DivineAsura

8d

Posted

I find your story worthwhile reading although their aren’t that many chapters till know. Still I would like to ask a few plotholes as Yamato should be nearly 10 years older then Nami from canon. So did they timettraveled or how can they be as it sounds in the story be nearly the same age. Also what happened to her Devil Fruit - did she eat it ?

DivineAsura

17d

Commented

„… he fought...“

Once in a practical class, he fight against Uchiha Yuki.

DivineAsura

18d

Commented

„… his brotherhood.“ right ?

The issue resolved, Asuma returned enthusiastically. He stepped forward, and hugged Gen tightly, with the intention of sealing his sisterhood.

DivineAsura

1mth

Posted

Their aren’t many chapter to say to much but till now it was a good story which is a good read. Hopefully the upgrades brought by the orbs will be toned down otherwise this story will move way to fast into the universe and out of the One Piece World 😂 All in all I find it a great story and hope for more updates

DivineAsura

1mth

Replied to Everlasting_Sky

Can‘t say much for now as their are not enough chapters to read

First of all I really like your story and choice of Martial Spirit. Although I personally find the speed of the story development slightly slow it‘s my own opinion 😅 Secondly I hope you will keep up with the good work till now und not drop this after a few more chapters

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DivineAsura

4mth

Replied to Yaron1999

From where are you translating ?

Harry Potter and the Secret Treasures [Translation]

Book&Literature · Yaron1999

DivineAsura

6mth

Replied to TheBoredWriter69

Does someone knows the mtl name ?

Planting The God Tree in Douluo Dalu

Anime & Comics · TheBoredWriter69

DivineAsura

10mth

Replied to Balthizar_Blake

Regenerates with blood About the sharpening and strengthening I don’t know

ch 0 6 Training

Reborn In Naruto As An Experiment

Anime & Comics · Balthizar_Blake

DivineAsura

10mth

Commented

Shouldn’t it be Kirito instead of Naruto ?

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In Naruto With Minato Template

Anime & Comics · kamidemond

DivineAsura

11mth

Commented

!=-1

B) double chapter tomorrow.

A Legacy Continued

Video Games · Sudoku

DivineAsura

1yr

Commented

+1

Harem system or something similar (love, friendship, affection) gets points from mostly doing quests, focusing the story on romance and less on magic and combat.