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TyrTheFallen: Is the Author trying to kill this story that ping idiot has unlimited life for gods sake i want a story with shrew strategists and large battles with kingdom building not this VRMMORPG thing.

Battle Royale of the Sinners · C16
1 week ago

DamnPlotArmor: Thank you for your sincere critics.

I understand why you feel wrong with the hypocrisy situation you have noticed.

I designed the story where the heaven was a relaxing place but lax in security and monitoring, while hell was like a prison where every personals and every souls' actions had to be watched at all times. I guess I didn't describe that well enough.

Secondly, if angels and gods could mess up enough to send MC to hell, why not messing thing up further by letting a little rat ruined the system. :P

Well, what's done is done. I'll take this as a lesson and I will improve my writing in the future.

Thank you for taking your time reading my novel. Meaw.

Battle Royale of the Sinners · C6
1 week ago

Leixein: WAIT SO NO H-SCENE??? WTF IS THIS!!? BLASPHEMY!!! So they are in hell... but even in hell they have cencorship? Wow... so that means on heaven theres no cencorship? Ahhhhh i see now... so we must enter heaven to watch hentai... nice 1 god xD welp better get positive karma bois coz if we enter hell we wont get laid! And cant see the sexy devil there either and cant even fap

Battle Royale of the Sinners · C4
1 week ago

Galass: Overgeared…

Battle Royale of the Sinners · C4
1 week ago
I have read too many cultivation novels the more powerful they are the more they remember things extremely well even the tiniest details . When they want to remember it. View More

MuckSpout: The more old are you without any challenge having boring life, the more idiotic you'll be as you will have become too lazy to remember small details.

Unsealing: Omnipotent Father · C9
1 month ago

SolarFlare201: Found same novel on gravity tales completed but when i went back all the chapters are gone wtf i call bull qidian is obviously taking free novels from other websites and making you pay for them

Rise of Humanity
1 month ago

CocoaButter: To put it simply. It starts well but becomes very disappointing and kept getting worse as you keep reading. I stopped at chapter 30 at first and read again to see if I misjudged that was up to 120 I couldn't read it anymore. It was simply terrible in terms of character and story development. I definitely do not recommend this. From how this is progressing, web novel representatives prefer to widen their novel number count. It doesn't matter if it is good quality or not. That's what I am seeing anyway.

Rise of Humanity
1 month ago

chaos227: Honestly, we came for the computer but so far nothing. The story is similar to many others like it. Once you've read one, you've pretty much read them all. They just different names and behave a little bit different from each other.

A Wizard's Secret
2 months ago

Mystic_Main: Another really crappily written novel about magic. I'm very pissed, so if this review comes off as ranty, I apologize.

First I'd like to point out that this novel is basically a carbon copy of Throne of Magical Arcana. If you read both of them back to back for 20 chapters, you'll be sold about this point. Both live in a world of magic, both worlds of magic have a religious background setting. Both religious background settings are hostile to any magic besides their own. In this way, Throne of Magical Arcana is head and shoulders above this paultry copycat. The only thing that separates these two novels, and I suspect the only reason there hasn't been a lawsuit filed against this plagiarizing piece of crap author is the fact that this story has no musical elements, which in Throne of Magical Arcana, is the major selling point for the first arc.

Beyond that, the writing in itself is subpar in its execution, the synopsis mentions a "microchip" that allows the MC to use magic more easily than any other spell caster in the story. This isn't exactly new content and it certainly doesn't break any tropes. The problem with this is the fact that for the first twenty chapters this thing is completely absent. There's no mention of it, in fact, there's no mention of anything having to do with the previous world the MC lived in. Not a single sentence was used to describe anything but the most basic of basic tropes of how the MC died. There's no "want to go back" there's no "I miss my family" there's nothing in this story to show that the MC even came from another world besides the very most basic of basic analogies that the MC sometimes uses to describe things in his mind to us the reader. And even this is very lacking, it's so pathetic that my assessment of it is that the author found it horrendously difficult to come up with a plot that didn't make these analogies. It's not surprising to me really, he copied Throne of Magical Arcana's plot, so he clearly lacks imagination. It doesn't surprise me in the least that he couldn't come up with a nicer way to describe things in his story besides using analogies that fit our world. Getting back on topic, the "microchip" is completely absent for twenty whole chapters and when it finally does show up, it shows up in such a ridiculously plot armory way that I don't even know what to do with it. There's no clever execution, there's nothing to hide it. It's literally "Oh, this is how I'm supposed to do magic, oh damn that's really hard!" "I really wish I had !@$@%!" *Poof* "!@$@% Has been acquired.". LITERALLY. THAT IS LITERALLY WHAT HAPPENS. YOU CAN GO LOOK AT IT YOURSELF!

Don't even get me started about more nonsense that happens in this novel. One thing I hate the most about novels is how they sometimes forget their own past plot. Like how something at the start of a story is really important but later on you stop and realize that the major plot point that the entire novel is built around isn't even being mentioned anymore.

