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Killerbee: So, here is your author here but I will not just give a shameless review here. I will tell you all the good and the bad points of this novel.
You can decide to read it or not after that.
The good points:
A calm MC: Lu Fei is mature, not brainless just because he's OP or something. He used to be a mercenary in a fantasy world, so he experienced the so called human nature there. He's not a guy who would blush talking to girls or hesitate to even insult them.
The game: Ark is going to be one of the highlights of the novel as the whole novel is mostly based on it. NPCs would just like be regular people and the interaction between them and Lu Fei would be one of the highlights of the novel.
Weak to strong: Lu Fei would not just become too OP from the start. He would struggle and even die sometimes but he would still be stronger than an average player.
Romance: It's one of the points I am confident you will like. It's going to be sweet, like really sweet. There would be more than one girl liking him but I can't say about the harem.
Characters: Characters would be unique and even some typical characters will have some unique points or a back story.
Chapters: The chapters will be 2k in length, which is above average in WN terms.
The bad points:
The start: The first ten chapters can get annoying to some people as there would be some info dump and the game part will only start on the 6th chapter.
Similar start: Many people will feel that the start is similar to other novels. A debt and a sister to take care of, but it will change as the story will progress.
Plot holes: There would be some plot holes in the novel. I can't do anything about it as every novel have it.
Not an OP MC: I know that VR novels in WN is filled with an OP MC who had come from the future and knows everything. This is bad point because most of the users look for an OP MC.
I can't think of more bad points and it's up to the readers to decide in the end.
I will advise the readers to read both bad and good reviews before reading the novel. Give a review, either positive or negative.
I don't think there would be any problems with the grammar unless one is a grammar Nazi. I will end my words here.VRMMO: The Returnee
KONO_DIO_DA: Bruh it's been confirmed that all his novels that has Lin Fan are all different universes created by the original Lin Fan (Strongest System) when he went to sleep in the void for all eternity. So the Lin fan in this novel is actually a dream he's having right now.I Don't Want To Defy The Heavens
True_Sheol: 他儿子的国籍是哈国的 --> The nationality of his son is Kazakhstan
Is there a reason why the translator censored the country's name? Politics?Path of Medicine With a System · C34
David_Tieku: My 👀are spinning from staring at my computer screen for so long.King of Sports · C104
SunruT: "What are you doing?!?!" The staff member yelled. "I'm trying to beat this DavidT a$$!"sunrut exclaimed loudly.
"Cuz he's writing the shortest chapters in history so he can play Mario kart instead!"
"Ah...this should help." the staff member said while handing over a baseball bat.King of Sports · C103
David_Tieku: "Wait wait no I'm not" *closes Mario Kart*
"Put the bat down we can talk about this, I'll make the chapter longer tomorrow extra long okay. Just calm down"
Bit short today but longer chapter coming tomorrow.
But beware though that you brought this upon yourself because that just means it's gonna cost more spirit stones 🤷♂️🤠King of Sports · C103
Rebirth of the Entertainment Giant · C240
_RVNGER_: U KNOW WHAT THIS NOVEL IS ACTUALLY A TOP 22 RANKING IN THE OFFICIAL MUNPIA WEBSITE AND YET NO ONE WANT TO PICK THIS UP......It has Views about 6,7 Million in the munpia and i wonder why the heck this novel is in hiatus...This is real gem here, a treasure. Now it was just pure torture to waiting for this novel to get updated EVERYDAY. This novel is interesting to say the least and not considering the rarity of a FOOTBALL novel. There are many demands of a sport novel. Its just no one want to do it. It was aggravating. It was unfair and I really hate the fact that a good sport novel really never got attention they deserve and I HOPE THERE WILL BE UPDATE SOOOONNNNNNN.All Soccer Abilities Are Now Mine!
God of Money
: What is this...? Every Korean novel that come out never get front page highlight/promotion like every Chinese novel that just got release. If you look at the trend, 99% of the Korean novel get ninja add on to the site. The only one I saw one for less than 1-3 day on the front page was, I alone solo/level-up and the world turned into a game after I woke up. Every other korean novel get shove to the corner of the site. Even searching through the site is extremely hard when there is no option for korean genre search option. . . But whatever. M.u.n.p.i.a. must be crazy if. . . if they think their novel getting the same treatment as Qidian's novel.12 Hours After
PostmanAmon: No love interest in the latest chapter on rawsLord of the Mysteries
Neptunegodfather: Can you tell me the name of this girl.?Lord of the Mysteries
It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future · C478
Khaz_: Does anyone know if there will be any romantic subplot in this novel? I really enjoy subplot with Natasha in TOMA and would love to see something similar hereLord of the Mysteries
Leylin_Farlier: 2 deleted comments in a row, noice! And yeah, it is actually pretty good. Though I will warn you that the novel takes a turn after a while and pushes the focus away from the MC (can't remember, its either around 200 or 260 chapters in that it does this), which to me makes it harder to read. The novel is a lot of fun until that happens and manages to explain most football terms to even newbies like me. Even if you drop it once the MC takes the backburner the 200 chapters before are still a real treat. (If you actually like football, then the chapters after MC gets sidelined aren't that bad, but as someone who likes the novel instead of the sport it isn't for me after that).Lord of the Mysteries
skylarias: Really looking forward to this novel. So far, 26 chapters in, we have the male MC who gets thrown between modern China and a feudal alternate world every three days. He can't control this, nor is there any reason given for his abilities. Time runs slower in the other world though, so when he spends three days there, ten have passed in China. Which leads to some problems when he gets thrown there without warning.
The MC himself is super average. His only advantage is that he can look things up when he flips back into the modern world. Which is perfect, because I was getting tired of MCs that remember minute and obsolete production processes (I'm looking at you, Release the Witch, and the MC building a steam engine from scratch). He also can only bring between worlds items that are touching him when he travels. So there's no mass influx of items in either direction, but more of an exchange of ideas.
Based on the title, I expect there to be romance at some point. By the way, the empress is a badass. There's no indication of a harem, but unfortunately you never know.The Empress's Gigolo
tanen: I still find it hard to believe that there's a CN where the ML is not borderline rapistMartial Arts Master · C367
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