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What kind of logic is you using.i write review and then you blame me the reader for doing my job?you are the evil one you little piece of .....i was warning all the other readers who got taste that does not match this mc stupid mind**** and then *bam* author deletes all the critic that reader tell View More

ForTheWin: Fan of this novel or someone who read this novel. No matter how I see it, you’re the evil one. If the novel is trash, then don’t read it. Anything goes wrong, or don’t go according to your plan, you the blame the author? Wtf? What kind of logic is that.

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Aku03: When will the new chapters of Jurassic Hero appear?

Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group · C397
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Giant_Sloth: I know what you mean. Some people just don't want to have 3or less star ratings. I dont even think you can do anything about it what do you even report the novel ir author for? *Confused*

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Sloppy second and thx for chap View More
Douluo Dalu: Wulin's Legend · C130
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It was not a criticism as per but the three star review that I wrote got taken down too View More

Giant_Sloth: There's one person that gave him like 6+. Reviews all 5 star. It's basicly worthless to do anything against people like that. They just want other people to praise them they just can't take criticism.

The Dragon Evolve God
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Then delete the 2 start rated review about the message then I wrote 3 star rated review not let see if he delete it again View More

Giant_Sloth: Noted.

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This beach just deleted all the fucking 1 to 2 star review.i just write a review and liked it to see if this beech will delete my review that was not inpporate or spam but he still delete it.this is to just to warn you guys View More

Daku_Doragon: Beginning was a bit rough, it seems you are getting better at writing. Less run-ons and camma errors. I like the charcter ideas, but at the beginning you were going everywhere. Now it seems more solid, I would like to read more.

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This beach just deleted all the fucking 1 to 2 star review.i just write a review and liked it to see if this beech will delete my review that was not inpporate or spam but he still delete it.this is to just to warn you guys View More

JexRekk: The story is really interesting than most webnovels done here. But unfortunately the author's writing is not really enjoyable as it feels like a middle schooler wrote this. I hope you improve your writing and help it improve this story drastically.

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This beach just deleted all the fucking 1 to 2 star review.i just write a review and liked it to see if this beech will delete my review that was not inpporate or spam but he still delete it.this is to just to warn you guys View More

SplitEric: I started it, on another website. Didn't think I would like it the way it started but it turned super good and now I'm all the way addicted keep up the great work

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Daoist555685: ..............................................................................................



Don't have much to say about this novel its pretty interesting

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shadow_king521: Same as always good and fun the new chapter looking to lead to many new opportunities and hopefully not herem, evil pls dont go love route it's not needed.

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conrad_baquiran: This book is like a Godzilla movie, great with the adventure and action, but everyone except the main character, isn't developed, or have any depth. They have a 2d. Still this story was very enjoyable.

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This beach just deleted all the fucking 1 to 2 star review.i just write a review and liked it to see if this beech will delete my review that was not inpporate or spam but he still delete it.this is to just to warn you guys View More

Satea_Khiangte: Quite an impressive story, but layout is a bit off. Character building is on the better side but not spot on. World building concept is great but a little short on the details. Overall it is a great read.

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This beach just deleted all the fucking 1 to 2 star review.i just write a review and liked it to see if this beech will delete my review that was not inpporate or spam but he still delete it.this is to just to warn you guys View More

Flair_Magenta: This is a great book. i find myself so intrigued in the story as i am reading that i look a the time one min its say 1pm the i look again to find it's 5pm. the story is aslo well thought out and each characters have well defined personalitys and description that you can seen it in your imagination.

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This beach just deleted all the fucking 1 to 2 star review.i just write a review and liked it to see if this beech will delete my review that was not inpporate or spam but he still delete it.this is to just to warn you guys View More

Maxlee6464: This novel has a little of all and has a good starting point in my opinion and show how the dragon is going to change in to a good person or I may say a good dragon. To help does in need.