The mc makes choice to practice fire magic. "Ok."
The mc decides to practice fire magic inside his house. "eh"
The mc makes huge fire ball of death 3 times more powerful than all the other fireballs he released so far.
Super-Fireball explodes shaking his entire basement and leaves a massive meter wide crater on the ground.
Mc is unharmed and no1 in the house above him feels anything.

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A Wizard's Secret
2 months ago
The pros is he can absorb positive emotions meaning he gets stronger

The cons is he is getting weaker whrn someone put negative emotions on him

What about killing intent? And very thick hatred

2/10 ability

Almost useless
He isnt a king or a good leader
In the future more and more people will gonna know him meaning more enemies more negative View More
Mutagen · C45
3 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Mutagen · C11
3 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Mutagen · C11
3 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Mutagen · C11
3 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Mutagen · C11
3 months ago

Killer_Looks: Theoratically that might be true but he was warned that if he didn’t do it he might die, if he didn’t have the jade aquarius ki, his body would have melted a couple of times.

Way of the Devil · C214
3 months ago

Exallion: Next, about the gangsters not having guns, I see, you live in the US. FYI gangsters in our country differed from what you can find there. Our gangsters here, specially minor aged ones, resort more on improvised weapons unless they are a part of a crime syndicate. Another thing, yes, the infected can be lured in by the sound of the gunshot. But, remember where they are? A cinema. Cinema's are built to contain the sounds inside as much as possible even if the doors are not locked.

About asking the mother clean Mei up, duh. Its better for a female to do that especially a mother. She was just defiled by a male and making another male touch her body afterwards is like making everything worse. Geez. Furthermore, though it was embarrassing to do, the intensity with the mother doing it was lesser that making two virgin girls do it.

As for the employee though... nah never mind. I already said that the mother was already walking after the cinema.

Back to the rich fatty, he did not held everyone hostage for correction. He only threatened them into closing the shutters. It was never mentioned that he killed someone, I wonder what you are reading to find that.

As for the flashbacks, it was to introduce the important character. Though it might be a bit cringey I admit, it was at least necessary. Furthermore, she was not the only person who have that kind of chapter.

As for suspecting about the harem format, drop that. Having more female companions doesn't constitute to a harem where there wasn't even a romance part on it. Furthermore, there are many women around Mark in the current chapters (Chapter 132) but none of them had a romantic relation or interest to the MC even except for Mei.

As for the cliches, I won't say anything about it. Anyone can find one or two in every novel since every single possible character personality can be regarded as one. Not only that, cliches are accumulated plots and characteristics compiled from the predecessor serials, novels, movies and stories. It was almost impossible to find something that had not been used before and can't be regarded as a cliche. If you can write one without a single cliche, then, I'll bow to you.

There are times the MC shows a hero like side but there was always a reason to that and the reasons are always at the later chapters. That is also why you say that it was incomplete, because what you have read is just the beginning not even the middle, lest the conclusion. There are always answers to the things you are saying incomplete. While some could be seen if you just contemplate for it quite deeply, most of the answers are stated in the later chapters.

Now if I have to ask??? You're not the first one but why does everyone that gives a low review barely even touched the beginning of the story.

Mutagen
3 months ago

Exallion: Well, yes. I admit that there are flaws in the first chapters and I already stated before that I have yet to revise the first chapters that had very poor grammar on them. I think, its like that for until chapter 30 I think. The grammar had already improved about that time. As for the ones the I haven't revised yet, their turn will come in the future.

About the story, let me enlighten you.

There's no service for phones, no police and no one new about the outbreak in the area. If you search about the location of the place the story happened in a map, you will see that it is quite a location south west of Luzon in the Philippines. Considering that its scenario the outbreak had was a spreading one, it was late for people in this place to notice it specially for people on the road.

No police? it was because they were already deployed somewhere else and try to contain the outbreak or at least block them from reaching this area! Remember the traffic? It was because the police had blocked the roads already. With the infected coming to their location, it was obvious that their ranks had already been breached! So what police are you looking for? Of course you will see them at other places than this place as its not like every policeman was in the area to be deployed. I don't know why you are asking about the guards though when they are there.

Next, you want to know why the infected seem to go after the men with the guns? Geez, you said it, they have guns! They attract the infected more that the running people for their noisy shooting.

Shooting skill? Where is that? If I'm correct, he already missed his target several times. He was just too close that time to miss. Also about the guard??? If you read chapter 16, the guard appearing there was too much accidental.

About the other characters, I don't know why you are fussing about them too much, the three you even complained about, though they affected some parts of the main story, are just side characters. If you read later chapters, you will know that he came there for Ange and Paula with the mother and daughter being a tag along. He also just brought the employee for convenience. If you remember, it was mentioned that he was the most fit looking one of the three. The introductions of those people though came a bit later since there are no time for them to introduce themselves.

The mother surviving that far can be constituted to luck. Not every person can be unlucky unless you are reading a dark fantasy themed novel.

