Badges 3
Moments 5
2yr
Commented PLEASE READ! Author is too rushed !!!
Nisekoi
Kengan match
Baki
Hsd kenichi specially
Can have more slow tempo writing and school could more well written. (Well I am glad already you are still writing, but they are my favorite martial art series and you just throw all of them into sao.😭🤮 )
please write them about more.
--- hsd kenichi especially his plot should be useful with how world of martial arts began to change.
ch 360 So weak, they can’t deal with a single hair strand.
Ascending to Supremacy
Anime & Comics · Sinning_Sovereign
3yr
Commented Your writing style seperated your main character as a powerful being and destroy the your characters adventure and fun outright by going to naruto . You are giving oportunitys to naruto and you want to him to travel other worlds like he is the fucking main character.
You destroyed whole naruto world adventure of your character and thinking other main characters more than your own written caracter .
If you write a main character you can freely write it I don't bother you, but at least tell us who the fucking main character of your novel !!! And where is the adventure and world exploring of yor character because all I see is NARUTO and his begining to multiverse adventure.
Sorry if I am harsh but at least you should understand your writing is naruto fanfiction not your main character fanfiction. You should rewrite it.
ch 0 5 Chapter 5 - Naruto's training.
Power Creation
Anime & Comics · ilovepizza9
3yr
Commented Chakra conrol can make you run on water like ground. It is a good skill.
And do you train elemental affinities? Stonger level affinities you have stronger the jutsu destructive powers. Madara definitely trained fire chakra like lunatic. Power that rank jutsu in the ninja war posess is definitely diffent from b rank jutsu powers.
And you can make pure chakra denser and more powerful too with chakra amount growing !!!
ch 0 8 Someone must pay!
Living The Dream With My System!
Anime & Comics · CouchPotatoDandy
3yr
Commented Can you please delete where you just give others than his wife two of the most potentially powerful bloodline in the universes" the saiyan and phoenix " like fucking cabbage? Really I dont want to mess with writer's thoughts but these bloodlines are even with most garbage purity with training you can just **** whole noblesse series seriously!!! (son goku is born with 2 power level [most garbage low level warrior bloodline] but with ki understanding and training he become strongest in 12 universe)
Life fountain you gave is already too much owerpowered man!!!! Ban sin of fox, can't even die when you throw him purgatory and destruct his body and you give them saiyan zenkai + phoneix bloodline.
Please stop giving too much because you love particular character and series (frankestein) like charity and dont make series whole power level messed up in the begining!!!
Infinite zenkai saiyan because you cant kill it any of characters now!!! OP!!!!!
If you are gay and raizel x frankestein supporter just think I talk nonsense 😅
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Roaming around the Multiverse
Anime & Comics · Lazy_Coffin
Reader007
ch 0 7 Blind Bandit
Sokka Time
Anime & Comics · SOSboa