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I suggest you write fanfiction for us 🙂 View More

Beta_Tauri: There is some people that I want to know what happens to them, like Paper, Snaketooth and company?

Release That Witch · C1497
3 weeks ago

Beta_Tauri: There is some people that I want to know what happens to them, like Paper, Snaketooth and company?

Release That Witch · C1497
3 weeks ago

Bald_Chanyeol_: "whip, handcuffs, small candle... "

"............"

The Daily Life of the Immortal King · C42
3 weeks ago

Bludflag: For those who don’t know, Han Li is the protagonist of RMJI and Wang Lin of “Renegade Immortal.”

Han Li’s starter artifact was a bottle that gathers a kind of essence nocturnally if subject to light. It would usually take a week or so to gather a drop (unless it’s cloudy). A drop can age any plant a century, but it can be diluted with water for a weaker effect—he used this to age herbs a few (two?) years or so, but more than just one at a time.

The Daily Life of the Immortal King · C28
3 weeks ago
Truly on point. Some of the previous chapters felt a bit predictable and the dialogue sounded similar to other novels View More

MichaelArt: It's tons of fun. That's the beauty of LoHP, fun and humour even within dense action and suspense

Library of Heaven's Path · C1674
3 weeks ago

MichaelArt: It's tons of fun. That's the beauty of LoHP, fun and humour even within dense action and suspense

Library of Heaven's Path · C1674
3 weeks ago

Daoist_Arvie: walks openly into the OWD camp then pretends to be a higher ranked OWD, then ask the commander their plans.
**scouting mission achieved**
sneaks attack the commander of OWD
**assassination achieved**
returns with information and victory at hand

Zhang clan:........

Library of Heaven's Path · C1671
3 weeks ago

SauceMaster64: Luo Ruoxin: *opens mouth*

Zhang Xuan: *nods in realization*

Seriously can we have one chapter where ZX finds out for himself instead of relying on her explanations?

Library of Heaven's Path · C1669
3 weeks ago

ElenaCatherine: Okay, now it is getting ridiculous... a reference is all right, but this is just plain plagiarism...

The Daily Life of the Immortal King · C6
3 weeks ago
This medical treatment here is beyond 9-star physician level. 👨‍⚕️👩‍⚕️ View More

SmilingReader: Best way to cure diarrhoea-watch Zhang Xuan defy the odds. After that you’ll be so constipated that you’ll miss having diarrhoea 😅

Library of Heaven's Path · C1667
3 weeks ago

SmilingReader: Best way to cure diarrhoea-watch Zhang Xuan defy the odds. After that you’ll be so constipated that you’ll miss having diarrhoea 😅

Library of Heaven's Path · C1667
3 weeks ago

Randomguy56: Unless I am remembering incorrectly, ZX doesn't actually know how to shape even a simple sword, yet alone a cauldron. All he has ever done to pass the test is to make a lump of metal that is really high quality.

I guess this is the birth of the almighty brick of this universe.

Library of Heaven's Path · C1666
3 weeks ago

Pedant: "However, Zhang Yinglu was just a girl, how could she possibly do something that might risk her life."

No.

Versatile Mage · C41
4 weeks ago

Lahel: Also never really found out why the night monarch died or why the gnomes and high elves returned to feinan when it literally wanted to kill itself as well as the elementals which side did they belong when the water lord said the world is like a cage

Night Ranger · C735
1 month ago

ghrrrr: I am aware this story has been created and translated through great labors and pains but I am also sorry that I read it. This was like the biggest trolling I have ever seen! I once heard the these sentences on tv;
"Endings are hard. Any chapped-ass monkey with a keyboard can poop out a beginning, but endings are impossible. You try to tie up every loose end, but you never can. The fans are always gonna *****. There's always gonna be holes. And since it's the ending, it's all supposed to add up to something. I'm telling you, they're a raging pain in the ass."
Chuck (from supernatural)

I am sorry to say this but although author did great on the "easy" part, he failed epicly in the end. I literrally cant find the words to express my huge dissapointment.

Night Ranger · C735
1 month ago

Lahel: Ma boi diross was left hanging conquering the nine hells we never really found out his goals and side. There is also the 2 rewards that were left out when marvin saved minsk.

Night Ranger · C735
1 month ago
Please try the Zhenqi of Slaughter. Annoying poison. View More
Library of Heaven's Path · C1654
1 month ago

WickedWitch: READ OR RUN??

TRANSLATION QUALITY: Between glaring grammatical errors, names being interchanged and the structure of the novel as a whole, it creates a difficult read. The grammar is ****** which, in theory, should make for an easy and quick read, instead weakeneds the story. The simplistic style highlights all the grammatical mistakes either the author or the translators have made. To be utterly cynical, it makes no sense for there to be as many mistakes as there are due to this being written in a language that is comfortably within the compass of a 10-year-old. They either need to put in more effort, have a new team pick this up or , heck, at this point I will take a freaking editor. All the pLinKesses are making me cringe. I cry bitter hot tears every time I read certain sentences.

