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Yep find a soluce... I use webnovel site for reading this chapter before going back to the app for the next
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Odin in the Wizarding World · C27
I can't read the chapter . It's loading indefinitely. Any idea? I'm on mobile btw don't know if that matter.
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Odin in the Wizarding World · C27
I just made a search of what crimson king and erase time mean and here what I understand. More than erasing time it's more like in the place this power is used or people don't know for that, the time make à 10 seconds jump forward with only him remembering those 10 seconds.
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Detesting The System: Sundering Fate · C23
Not against the power spike but hope it don't go too far
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Morning_Fragrance: Respectable. I like slow development as well. But I feel like when he does get his memories back and his gamer ability, there is going to be a ridiculous power spike.
Naruto: The Twin Flashes · C3
The twin stuff is not too uncommon but the time taken to develop the character is uncommon. He didn't even show his stats page yet and I like it slow like that.
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Morning_Fragrance: Idk about uncommon chief, the naruto twin brother/sister trope has been used plenty of times.
Naruto: The Twin Flashes · C3
I hope you don't drop it, you seem to take your time to develop the character and it's uncommon, i like it.
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Naruto: The Twin Flashes · C3
Harem at the start is OK but with Iron Man 1 make him drop the harem stuff pleaseeeeee
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Reincarnated as Tony Stark with a Skill · C23
You kidding, story ain't slow. I like it that way. The only complain are the classic reader one. "Bigger chapter and more chapter". Unreasonable? Yes, but can dream right?
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Spider-Man: Duty and Loss · C61
matanman: please read the other versions first and then like this message if you decided for this editor to be chosen.
A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C0
3 months ago
3 or 2, don't have a problem with mc injured by Ichigo.
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Rebirth in Bleach · C0
Let see, how to not have the mc too overpowered.... You can make him lose his strength to the lvl between Sif and Thor after the war, maybe as cost of becoming a true Asgardian. As for the 1000 and something of years after maybe the mother of Hela would succeed in sealing him for the biggest part as a last act against him.
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Asgardian Sword God · C15
Wait just think of something, at the time of Avenger he will probably have Legend about himself like Thor, Odin, Loki and other.
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Asgardian Sword God · C9
Wonder if he will end up in a couple with Hela. Can even make it extra drama with his failure to stop her rebellion and subsequent imprisonment. Follow by millenia of more or less serious fling (Sif, saved valkyrie, ect) and when Hela become free at Odin death their is fight and finally calm her and become a new couple in semi-exile because of Hela, so welcome new home Midgard, where Odin had find a baby on an altar.
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Asgardian Sword God · C9
That a very well written s*x chapter. Love the story.
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Recarnation of ultimate Spider man · C11
You never made clear of the mission the Snake gave him so maybe thinking in this direction could help you.
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Cursed with Mystic Eyes in Naruto · C76
Can also have the Mc have sex friend(s) especially before or after a serious relationship. Un exemple would be Jessica Jones, if you plan to date her you need to have a very very strong and gentle soul. But a quick fu*k here and there? Easy.
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The Mechanic · C2
Suicidal_Fool: I mean u can go the realistic route and have mc going on dates and breaking up and sh1t
The Mechanic · C2
4 months ago
They are universal entity. Probably more or less connect to the other version of themselves. Like an hard drive with multiple partitioning. 1 but separate. So if 1 iteration of themselves is corrupt the corruption can be contain.
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Spider-Man: Duty and Loss · C51
Yeah but I don't remember seeing the 2 child in the SAME camp (exception of the switch of Jason and Percy maybe)
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RE: Percy Jackson World · C1
Yeah I know but the big 3 should not have kid (they do) so putting Two son of Poseidon in the same time and camp is a big no. It's a big insult to Zeus rule. 1 in the camp = ******* between the brother. 2 in the camp = hatred of Zeus, at least until they do something really big and helpful for Zeus.
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Forgotten_Druid: The reason Jason was sent to camp Jupiter is because his father was in his Roman form Jupiter not Zeus
RE: Percy Jackson World · C1
By the way what happen to Quirell ? Harry didn't fight him and while he couldn't take the stone he should not have die yet.
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New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic · C57
You Switch the prologue and the first chapter (i saw ot from the start so it wasn't a real problem for me)
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I Got Incursio as My Sacred Gear · C2
The prologue and chapter 1 are reverse.
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I Got Incursio as My Sacred Gear · C1
Cool story. Need editing but i can still read it so not too urgent.
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Transported in GoT World in a Star Wars Galaxy · C1
DaoPursuer: Seriously, where’s the snake? She made this fanfic unique and we haven’t heard from her in a long time...😭 thanks for the chapter!
New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic · C50
5 months ago
