gonna keep reading. Hopefully, the story flows more smoothly, as in the action taken by characters are explained a little more as to wrap my head around it. Since, the brief background we had in this story wasn't enough for such actions taken by family members to make sense. :P

ch 0 4 The Beginning of the End

The Dawn of the New World

Eastern · Shinigami8671

zouave

3yr

Commented

I really hope author improves in character interaction part, it was little cringe to read lol

ch 26 Why did you protect me?

Galactic Technological Library (Reupload)

Sci-fi · sakakoi

zouave

3yr

Replied to Andeis_YT

ya, boost player or experience and level up etc. At least, that's the closest thing I can think of.

The idea was to add puzzles in the game which after being solved would give players boast or something similar.

Galactic Technological Library (Reupload)

Sci-fi · sakakoi

zouave

3yr

Commented

such conflicting sentences right after one another.

The game was not totally taken down instead its developer's name was changed so that it would not have any link to Fu Yan in the future.

Galactic Technological Library (Reupload)

Sci-fi · sakakoi

zouave

3yr

Replied to OnlyLiveToRead

Depends but Gunz: the duel is an epic example.

While developing a game, the most hated part was to find bugs and this was the main reason why most rookie developers failed to enter the market because these bugs would ruin the game experience for the player and even some big companies would face this issue.

Galactic Technological Library (Reupload)

Sci-fi · sakakoi

zouave

3yr

Commented

The game was ready but the game engine was still being finalized.

Galactic Technological Library (Reupload)

Sci-fi · sakakoi

zouave

3yr

Commented

Ya, those are not creating routes. The routes already exist, just different way to access it. And as some people said, there are games doing that already.

But with the new game engine players would be able to create their own walking routes (by actions like smashing a wall or climbing etc.).

Galactic Technological Library (Reupload)

Sci-fi · sakakoi

zouave

3yr

Commented

So, the comment about her not minding him being lecherous just flew over the MCs head.

"Well, let's start the interview then."

Galactic Technological Library (Reupload)

Sci-fi · sakakoi

zouave

3yr

Replied to OnlyLiveToRead

it was the virus that mc made, not your fault.

"Well with this I can now start a company. It will be my first product and it will be fixed in people's minds and whenever anyone talks about 3D in the future, they will always remember my company in their mind."

Galactic Technological Library (Reupload)

Sci-fi · sakakoi

zouave

3yr

Replied to sakakoi

It's always best to explain to readers what happens in the middle so that way the story flows nicely. Usually, when the readers have to make assumption that is not good. A simple sentence or paragraph of what took place is good. Like how the AI helped or in what aspect etc. Just my one cent.

After spending a while at it Fu Yan had high hopes for it so he ran the program and noticed that the game looked very realistic.

Galactic Technological Library (Reupload)

Sci-fi · sakakoi

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