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and last but not least,that shtty paragraft about aka kun,all time body and so on View More

Tartarus: And that sht like why would the president is a higher being that make him reincarnated,why is he not a die hard fan but wanted to have other people face and body and why would you care about that president so much if you are not the die hard fan of that general

Luna's Story · C1
6 hours ago
And that sht like why would the president is a higher being that make him reincarnated,why is he not a die hard fan but wanted to have other people face and body and why would you care about that president so much if you are not the die hard fan of that general View More

Tartarus: I only understand that He is the reincarnated of general Luna,and that he got betrayed by president. The other sht are without basis like 'why would you make it more random with that people who read his history and continue read novel' and that didnt even mean that much. And that random space debris sht,and also about the last sht before he woke up.

Too much changing of POV

Luna's Story · C1
6 hours ago
I only understand that He is the reincarnated of general Luna,and that he got betrayed by president. The other sht are without basis like 'why would you make it more random with that people who read his history and continue read novel' and that didnt even mean that much. And that random space debris sht,and also about the last sht before he woke up.

Too much changing of POV View More
Luna's Story · C1
6 hours ago
So he go to alternate reality of Naruto Universe with their naruto name is menma? Mc is naruto but not naruto from canon but alternate naruto with different personality? View More
Coiling Dragon: Age of War · C1
11 hours ago
Yeah,he need to correct his word and grammar. Its almost unreadable View More

Devilslayer: The story is good but sentences formation seems strange and sometimes confusing

Ben 10: marvel heroes · C2
12 hours ago
I got no problem with new explosion of population. But what do you mean a prince should live with him. A price is still a prince? What kind of bullsht is that? You make him stand as high as you,with new people loving and respecting him than you and with more knight and power. Are you wanting to get dethroned? View More
I'm the King Of Technology · C40
1 day ago
Need an editor or check your word. Sometimes i know what you mean but you write it wrong that it became hillarious. Like 'So he can go in peace' and your write it 'in piece' how cruel, are you pysico lol View More
Marvel: My Rules · C1
2 days ago
He know how the future is,the war. But he didnt try to teach and make his crewmate grow stronger. No,he just change a little bit of thing. Why not train your other crewmate to became stronger faster View More
One Piece : Sea Devil Sanji · C12
3 days ago
Reading Status: C5
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Surviving in the world of One Piece
3 days ago
Reading Status: C6
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One Piece: True Justice
3 days ago
Reading Status: C3
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Another One piece fanfic
3 days ago
Bruh,i just come from the pther overlord. What happen with it? Did that just got dropped? View More
Overlord: Blue Citadel Alternate · C16
5 days ago
That was the stupidest choice i ever heard, you can make it so you can have power to summon all things from games and so on. But you put it on ring. Good,now people can steal that power from you. Better than it,now your life is in danger because you possess something too good for greedy people. View More
Ring of the gods · C1
1 week ago
At last, an update,been waiting for days. You used to update everyday. But because you make an alternate version. Your time got divided too.
Thanks for the chapter View More
「Dropped」Blue Citadel: An Overlord Fanfiction · C45
1 week ago
Reading Status: C9
Wondering why there are no review of this story.
This story is so good. Cant wait for more.
Thank you author,please keep up the good work.
You did great job at making the story, the background of mc and how the story progress View More
Luffy's big brother.
1 week ago
Its chores not shores. I think shores is more like 'seaside' or a beach View More
Luffy's big brother. · C5
1 week ago
As far as i see. The main character is rowan right? Because you almost write all of it from her view. So its her not he. View More

EsliEsma: More like hard working as for OP it will be rather tempered.