STABILITY OF UPDATES: Personally, I do not have much of a preference on this. 10 chapters a week is neither a large amount nor a small amount. BUT, there are translators whom push out more chapters a week at a better quality then what we are reading here. If the translation was better I would be more forgiving, but due to simply mistakes I have to give them a poor rating. I am a fan of quality over quantity.

STORY DEVELOPMENT: The author needs to learn how to show NOT tell. The entire plot must have been carefully outlined, which makes for an excellent foundation, but fell flat in terms execution. The only details you will get is the author waxing a poetic paragraph over certain beautiful characters' appearance.
And the story so far plays out like a paint by numbers or an adventure quide: After reading to chapter 50, I found my attention slipping. I knew that A, B and C would happen and then we would see X result. Then, three chapters later, A, B and C would happen again and then X would, yet again (shocker, I know) be the result. Little to no variation.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: And then there is the narration. Because the writing is not enjoyable, the narration, in consequence, is not either. Plus, I feel extremely disconnected from the characters, especially the MC. I find myself not caring about the circumstances he finds himself in because there is no suspense. No chance of failure. Each step in Link's character progression is transparent and, worse yet, dull.
But not all is a complete waste, the author appears to have written himself into a corner with the MC's ability, making him too OP early on. To counteract this, he creates a system of magic where just because the MC gains the ability to cast spells does not mean he understands the logic and process behind his magic, placing a decent damper on MC's ability.
Unfortunately, this is short lived. The MC gains knowledge and understanding at an alarming rate. If you thought the game system, in which, he could purchase spells (Including Legendary, Hidden, ect.)was an OP ability, you are sorely mistaken. The MC's genius level intellect is in fact his largest cheat skill; gifting him the ability to process, plan and react to situations (some life and death), understand knowledge from the modern world he had difficulty understanding in his previous life and recall all information he so much had glanced at in his previous life (such as the forums). . . Relatable, right.
Whatever. Part of what makes s successful fantasy is the reader being able to suspend disbelief. If the MC either possessed the genius level intellect OR the gaming system, not both. Both skills balance each other out and compliment each other TOO well. He has no weakness. No faults. Nothing terribly interesting.

WORLD BACKGROUND: I find myself more interested in the world, the MC has been transported to the MC himself. Similar to the MC, the reader is drooped into the middle of the story, unlike the MC though we do not possess years of knowledge from gaming. Very little is explained unless the plot calls for it, then we are treated to an information dump on every single thing they hope will distract you long enough till MC's plot armour activates and Houdinis his way out of whatever situation of the week he has landed himself in. I still have little idea how powerful a level 1 is compared to a level 2 or even to a level 3 or 4. Levels are thrown out like yesterday's underwear and I am left with no proper explanation on how powerful someone really us, not just because they possessed a higher number.

FINAL ANALYSIS: Run. I would walk across the desert while eating charcoal briquettes soaked in Tabasco for forty days and forty nights than have to read this novel again.

Advent of the Archmage
1 month ago
How dare he say that he'd rather not waste the time to comprehend Soul Quintessence! Truly maddening hahaha View More
Library of Heaven's Path · C1641
1 month ago

BedlessSleeper: The few people who are complaining about having to use stones, please just stop. You have just read 230+ chapters of this amazing novel, but you haven't contributed or given any reason for the translator to translate. He/She literally got minimum pay because they never added ads to their work. Just watch the ads or use spirit stones, and think it of donating a bit of your appreciation to the translator.

Night Ranger · C230
1 month ago

Seide: I'm just finally happy to see a gay character in a chinese story that isn't villainized or turned into a walking joke

Night Ranger · C191
1 month ago

PrincessPeachfanBR: dude you are sick

Night Ranger · C90
1 month ago

Boy_kun: Red Mist Waiting Room
Hackzord : "Damn, this is a goood flavour."
Elanor : "Hold on, are you drunk?"
Serakkas : *sigh*"Just ignore this hopeless trash."

Release That Witch · C1474
1 month ago

Gta_manic: I totally didn't think about barbed penises, not at all

Night Ranger · C61
1 month ago

Flinchy: Why did it say his potion ran out when he didn't even drink it?

Night Ranger · C55
1 month ago

Dante_The_Immortal: I don't know how of many fellow curious readers with flexible financial ability got duped into buying access to advance 15 chapters and then have to pay again to unlock Chapter 😑 I am here to Press F to pay respect. The Forum is filled with readers who are demanding refund. It shows the harsh reality where we are compelled to read finer print of T&C. I was actually thinking it was a sort of Limited Subscription but not even close looking at the Rate they are charging 😅🤣

Release That Witch · C1468
1 month ago
Vicious? The library? Whoever it is, how lascivious 🤭✊ View More
Library of Heaven's Path · C1618
1 month ago
Why have a duel, Xuanqing. We could've witnessed a perpetually spinning top sooner or later. 😂 View More
Library of Heaven's Path · C1608
1 month ago

cocmars: ...yea....also this
"..hierarchy..with mobility..ensures vitality.."
..what a line 👏

Warlock of the Magus World · C839
1 month ago

ClemCa: If a french read i'll do a citation:
"musculé et huileux !" Bob Lennon of FantaBobGames et TheFantasio974

Warlock of the Magus World · C839
1 month ago
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