About the daughter though... What are you talking about? First, she was carried by Paula and after the cinema, she was being carried by her mother. The mother only suffered sprain and not like her foot is broken. Now, I doubt if you really read the story at all.

As for the gangsters. I know that it was more efficient to just kill them but duh, its not like his ammo was infinite. If your thinking right, it was better for the gangsters to just flee and not make him waste ammo. He only resorted to shooting when the gangsters did not looked fazed and tried to retaliate.

As for the gangsters luring them back, don't think of it. Its not like the gangster slowly ran out of the cinema for them to think of returning. With the threat of death at the cinema, of course the gangster would try to flee where the threat would be lesser and that is further away. If you noticed, the number of infected at the corridor was almost nonexistent in the next chapters. It was a place not that known by the customers and of course only the employees had access to these places. That is also the reason why they are heading for that corridors in the first place. Furthermore, it was not a wuxia where enemies would resort to mutual destruction with the protagonist. Leading the infected back? they would sure die without chances of bringing Mark along with them. A cinema is large, by the time they entered back to lead the infected, Mark have all the time to run away and lock them

Mutagen
3 months ago
Ilove realistoc apocalypse novel i hooe this continues View More
Mutagen · C0
3 months ago

raptorfalcon: This story started great. So great in fact, that I moved on to the raws in the hopes of reading ahead and then...I dropped it. Why might you ask? Well... extreme nonsensical racism....spoilers to follow.....
[spoiler]
In the story the MC considers white Caucasians extremely inferior and even labels them as disgusting eggs ("white skin yellow hair"). He goes on to proclaim the absolute supremacy of Chinese traditions and history as well as insult and denigrate others including the biblical and Greek beliefs/mythology. Even Buddhism gets insulted and labeled inferior. He associates white people with Nazi symbols and Aryan beliefs while clearly painting a rather clear point of how the Chinese are superior. Not only that, but by chapter 150 he has already become strong enough to kill a "lame" and "loser" titan...
[/spoiler]
The arrogance of this MC and writer got beyond my tolerance and thus I decided there are many other series worth my time. The fact that the same ridiculous and fundamentally flawed mythical nonsense gets explained multiple times does not help either...

Legend of the Mythological Genes
3 months ago

Ben_Regnard: I gave up on this by chapter 15 because of the translation quality. The world doesn’t seem well thought out either. Other than that it seems like a basic power up fantasy.

Cthulhu Gonfalon
3 months ago
Reading Status: C43
He is not acting the way chinese should act? Lol
Maybe i am too engrossed reading typical chinese novels

Pretty disappointing that he is not doing anything to increase his strength in later chapters
But just gathering followers and acting like a babysitter. View More
Cthulhu Gonfalon
3 months ago

iyoureancestor: Just kill all... -_- the mc is so-so.
In the past chapters he killed the others without hesitation but when this dragon is his enemy his all talk lol. he's a god ,dragons is no match to him. That group of dragons is arrogant and ignorant .

Cthulhu Gonfalon · C42
3 months ago

crazyforyaoiXD: He have power to create a body for others but no to chance his own body XD Why dont chacen his body to human ?

Cthulhu Gonfalon · C14
3 months ago

DepthDweller: Anyone else wondering how four girls carried 20 foot tall chicken-men monsters?

Cthulhu Gonfalon · C9
3 months ago

Marlbrough: Did you even read? It's normal sea, MC just can't get deeper than 2 meters in his soul form. Or you think whales live deep underwater?

Cthulhu Gonfalon · C3
3 months ago

SkyAeon235: This translation quality..... Are you trying to compete with "Invisible Dragon," or something? 'Cause you're pretty dang close to it. Just so you know.

Cthulhu Gonfalon · C3
3 months ago

Edge: Two little questions. How did he know how to make adjustments to the jellyfish body, and how come a whale living in a 2-meter depth water can be called "giant"?

Cthulhu Gonfalon · C3
3 months ago

WritesNonsense: ? what the, how did he eat the fish at the end? is a part of the translation missing? do Chinese jellyfish have fish scales? can they make things from what they eat? What is going on? >.>

Cthulhu Gonfalon · C3
3 months ago

YoungNoble: This story is way too stupid. Jellyfish don't have bones!! At first I thought the MC was meant to be really dumb but it's clear that the author is the clueless one. When have you ever seen a jellyfish use tentacles to swim? How does that even work?? They inflate themselves with water and and squeeze it out to propel their bodies forward. Even kids know that! You can see it just by watching them float around. And just a tiny bit of Googling is enough to learn that jellyfish have mouths! The best he can do now is retcon it by saying this world has different jellyfish later but it'd still be BS because if he really meant that he'd have mentioned it the moment the MC encountered them. I was excited by a cthulu story but this isn't looking good

Cthulhu Gonfalon · C3
3 months ago
Go to ******** View More

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I have a Mansion in the Post-apocalyptic World · C494
3 months ago
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