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a_daoist_: Author has been lazy recently

Ancient Godly Monarch · C1495
1 year ago

xurimx: Fucking trash talking fucking fillers .l.

Ancient Godly Monarch · C1495
1 year ago

Asamoah: When I saw the title of this chapter, I thought that our MC would be trading blows with the crown Prince immediately. I didn't expect Jun Mencheng who is in no way related to this fight to talk for so long effectively ruining this chapter. Smh

Ancient Godly Monarch · C1494
1 year ago

AuthorWiz: "Thank you for the time you took to read this, and I hope you won't simply brush this off as a rant by a salty author that didn't get popular."

You do indeed come off to me somewhat disingeous at times. For example, your proclamation that I have a bad attitude, bad grammar, criticizing my plot while only having read a very small number of chapters (the plot wouldn't even be revealed to you) etc.

And your implications that the only reason my book is popular is because QI promotes it.

No.

It is popular because it is a well written, engaging story that many people love to read. Something I earned through my own merits, well before signing a contract.

I went into my reply to you wanting to be polite and honest, and I have been.

But I won't remain silent when you spread blatant lies.

"Because that isn't why I'm writing this. I'm writing this because I have noticed that there seem to be very very few reviews that point out the flaws of this novel, and I believe that readers deserve a chance to know both sides of the coin - the flaws and the good par"

You have a point that some people may dislike my style.

The rest of your review holds little merit, in my eyes, for the reasons mentioned above.

"In case this review is deleted because a certain website loves to delete reviews that reflect negatively on one of the novels that are contracted (original and translated works alike), I have a screenshot with the full review."

I have never requested or asked for any of my reviews to be deleted, even the ones that reek of dishonesty like yours.

"Enjoy the rest of your day."

The same to you.

Reborn: Evolving From Nothing
1 year ago

AuthorWiz: Whoops, onerous was supposed to be ominous, can't believe I missed that typo for so long. Thanks for pointing it out!

Reading is subjective, and even masterpieces from the greats have critics that abhor their work. I apologize you had such a bad experience reading the first chapter of my book.

Did you read beyond the first chapter?

I read through your review, because I read through all the reviews people leave me, and I figured I would give you a genuine response.

To the first part of your comment, about my phrasing and style:

Your interpretation is of course your own, subjective to yourself. If my style rubs you wrongly, you are more than welcome to hold that opinion. Many others don't, but I'm sure there are some like yourself that will feel the same way. Thank you for leaving your reply.

"Keep in mind that these are only some of the errors that have occurred in the first paragraph, which only consists of 3 sentences. Furthermore, I have read many reviews that claim that the quality goes down as more chapters are released.

You have read "many reviews" that claim that? I'm aware of one or two people making the claim that the quality goes down (I don't agree with that at all, but everyone is welcome to their own opinion). I'm not sure I would quantify that as "many reviews."

"I can only imagine how terrible the writing becomes as the author focuses more on quantity than quality, assuming he's focusing on quality in the first few chapters in an attempt to lure people into reading his novel."

I must admit I laughed at your comment here. You make me sound so nefarious.

I put my all into my writing, believe it or not, and the quality of my writing now is just as good, if not better, than it was when I started the story.

"I fail to recognize why this novel deserves first place, as I can find countless novels with a better plot,

You don't seem to have read beyond the first chapter, or at least the first couple chapters. How would you know what the plot is about?

"better writing,"

Stylistic writing is, of course, subjective, so you are more than welcome to disagree and dislike my style.

"better grammar,"

My grammar is among the best of the stories written here. Not really debatable.

"better editors,"

When have I ever mentioned editors?

I feel like you aren't quite being honest with your review of me.

"and better authors (in terms of attitude)."

My attitude?

?

"The only things that this has going for it are 1) the author signed a contract so WN is naturally promoting it"

Before my novel signed a contract, I worked my way all the way to the Number 1 spot, without WN promoting it beyond winning a writing contest (non-contracted, completely free writing).

I have *far* more going for me then that.

I have a well-written story, an expansive plot, a wide cast of characters, an immersive world, and more.

"2) building on the first point, WN has a dedicated bot army"

I am unaware of any "bot army" doing anything for me, or for anyone. I clawed my way to Rank 1 far before anything of that sort could have ever taken place, and don't see how it would change anything if something like this did exist.

"3) as the author is beginning to focus on quantity so he will be able to push out a large number of chapters, he should have a somewhat consistent release rate, which, as I have discovered, easily pushes your novel up the rankings."

I have always had daily releases, in the early days of my novel and in the latter days.