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Giant_Sloth: Lost my last 3 braincells reading. Had to stop
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Wackle: I would love to say that this story is a wonderful plot hole that may enspire many imaginations. Although the backstory is rushed it´s like a diamond that must be shined after it comes out of the rock. It has potential to shine and many would love to make it shine. Especially me, though there are no descriptions of characters it still provides imagery when the writer makes art for the novel. So I hope to see more updates.

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DingySongy22: A diamond💎 in a sea of pearls ⚪⚪⚪i am very glad to have found this story. ..i truly...truly...believe this is going to be onevof my faves🥰🥰🥰 So be sure to keep updating as Im surely enjoying it🤗🤗🤗 Terrific read❗❗❗😋🎉🎊🎉

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Dadumdada: It really is a very entertaining read I hope🙈🙈🙈 YESIREE 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳SOOOOO... what am I gonna do???

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No regrets so far uh huh👍😍😍😍truth🤞

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Mumyum: Attractive summary..hmm...its gotten my attention and has also even kept it for now, yep...uh huh...thats what a writer would want😜of course....now your goal is to keep our attention untill the end.

Sooo, its gotta be a great story, okay yes for sure🤨 ....lol❗😉

😈 HAH!😇

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sean_boy: I just Want to say that the is an amazing novel. It might not seem that good at first but over on the author gets a lot better.

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Theorangeguy: Good story...
Will be waiting for the continuation............................................................................................

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Master_Otaku: ........................ need more update...................................
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Daoist315893: Definitely a great story. The reason it only has this low of a rating is because the writing and use of words in the story could be a alot better. Like the overuse of "thus" and "therefore" just use "so" or something please.

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fattynomore: Love this I can’t believe this is sooo good because so far it’s about to get really kick ass with all the loot he about to get prime dragon your soo great lol ha ha ha ha ha

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4bidienkingdom: Thank....................................................................................................................................you

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LurkingImmortal: Author i tried but i'm assuming this is your first novel or at least you're trying to get experience so i wont give u anything low. I could only make it to chapter 7 unfortunately, their are too many plot holes and some really bad decisions with the added bad dialogue that hardly makes sense from any perspective.

Just a few things that stood out mostly just from these few chapters:

- Mc knows that you can trade in game items for real life currency but proceeds to rob and beat up everyone in game just to stay rank 1? And seriously thought no one would try to kill him? You're stealing money from people lol

- Mc comes off as very slow as he constantly forgets things that should be obvious. He has been a dragon for a while but forgot he had wings? Bro what? Took him a while to figure out he could use his flame to propel himself even though it shouldn't be possible for him to produce fire in space but hey this is fiction so this is negligible.

- First meeting with the aliens...
1) Even if they are humanoid, they are from a different planet/culture and universe trillions or more light years away, how would these random alien know the planet called Earth. At least right away without any prior research.
2) Why do they speak English??? Even if there is a mysterious translator certain things shouldn't mean anything in their species like "Bitch" that the female got offended from.
3) Why these aliens who just landed on the planet and encounter the
MC immediately come up with the assumption that he was a spy from
an enemy alien race? Even if you take him actually scoping them out
from a distance from before, anyone would spy on them in that
instance.
4) The dialogue needs a lot of work.
5) Why would the same female (leader) offer to a complete stranger the opportunity to travel with them, even if they believed he is harmless?

Just some things i think you should make note of that you can easily fix. Good luck on your novel/writing.

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WTF: WQ:Really glad you improve much in latest chap


SOU:I really love the recent chapters but am craving for mass release

SD:the pacing is good so far
the story don't feel rushed and the current scenario is good with slight humour in the background
Keep up the story dear author just don't make it rush
Quality is more important than quantity if the story is feel rushed

CD:hmmmmmmm for my own perspective the current characters is good with lot of minor character in the background and decent majors but don't take my word for it my criticism is lacking in terms of judging character in any story I don't depth too much

WB:for now I guess this type of story is like where the mc is diving in many world's so maybe it doesn't focus to much in depth in term of where the mc is
And for the mc current location i................. I want to see more where this going will he going to the other continents or where the romance is going to take?



(Well this is my 5th time I reviewed in any story so don't take it so seriously hehehe I try my best)

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