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so honestly, I'm not very far into this novel, but I felt compelled to make a review. I am at chapter 30, and the title does not do this novel justice. the title made it feel like a wish fulfilled novel where the Mc gets rich, makes lemons, and slappes people in the face. but really it seems pretty wholesome with a realistic Mc. whome is yes perverted but is realistic. he struggles with the "do I make a move? I'm probably just imagining that she likes me" normally I would find that mindset to be annoying. but in this novel there is a reason for the Mc to be "dense". I may update this later, but I am excited to see the character development, not just being the Mc but other characters as well. I actually hope this does not become a wish fulfilled novel because I think it has so much more potential that that. regardless of to name

hello. so I've being blue balled alot. are you coming back or are you dropping this? it's being 4 months. I just want to know should I hope or should I drop this from my library? finally if I'm going to keep this can I get at the very least and estimate on when you'll come back?

so I began this novel looking for an mc who had power and had no bs reason on why to hide it. it was great at the start. then idk if the editor left or something but it all feels like mtl that you need to decipher. but that's fine if the story was great, recently though i feel like the mc is a weak willed scumbag. I wont go into to much detail but the mc has an incredible woman that loves him whole heartedly and he loves her. but he randomly starts having sex on the side. like the first one not great but at least it had a "good" reason. then the second even if you ignore the fact that he is cheating without his SO's knowledge it was with her daughter and he knew it. but he just couldn't say no because he is weak willed. finally I'm on chapter 104 and he has slept with a different random girl because idk he can and he is actively attempting with another. all the while worrying about his main girl finding out.

so I'm not very far into this but the story is great, the back story makes sense it's not that it happened because it happended which is nice there was thought put into it. I have not seen any grammar errors or gender swaping so great job author/editor whom ever did that. the only reason I didn't give a full 5 stars is it only updates 6 times a week and I'm impatient but at the same time quality things take time. but then the character design... the mc is built really well I like his personality. but what gets me and why I put the spoiler tag. the mc when he first joins the new world he is relived that he has the dagger mastery because he always played the sneaky stabby kind of character. then out of no where he suddenly doesn't like knifes and he wants to use a spear.

so I'm only on chapter 50 while I write this, I will update later when I read more. so I notice a lot of grammar errors. by that I mean use of the wrong word for example the word taste is never used it's always test and she/he are wrong once and a while. it's not a big deal you know what the author is trying to say. the story is very slice of life at the moment. mostly revolving around the fmc and how she believes every male around her to be an idiot. the male mc doesn't get a whole lot of screen time but when he does he just feels like a push over and I haven't seen a lot of character development with him. it has being mentioned that other people see the emotional struggles he shows but nobody really does anything to help. they just kinda say "oh this other person will help" or at least that's how it feels to me finally I think my review sounded mostly negative but I do think this can be a great novel once the characters grow a little bit. I see a lot of potential in it and I fully believe the author can make that happen.

I have no idea honestly. I am in the middle of bulking chapters because I'm hoping that way when I do read it the story will progress a little bit

by far the best assassin/rogue story I have ever read. the mc actually stays true to what he is good at and doesn't start doing something new because "I'm already a god at this, so let me fight life and death with something I suck at" or something like that. additionally all of the characters are very fleshed out and actually feel like people. the world is built beautifully and continuing to expand. but not so fast that it feels rushed.

*mc just ate an omelet *

so I love the idea of this story and I love how the author is telling it. my only complaint is the last few chapters have felt like nothing but filler. like the author updates once a day very consistently I know exactly when a chapter is going to come out and I'm excited for it because I know what this story could be from the earlier chapters. but this last chapter he legit just ate an omelet.

sorry I'm not artistic with my review, it's my fist time *blushing* sorry a little long, in my head I compared it to other novels but really this novel is the perfect example of don't judge a book by its cover or in this case title. I'm sorry author I know I couldn't do better but the title makes it sound like a 16 year olds wet dream. I started this novel just to kill time and then drop it when I was bored. but the story and characters is outstanding. the response/actions of people actually make sense. it isn't just a bad but feel good kind of story, I can't help but think while reading it "how would I act in this situation?" because it actually goes into the darker side of things, while not being pointlessly dark to make you feel like an edge lord while reading it. the side characters actually have character. the mc stays true to what he is said to be, there is some light smut so far it's enough that I know he isn't just a simp that gets fan service to never do anything but there aren't just 8 chapters of the mc laying the di CK of "god" on some girl. and the world building is solid, like I understand what's going on but I'm not getting crazy long info dumps that I mostly skim through because I'm bored.