I have never "focused on quantity" I have always had my normal, daily releases.

I will contine my reply in a second commeent.

Reborn: Evolving From Nothing
1 year ago

MOrteza: EXP

Swallowed Star · C1054
1 year ago

Burningice12167: xp

Swallowed Star · C1054
1 year ago

Swem: Dao of Exp, to me!

Swallowed Star · C1054
1 year ago

Doris_y: Please support us at https://***.patreon.com/user?u=14661807 to enjoy the Audio Version of Swallowed Star. Our trial release for the audio book project is from Nov 4th - Dec 4th, hope all fans of this book will love it!

Swallowed Star · C1052
1 year ago

matamora: "Some of the patterns on the stone allowed for sight"
....
What?

Swallowed Star · C1052
1 year ago
Weaker in numbers or maybe they don't have a supreme universe master View More

EternalDao: "The Thorn Ring Alliance is way weaker than us, and all they can send are some universe overlords."....
"Eventually, a Universe Master from the Thorn Ring Alliance arrived and inspected the original star...."
Really? Come on now.

Swallowed Star · C1047
1 year ago

LOSTLEGEND: Imagine if luo gets a treasure to amplify his self-destruction attack. He will spread the legend of the kamikaze knight.

Swallowed Star · C1047
1 year ago

Lazybee: Plot armor so thick that even universe master is unable to hurt a sector lord. Damn, this book keeps getting better and better.

Swallowed Star · C992
1 year ago

Yusen: Please tell me that "Godly Kingdom" is not supposed to be "god country" teleportation because that would be shameful...

Swallowed Star · C943
1 year ago

Triplecheck: Behold Nine Volumes Manuel, the ultimate Spanish warrior in the universe!

Swallowed Star · C943
1 year ago

Theta: Rip... Right hoof used to be right claw

Swallowed Star · C943
1 year ago

Zarivon: "Godly Kingdom" was "God Country"... Kingdom is fine just cut out the "ly", it's unnecessary and sounds wrong. The pieces of Nameless Manual/Nine-Calamity Tome were referred to as "metal boards" rather than "metals"... metals is awkward English.

Swallowed Star · C943
1 year ago

PeerlessSun: Keep voting as 1 star until they change the terms. Like my comment to let the word spread!

Swallowed Star · C935
1 year ago

EXPLOSIONGOD: Hmm... Another lucky inheritance this totally does not seemed forced or, like the author is just being lazy

Swallowed Star · C935
1 year ago

Mistborn: Changing well established names and terminologies after 900+ chapters is just showing us readers that the new team is giving a big fcuk u to the previous translators and loyal readers and giving us the middle finger. Please switch back to the previous versions. It doesn’t make you lose face just cause you’re not constantly slapping the face of the previous translator

Swallowed Star · C933
1 year ago
Fucking comment win View More

Novo: Sneaky humansies.... greedy humansies.... seeking to make a foolsy out of ole Silver.... but Silver smart.... Silver determined.... must get... my precious.... my precious..... Internetz!

Swallowed Star · C931
1 year ago

Novo: Sneaky humansies.... greedy humansies.... seeking to make a foolsy out of ole Silver.... but Silver smart.... Silver determined.... must get... my precious.... my precious..... Internetz!

Swallowed Star · C931
1 year ago

RebelTheEditor: and once again the translator and editor give not one f u c k about the readers!! this novel is now so hard to read all my enthusiasm has been lost

Swallowed Star · C928
1 year ago

PandaChan: "The phantom of beast god charged him roaring, and the tail that was longer than the original body made the beast god anxious."
Its not that I don't want to support this translator, but the more I read the more I get confused. So is the Beast God fighting itself? What's going on with this Chapter?

Swallowed Star · C928
1 year ago

Pillsaint: is it just me or the translation language is getting worse since the last chapter?

Swallowed Star · C928
1 year ago

BankaiLinley: what did i even read???

Swallowed Star · C927
1 year ago

Sady: this translation is a mess...

Swallowed Star · C927
1 year ago

AMintedMuffin: "Let me change ALL the terms to show off my mASStery of the English language." - this translator

Swallowed Star · C927
1 year ago

DarknessGuardian: Actually nothing is better than this mess. They should just let it rot till they picked a translator that listens to its consumers

Swallowed Star · C927
1 year ago

BeefyMeaty: "Bone emperor suddenly even more unbelievable". Ok now this is more than just cringed worthy. I can barely hang on with all the mouthful of blood I've already spit out.. It seems my dao heart and will is not firm enough. I must temper myself more in the dao of machine translation.

Swallowed Star · C924
1 year ago
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