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Yunsildin

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2017-06-14 Joined United States

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Okay I’ve read up to current update that doesn’t require privileges. Writing quality is very good and starts really strong. Little to no grammatical or spelling errors. The beginning gives you that good apocalypse vibe. The only major thing I’ll nit pick is later the author puts really large notes of thanks and requests comments at the end of every chapter. This feels more like padding the chapters word count than anything to me since it’s the same exact words every single time. The story updates consistently. There has been very little pauses in at least one daily update. Story development has been very good. In fact has been the best thing about this story. I could not tell you what our main character actually looks like and his family. I can, however, say I love the family dynamic and how they interact with eachother. They’re in this facing zombie apocalypse together. I will say that I feel some eastern fantasy vibes also occurring in the story. So far we still have that tense apocalypse feel but for how long I don’t know. As I’ve mention character design is definitely lacking. I have kind pasted my own ideas of what the characters look like based on their shown personality. World background starts in basically our world so it’s not a hard thing to start with. Now the changes to the world by the apocalypse does get mentioned consistently so the world is changing and is being rebuilt as the story progresses. Part of the fun of reading apocalypse stories. So far so good. It’s a good and enjoyable read. I definitely would give it a try if you enjoy a zombie apocalypse with eastern fantasy fused into it. Also for this who I know will ask, there is NO harem here. Just a good married man with kids and a lot of gumption to survive a horde of zombies.😉
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