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MJSB

male LV 4

eccentric

2017-10-17 Joined Global

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2yr
Commented
why is your story goes to kakin empire already? you miss the other important events such as messing with hisoka or spiders. and also too much description in every chapter. soo tiring to read. and getting super clinche. and hes getting emotional and too attach to a woman far from the start on how the mc's behavior.
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2yr
Commented
hey author san,i think you forgot to mention the flow of time on where's part of the mc of the main cannon story now.
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