A Bend in Time
1 week ago
I think he is wasting his poin,using it for cunsumable when he got time to rest. If its in real battle i got no problem. But he is wasting his poin when he got time to just rest View More
I'm the King Of Technology · C24
2 weeks ago
Why would your comment in that language ?, author wont understand it if he is not malaysian or indonesian. And even then,your grammar are so bad. I see all your comment are in that language and i cant understand some of it because of the bad grammar (even tho i am indonesian). View More

Brilllian: Promosi pangkat berbeda dengan dunia nyata ya booos

I'm the King Of Technology · C3
2 weeks ago
Reading Status: C0
So i am needing for moarrrr. Its good novel,its a shame that it got dropped before but its still in my library. Now its got continued, cant wait for more View More
A God in Percy Jackson Redux
2 weeks ago
As far as i know hinata hair is black,not light blue View More
The Sharingan Hyuga · C6
2 weeks ago
Thanks for the chapter. Great idea,logic and reasoning. Cant wait for more. Dumb Bell Door is now fck up View More
Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction · C58
2 weeks ago
Its no problem,it give more background and character information,like where the mc get the information. And its really help us who already forgotten the early chapter. Just keep up the good work. You did good View More

GunnerRunner: Pretty much, yeah... I don't like it, but I didn't know how else to tackle the problem with Lumen's lack of knowledge on the Tower. But hey, at the very least, I didn't make it more than one chapter, just repeating what happen in the cannon.

Devil Fruit Powers in The Tower of God · C4
2 weeks ago
You know i am wondering how do he charge his phone? You make the story like they keep using and plsying that phone without charging it. I mean they dont get unlimited battery and nowdays phone cant go more than 1 day without charging, except if its the old good day Noki@ View More
Ultimate Fruit · C10
2 weeks ago
Thanks View More
「Dropped」Blue Citadel: An Overlord Fanfiction · C7
3 weeks ago
Second that, you need to make sure which is intentionall of him calling Ninya 'her' and which is not. Because he keep calling her 'she' and they only realized it when he stop midway. And peter also calling her 'her' not 'him' even tho he didnt know he is a she View More

Plato: Great chapter, but it needs some editing. For example, sometimes Peter used She for Ninya and sometimes Cipher used She for Ninya when talking to Peter.

「Dropped」Blue Citadel: An Overlord Fanfiction · C4
3 weeks ago
So i have read the new story (rewrite, and its better and makes more sense) i like how the story progress and all of it. So i think giving 5 star is worth it. Thank you author View More

Tartarus: The story is a bit forced in the beginning, especialy when he invite the one who is trying to break into his own home. And when he became so friendly. But as the story progress. The story became interesting and not too forced. There are a bit things that are not explained,like why he didnt revive the other or why he cant when people who got lower level can revive their own .( if i am not wrong the blue rose almost got complete wipe our in the latter volume of Overlord but got revived, and they just need to recalibrate their own body,train and rest so they can go back to their prime. But the cost of getting revived is costly because not many people can do it) But he should be able to do it.

Overall the author is doing a great job. I recommend you guys to read this. And author got a fresh and nice idea. Keep it up, the story are very intersting, i cant wait for new chapter. Thank you author

「Dropped」Blue Citadel: An Overlord Fanfiction
3 weeks ago
What? Cheap information and map? Come on,he is good with magic,and even then he is looking lime human,not like Ainz whos look is screaming ' I am a fcking Undead ' . MC looks more alive and human, he can just find random town and ask people,listen to information at pub/restaurant/bar. Try to befriend people and say you live in the rock and just come to city and you can get all the information, especially if you are good at magic. You can even find some bastard and blackmail him to get information View More

Dragon_of_Chaos: How the f does he know that

「Dropped」Blue Citadel: An Overlord Fanfiction · C0
3 weeks ago
I am thinking that she gonna be okay when she ate the fruit and maybe rank up to rank A and while doing it,the gungnir repair itself View More
Spare Me, Great Lord! · C698
3 weeks ago
Its up to you if you gonna rewrite or not. Because i will still be here because i like your story. Even tho sometimes i made a harsh comment but i really like it especially you keep progressing to make it better. So if you gonna rewrite and make it better, why not? View More

LucioOrdo: +1 for rewrite

「Dropped」Blue Citadel: An Overlord Fanfiction · C0
3 weeks ago
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