Eternal2145

6mth

Posted

yea it's your typical face slaping however it is forced face slaping. it has no proper buildup up to the face slap, and 2/3 of the book are comments about the stuff going on

My Account Banned, I Drove Game Developers Crazy

Urban · Heavenly Eye Demonic Dragon

Eternal2145

7mth

Posted

yes so the title is weird as hell and so is the book it's even weirder

Why Are You Crying? Because I Married Your Mom After You Broke up with Me?

Urban · A Small Purple Umbrella

Eternal2145

7mth

Commented

what about other planets plus you got all that space in you know space

"But no matter what, I have to head into interstellar space again. The solar system is our home, so it can't be too crowded. There is no way to build everything here. I have to go to other galaxies to develop...

Become The Guard AI Of The Lost Civilization After Transmigration

Sci-fi · Almost Got Rich

Eternal2145

7mth

Commented

shit learn some science stuff recreat ai build shit explore the universe

The system was a curse to Leo. He could not die as long as his lifespan was higher than one. Every time he committed suicide, his body automatically regenerated and self-resurrected.

Florida Man's General Store in Cultivation World

Fantasy · DamnPlotArmor

Eternal2145

8mth

Posted

ok it's a greatd book and has a lot of potential, but every time i get Hooked. some npc character backstory i dont need the back story of 2 slave traders that are going to die in the next 2-3 chapters. and it's like 5-6 chapter backstory. i can understand a backstory about 1 chapter or less long just to get the general vibe.specially if they are going to die soon. it just stops the flow of the story. it's already switching POV like crazy don't need random background on random NPCS.

The Record of Orc Civilization

Fantasy · BugatiCatForm

Eternal2145

8mth

Replied to Eternal2145

P.s referring to current chapter count 572.

Herald of Steel

War · FerriticMatrix

Eternal2145

8mth

Posted

so I'm up to chapter 50ish it's not even been 2 full days in the book. so by my estimation the full book is 10 days. 😂. no but for real the book is crazy slow in development. and expands everything when it is not needed or explains the same thing with a different character or sometimes the same character.

Herald of Steel

War · FerriticMatrix

Eternal2145

1yr

Posted

the summary already has some contradictions idk about book.

I Developed The Zombie Apocalypse And Netizens Went Crazy With Excitement

Games · Rice Tour

Eternal2145

1yr

Posted

so trash the system gives him all his wants. o need spirit stone, o i need spells. ECT i understand him doing some quest or something but too much "coincidences" is not ok. at least have him worki for the wants/ need instead of just handing them out.

I'm Eight. Surely I Can Establish A Sect, Right?

Eastern · Young Sect Master

Eternal2145

1yr

Posted

it's reiterating the same thing over the span of several chapters. do not waste your time. the mc is a block head who doesn't know anything. also characters just accept what ever he changes like nothing.

Living In Another World With A Farm

Eastern · Ming Yu

Eternal2145

1yr

Posted

SO THE GUY IS A DICK. steals the food from the poorest girl in class and acts like it's not a issue. Also he is VERY stupid. just don't eve try reading.

Richest Man: Divine-Grade Reconstruct System

Urban · Little Grapefruit of the Muzi Family

Eternal2145

1yr

Commented

it should be more since the skills will be with you for longer than your equipment

Currently, the going rate for an ordinary Tier 1 Skill Book could even rival a piece of Level 30 Fine-Gold Equipment. If it were a powerful Tier 1 Skill such as a Lifesaving-, AOE Attack-, Control-, Control Removal-, or Burst-type Skill Book, no one would sell it even for the price of a Level 30 Dark-Gold Weapon, much less anything Fine-Gold ranked.

Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God

Games · Lucky Old Cat

Eternal2145

1yr

Commented

ok I get getting revenge so they are killing black flame but what about the armor kits how are they going to get them by killing black flame

“All is well as long as you know it. Our task is very simple this time: assist Young Master Feng in obtaining 300 Intermediate Mana Armor Kits. It will be even better if we can obtain even more equipment and kits. However, since the Dragon-Phoenix Pavilion is spearheading this matter, it is best if we keep a low-profile. So, first, let’s focus on getting the 300 Intermediate Mana Armor Kits,” the thin man, Third Ghost, said. “This time, to ensure we complete our task, I have even called Old Four and Old Seven to help us. With the five of us, we should be able to take down Black Flame easily. The only thing we have to worry about is the Pavilion itself. It is best if we form a proper plan.”