Webnovel Author: Ironlotuce - Novel Collection

Ironlotuce

4mth

Commented

Boooo, dont litsen to them. I am a big fan of the deranged giggling, mwahaha. I feel like people act seriously and dour because they are putting on a mask (or they went through trauma) and since this mc's greatest wish is to be free, being able to get rid of the mask and be his inner child is the greatest proof of his freedom. So ride on, deranged giggling, you are a symbol of freedom!

The baffled expressions of the rest of the nobles is far too much for me and I burst into a fit of childish giggles.

Ironlotuce

4mth

Commented

Well, it might just be because women had wider hip-bones during medieval times, requiring less pushing, allowing them to recover faster. On top of that, babies today have wider heads compared to medieval times due to larger brain sizes. These two evolutionary trends work synergistically against mothers today and make birthing more difficult.

'Damn! Talk about culture shock! I can't even begin to imagine a 21st century woman just popping out a baby, latching it on to her titty, and then sitting down to start shucking corn!

Reincarnated Into The Witcher Universe: Sorc'n It Up, Witcher Style

Video Games · ChaosSlimeGod

Ironlotuce

6mth

Commented

correlation between the two, not coloration.

"I don't see the coloration between those two, but I'll see what I can do."

Ironlotuce

6mth

Commented

tiered= tiredpowder not (forgot what's there), and let the heat of the campfire (your sentence sounds awkward without campfire)

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Ironlotuce

6mth

Commented

I think the word you're thinking of is "pained" instead of painted. plus at the top, maybe you can say "attract unwanted attention" or "attract the attention of some unpleasant people" instead.

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Ironlotuce

6mth

Commented

"weak" not week.

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Ironlotuce

6mth

Posted

This story is very interesting the author does a great job not only building the world but also the character. Usually with stories this long, the plot becomes repetitive after the first few hundred chapters or the MC becomes overpowered and everything becomes boring. This story though manages to not only make every moment very entertaining, but also realistic. I admit sometimes when the author tries to explain something I find it a bit dry, but it helps in understanding the world better and these dry sections don't last very long so I am okay with them. On top of that, at the beginning of the story, the story was confusing since the author was not consistent (e.g. they first mentioned a Pokemon potential was blue but later they said green, then said blue again) but I promise you, the writing quality does get better so stick with it. In the end, I have become a fan and can't wait for more updates!

I Am The Owner Of A Pokémon Day Care In The Pokémon World

Anime & Comics · bearnard_bear97

Ironlotuce

7mth

Commented

I think it should be "not counting them" since they later count 4 pokemon.

Counting them, including the one in his hands, a total of four Pokémon had hatched this time.

I Am The Owner Of A Pokémon Day Care In The Pokémon World

Anime & Comics · bearnard_bear97

Ironlotuce

8mth

Posted

Whoof doggy is definitely a slow start, where in the beginning like many other people I thought the author had gone too far, there is no possible way the MC can ever amount to anything since he has been nerfed too hard. But I continued the story due to how realistic the MC's reactions are, and it panned out (specifically when he became a genin). The MC started improving, and the author's realistic style lets you immerse yourself in the world, making you feel more involved (I also feel like the author stopped doing abrupt cuts, and the whole story became smoother to follow). Although there are still some aspects I don't like (like how he seems to go deeper and deeper into the life of crime and Uchiha people) every action has a flow to it, a reason it has happened, and I am excited to see how he overcomes those challenges. Great job author, you've dragged me into your world!

Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

Anime & Comics · FictionOnlyReader

Ironlotuce

9mth

Commented

Hmm considering he used to cook snakes by directly putting them IN the fire, I am also feeling suspicious.

"You're going to cook for me? You can cook?" She blurts in minor shock.

(COMPLETE) A Murder Wizards Adventures

Anime & Comics · Bored_MC

Ironlotuce

10mth

Posted

The beginning was kind of tedious since the author was going in-depth about how this world was different from the original and so on, but after a few chapters and cases where the system finally activated, things started picking up and running from there. It became really amazing when it was not heavily sticking to the plot of detective conan, and the MC was acting like a human instead of someone just following the plot. Really love the story and can't wait for more.

Famous Police Detective in Detective World

Anime & Comics · Lightreaper

Ironlotuce

1yr

Commented

I think "secrete" will be a better fit here instead of "excrete". Excrete is more conscious expulsion/seperation, a.k.a pooping while secreting is an unconscious thing, like sweat.

"Please don't tell Al! I know he was a bit...uhm, protective to you all and I was afraid that he will beat me to a pulp." River began to excrete a cold sweat after he imagining what would happen if he really hit on Laura.

Hollywood RE:CODED

Realistic · BukanOrang

Ironlotuce

1yr

Commented

Thank you for the chap! Literary on the edge of my seat.

ch 51 Chapitre 51

MLP:"Little Pony"

TV · Supe3rman1234

Ironlotuce

1yr

Commented

I thought he can now waterbend?

''Soon. I'm very close to learning Energybending thanks to the valiant efforts and sacrifices of some criminals.''

Lord of Fire is a Gamer

Anime & Comics · Lowkeygoodstuff

Ironlotuce

1yr

Commented

what happened to the character draw he got from killing the pirate captain? Why is he not using water jutsu or genjutsu?

ch 22 Chapter 022: Amaterasu!

One Piece Starting with Uchiha Itachi's Template

Anime & Comics · theTripleX_HSA

Ironlotuce

1yr

Commented

why doesn't he try to give some to octavia to see if she can replicate it?

Konrad looked at the small pile of gemstones and for a second felt like a pirate and just wanted to laugh and flaunt his wealth but he stopped the silly urges and took a small Hade into his hand.

•Blood Gacha•

Fantasy · Blacklares

Ironlotuce

1yr

Commented

Spelling: Probably meant "week" instead of "weak".

All in all it was a productive weak...

•Blood Gacha•

Fantasy · Blacklares

Ironlotuce

2yr

Commented

Ooofff my ethics teacher would have had his head for not getting consent.

Boss Yang let out a scream, "Ouch!"

Great Doctor Ling Ran

Urban · Village of Ambitious Birds

Ironlotuce

2yr

Replied to jex89

And actually, not all albinos have fair features, the physical trait can range from normal to the extreme that we know of based on what type they have. OCA1 is the most severe, and OCA1B, OCA2, OCA3, and OCA4 are the milder versions that have pigmentation. citation: https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2211462/

Hannah once again went amok as soon as she heard the mocking exhaustion in her brother's voice, "Why do you sound so tired when you just spend hours in your room lazing around? Are you… you know what, never mind. I don't want to know what you albinos get into in the dark."