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Enjoyable read, easily one of the best stories on the site but grammar could use some work or at least put it though AI, grammarly or some other program. Another solution is to have someone proofread it.

我妻上将军，开局坑杀敌军四十万

I mean there are quite a few out of hundreds that i've read on this website that had some propaganda in it but were worth reading otherwise if you ignore it. That's how whole Chinese population is in a way, also the government is spreading this propaganda, and you also can't write anything bad about Chinese otherwise they'd get arrested, so you can't really blame every author who has a little bit of propaganda in their novel. Though i am not saying that this novel has only little from what i've read in the reviews but the 60 chapters that were released were really good and it is quite unique compared to other similar novels. I can't drop every single novel like that otherwise i wouldn't have much to read on this site, that doesn't mean that i support racism if it is the main focus of the novel, i'll easily drop it when i see it happening.

I just noticed your review was the dumbest, i don't read all reviews and do you think i care if someone has likes or not? Almost every novel on this website that is translated from qidian that has any relation to real life will have some part of racism, you need to learn to ignore it or leave the site. Also from what i've heard this novel doesn't have rape but would i care if it happens in 1 chapter out of 1000? i'll just ignore it while i enjoy the rest of the novel, i liked these 60 chapters. About your other comment, about this being free. This is why i even decided to post because you sound so dumb. How many analogies should i need to give you for you to understand that GT never owned this novel, it was Qidian novel from start, even if Qidian didn't buy GT, they could still sell this. You can't translate Harry Potter books to your language and upload it on internet and get mad when the real books are sold for money, are you really that brainless?

So many negative reviews.. I didn't read it before so i don't know how bad it gets but with the current 60 chapters, its good and worth reading. There could always be something that you can see as "racist" but it depends now deep it goes and i don't have issues as long as it is not too bad.

You are really dumb. Firstly it is qidian novel, gravitytales translated it, qidian then bought gravitytales, do you understand how this works? Even if they didn't buy gravitytales, it was still their novel and they could translate it at any time. That's like you stealing a novel from someone before he even manages to release it and then you post it online and then the original author decides to "sell" it, and you'd be saying "no way, how could he sell something that is aleady free", you must realise how dumb you are.

Its hard to write with OP mc but i don't know if you watched Overlord anime or read the novel but its possible to write about characters enough so that we care about them no matter how strong they are. I am just hoping your next story will not have that many time skips and will have character development, so that we actually care what is happening to them.

This kind of reminds me of warlock of the magus world, MC is cold and ruthless and will do anything to become stronger. The only reason i rated it like this is because there's almost no character development. Time skip after time skip. I don't even understand how people cared about Mikasa, we never knew anything about her, the same can be said about the main character. Author even specifically said that *** scenes even happened but he never wrote about them. He never gives any of his characters any time for us to care about them. Understandably people would have much bigger reaction about Mikasa if we actually read about her for 15-20 chapters and the life between her and MC that they had for years, but this is completely skipped. Since we don't care for her, it doesn't matter if she's dead or not . I really don't understand why author is rushing this story so much, From what i heard he basically finished it without even reaching any big amount of chapters. Basically just anime had 148 episodes, the 2011 version, yet he is going to finish his novel at like 60-70 chapters that are quite short. That is only possible because there's so many time skips and no character development, there's no real reason to care about MC at all, if he died at the end i wouldn't mind it at all. The reason most people loved HxH is because we see Gon grow up slowly and we love quite a few other characters. Heck even Phantom troupe had its appeal to people who watched the show, you can see how well characters are developed there, you could know so many details about each one of the phantom troupe members, so many of their quirks and they are actually antagonists that show up in an ARC then they sometimes show up later but nothing important happens between them.

There's really no common sense with this MC. He actually wastes his limited resources on people who almost killed him. It was mentioned in the novel that if he did not see the reaction of one girl, as she was surprised that he was attacked he'd literally be killed.. Then he uses his limited healing potions to actually heal their best fighter? Great logic and thinking here. The girl he actually saves wants to kill him and kill herself because he saw her naked. Its totally extreme. If she has obligation to kill herself because of tradition of her race, she can go ahead and do it, but killing someone who saved her life? Why does he have any obligation to teach people that tried to kill him? They should be grateful if he just left without killing them or punishing them in any way. After that he summons some legendary pet that literally extorts him yet it is his pet.. If you have a pet in any game, you can decide if you want to feed him or give him anything, in some games they can run away if you don't treat them well but requiring rare resources every time they get summoned would never be normal occurrence.