SuohDaoist

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Replied to jeronimo_cordero

and too many Alice ones too. just went thru 10 after randomly picking twilight fics to read lol. Rosalie and Alice are overused

Alice Cullen

The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

Movies · Beans_on_a_tree

SuohDaoist

2d

Commented

hoping Sasuke doesn't try to leave. Many fanfics have Sasuke realize and respect Naruto after Naruto powered up but yet they still have Sasuke leave just to continue the plot. This Sasuke seems more mature and even though he wants revenge, he doesn't seem to be obsessed to the point he'll do dumb stuff.

ch 69 Naruto : Chapter 69

SuohDaoist

3d

Posted

Warning it's another Alice pairing with a supposedly mature mc who once again is forced to be smitten cause some destiny mate bs.

SuohDaoist

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Posted

Quick warning. Harem Harem Harem. had a lot of potential, mc felt like an actual person living in twilight instead of just being in twilight, the relationships the mc formed feels natural and very real, his persona and reputation is also very well written, he's made to be a sort of an outsider but he's no cut off, still easily a very social person who anyone can vibe with. You didn't feel too much outside influence in the story or anything cringe which youd' expect from most movie fanfics especially twilight. Had it as a very good read. Then Haram was introduced and rip.

Twilight: Really! I Didn't Ask For This!

Movies · Flaming_Lines

SuohDaoist

8d

Commented

basically killing the story since you have 1 love story that was written extremely well, paced properly and handled in a way not to be cringed or forced then you have another love interest who is only there cause of a bond and nothing more, then her character is pretty dull as she has no personalities and the mc doesn't even like her but he'll magically like her cause why not.... 😂 Went from Top tier to cliche and just another fanfic among many🤦‍♂️✌️

(A/N: Okay so because I have expanded this book a lot and want to try one this will be a harem, but no more then three girls. Who have already been picked out, Leah, Rosalie and mystery girl who I will include later. The Harem will be a slow build though to be more realistic to adding them into it, not all at once.)

Twilight: Really! I Didn't Ask For This!

Movies · Flaming_Lines

SuohDaoist

12d

Replied to DarkCreation101

so your feelings got hurt over your ship👌

What If Naruto Had The Six Eyes & Limitless Curse Technique

Anime & Comics · hasnathh

SuohDaoist

13d

Replied to DarkCreation101

sounds like you a fanboy. The FF writers still write Naruto and Hinata as love at first sight or "fated" love bs. The original was bad and authors spamming the same ship with the same setup no matter how lacking the chemistry and how forced it feels , will not make it an enjoyable read for non fanboys who don't mind bad writing 🤦‍♂️

What If Naruto Had The Six Eyes & Limitless Curse Technique

Anime & Comics · hasnathh

SuohDaoist

16d

Commented

thanks for killing your own ff.

"It's complicated to say, but I was born with the memories of a person from another world, so you could say that I am old." Naruto spoke for the first time about his condition, this girl had already seen him do many things, so it wasn't that important anyway.

Naruto - Light Ninja

Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague

SuohDaoist

18d

Commented

had a feeling the Uchiha girl would be a main cast but why make her so intrusive and ask for apprenticeship right off the bat. author could have had them have a short meet up every now and then before she tried to get involved in his life. way too sudden and now feels forced

ch 16 Chapter 16 - Uchiha Girl 01.

Naruto - Light Ninja

Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague

SuohDaoist

18d

Replied to Granville4554

you just want him to fk her

ch 16 Chapter 16 - Uchiha Girl 01.

Naruto - Light Ninja

Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague

SuohDaoist

22d

Replied to Tsuki_Rin

he's never done anything to maintain peace and balance, he's literally only tried to gain the upper hand and make sure he still has power only to fail and end up back at the start lol. He's also done a lot of things that could destroy peace and balance 😂 Anbu is made to do all those dark stuff, people acting like assassinations and manipulation of the political scene is something only danzo can do but that's clearly false. There's necessary evil and then there's being extra, Danzo was being extra lol

Danzo who got beaten and even got his eye dug out by the enemy didn't go through this in vain and his beating served a purpose.

Konoha: The Template System

Anime & Comics · Tobi_444

SuohDaoist

23d

Commented

it's illogical for danzo to get off scot-free so you're not wrong. authors normally use the council as an excuse, or use the fact it'll cause disharmony and chaos in the village, or that danzo is the only person who can control the dark side of the leaf so he has to stay alive 😂 like it makes no sense unless you're forcing the plot or the other characters are just dumb

I wrote this chapter just for the consequences of Danzo. What do you think? I followed what I thought was most likely to happen. I could extend Danzo to become a villain for Naruto in the village, but after the massacre of the Uchiha clan, he wouldn't last long with Minato as Hokage. Minato would even punish the other elders in a way.

Naruto - Light Ninja

Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague

SuohDaoist

27d

Replied to Gonzalo_Pereira_6949

probably easier to write since they already pretty strong, yet they almost always seem to end up in the hands of writers who can't get past the "ooh dragon strong" phase🤦‍♂️

I told Varys I couldn't just accept the betrothal while I still had one with Sansa, but if like, we thought the betrothal broke I would accept under certain conditions, he would have to ensure safe return for Sansa and Arya to the north, if he provided that I would join his crusade to put a Targaryen on the throne.