Webnovel Author: Kenrio - Fanfic Collection

Author should use the gay tag. And web novel should make the cuck/ntr tag and polycule tag so only these that like can read. Really a low blow of grim to make use harem tag to bait people in reading without warning the other fetish of mc like being a bi and liking to be a cuck

I think the excuse you gave for the mc was a litle too unimaginative when everyone read in know you're simple forving mc to be slider so he can falow the plot. And while I'm happy about this site having more fanfiction of yugioh gx I noted that it's extremely cliche and repeated scene of mc participating in the exams with the peanut gallery commenting, to the point I thought it's was one I already read before.you could simple skipped the peanut gallery dialogue. Other minor things I noticed and breaker a litle of the immersion is that sometimes you suddenly go from first pov to third. And you switching quick-spell card for speed spell card that is from yugioh 5ds

Mc says how he don't fear batman but goes on a lengthy monologue on why he don't want to displease batman clearly showing he does fear batman. It's really anoying how much of a sucker he for the heroes and even more so for batman

Other than the grammar the fic is trash. For some reason mc want to go on a goose Chase and find a way to go back to his world even if he is in a extremely low fantasy world, already passed countless years and can't forget he have another body. Chance is that if he go back everyone will be dead already. And the worst of it is that auhtor don't make mc think about any of these questions, nor author explain why mc reached the logic that he have a chance to go back. In the end a fic that synopses make you want to read but 2 chapter already want to make you rage quit by how frustanting and lack in details it is

For some reason the supposed god don't expect for some lowly mortal to simple exploit the loophole like mc and make a wish that give him many power, the more ridiculous thing is to see this god permitting mc negotiate to what powers he can have. What's is worse is the excuse auhtor give is straigh up trash. To make things worse we have other reincarnator

For some reason even with mc have white beard powers and potential author decide to give mc the super soldier serum. As for why, author simple don't give a reason

First chapter alone start with a huge plot hole showing how much thought auhtor really put into this. Robbers try to steal from a ANIME store this don't even make sense why woul somoene do that, and worst these robber have guns in a country where no even the police have guns, by this first chapter alone you can see how brainless this fic is

Can read past chapter 1 the fact mc as kid withou knowing how to fight can fight against adult that know magic is ridiculous, even more so when he fights many at the same time. Even worst is that author simple give mc 3 cheat withou any explanation of why only now he is gaining it

A trash fic from a trash author .........................................................................................................................................

Here I thought this would be a good fic but it's nothing more than another trash wish fulfilment where the author don't even think before writing and become full of major plot holes

The most edgy and angst shit I ever read in my life, I don't know how people can read more than one chapter of this shit inducing cringe fic