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Heh hope this time under orochimarus defection hiruzen doesnt lett him go. But cant stop him becouse of his disbility given by orochimaru xD he smuggly proclaims it ishis student( singular he only had on xD anko was just a smokescreen) researched jutsu xD

Thats wrong you know ? Blackbeard allready have the yami fruit. Its the whole reason he killed thatch and betrayed the whitebeard pirates? ( they found the fruit but he was to low on the totem poll to get first dibs on it . Thatch was the commander of the numbered fleet.. teach was just a member.. there fore he killed thatch to steal the fruit and ran from the fleet ).

Kinda like the idee of the mc greed being misunderstood as a function off his mythical zoan fruit xD red dragons being the greediest xf heck could even belive he gets stronger the bigger his hoard gets ( explanation for where his money goes.. they beliving he has pocket dimension or something for his hoard xD )

ask them to open a branch clan in konoha ( some of the talented clan members.. with somewhat extensive uzumaki legacy arts ) in exchange ask them to focus on the defensive of there land.. to further that konoha is prepered to give the uzumaki the jutsu shadow clone and its mass shadow clone conter part.( uzumakis massive chakra should make the jutsu a massive force multiplayer not just in fighting but making fujin to xD ) secundly give them the secunds research on flying thunder ;)

Pakura. not really feeling the whole missing nin route later eather xD kinda more looking to trying to become the fourth kazekage instead xD

Hiruzen should seriously consider bringing upp for the uzumaki clan to imigrate to konoha... i mean the next war the enemy nations would surely make common cause to attack uzushio.. while konoha is busy on several fronts.. and one clan no matter how numerous couldnt fight against two full ninja villages ( if i remember my naruto map kiri and kumo would be the obvious suspect.. just holding there frontlines while they copperate to smash uzu.. might not curbstomp them directly like in canon but surely uzumaki attrition in a prolonged sluging match with two ninja villages wouldnt end well... and if they stay they would just become a constant battlefield between the ninja nations.)

It fells wrong for orochimaru to not allways refer to the third by -Sensei (all to goad him now )

Interesting to se what happens if you give the kaguya clan both hashirama cells and loose sharingan eyes? ( especially kimimaro who has unlocked the bone release) since they are also a branch off the outsuki rabit lady ;)

Great idea

I mean laura is basicly a wolverine clone.. so give her jump jets on her bots to give her more mobility

A thought since high level observation haki can se seconds into the future.. mc could tell selective few as a ss level village secret ( only minato) that he has trained it to such a extreme can some times se far into the future at random .( could be used as a excuse for important meta knowledge) it could even be more likly when a nother trains observation to se seconds into the future..

Like the idee subduing mito with sealing chains then slapping two top grade fuin on her ( the kind she didnt have the right to learn) 1st totaly sealing off the 9 tales from her and making it impossible for konoha to transfer him to a other host ( basicly kurama dying with his host.. takes years for him to assembel again ;) second slapping a secrecy seal on her brain sealing all knowledge on fuin allso adding a geass on forbidding konoha from possesing uzumaki fuin to mito. Making her spill all fuin related matters to mc.. so he can go and destroy it xF cool if sorta like odin bannishing thor.. -mito clanless traitor off Uzushiogakure.

Interesting idee to present his awakened devil fruit as the most powerful Kekkei tōta in existance ( only dust release was ever shown and that was 3 elements) could call it Space Release and its made upp of all 5 elements xD ( it could be like mokutan and not be passed down to his offspring xD )

Like the thought of wakanda like ancient atlantis was apart of the ancient war against darksides first invasion... so atlantis and amazons have stories about them..like eldorado..was not in the new world but the oldest continent ;)( humanitys birtplace africa)

He should have lost the konoha skill tree since going missing nin? Hmm dont like the thought of mc getting a missing nin skill tree.. prefer he gets a "missing nin" trait that scales with his increased infamy? Like increases learning speed/leveling..maybe a cost reduction to his main skill tree( uchicha)

Hmm when mc meets the orphans. Tell nagato it isnt his rinnegan.explain he is clearly a uzimaki and not a uchicha..( he didnt unlock sharingan first) use mc being a uzimaki and learning from uzimakis( alude to mc getting a comprehensive inheritance of the clan) to explain his extensive knowledge of the sage and the clans who sprang from him.uchicha/hyugga got the eyes(rinnegan/tenseigan) senju/uzimaki the body/chakra.. kaguya the lesser bones.

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A Then maybe focus on the transformation ? ( its e grade i believe) i mean the if mc could push it/invent it far enough transform into objects/animals would have endless applications for a ninja..