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  • Indigo Emperor

    Indigo Emperor

    Fantasy

    A slave from birth, one boy rises up to meet the odds. His father is unknown and his mother mentally shaken. After a fateful meeting with another, he begins his journey towards a better day. He will encounter many obstacles along the way, as they always do, and in the process of doing so, discover his true origins. - What I can promise you: an enjoyable story with quality writing and minimum cliches, and free from grammatical mistakes. One or two might pop up though, simply because they escaped my self-editing. What I can't promise you: fast update time. Updates will probably be 2-3 chapters a week on Friday, Saturday and Sunday. I'll probably start to speed up when things actually matter but right now, eh. Happy Reading! Constructive criticism is always welcome in the comment sections of said chapters. Don't worry, I know the story development is slow right now, but it'll pick up. P.S. Voting for myself because I am my novel's greatest supporter ᕕ (ᐛ) ᕗ

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Positive_Lullaby: welp i dropped this novel. the translation is fine, but needs an editor. its an unedited mess. but thats not why i dropped it... its really boring. like realllyyy. i stuck with it, because i was bored myself, but as i kept reading i just hated myself. i tried really hard to like this story, but no. though a slow start i can plow, if the content is interesting, which is not the case here. but its main problem is that the pacing doesn't change from that initial slow start, it stays around the same and even manages to slow down even further. this author has some serious skill in word count inflation, a talented writer can rewrite his whole webnovel with 1/3 of the word count.

Martial Arts Master
4 days ago
it's not much better when you rate full 5 stars to a novel that you haven't read. Ain't much different to giving a 1. Ironic. View More

WildAnt: a novel from the author of the throne of magical arcana. i love that novel and i looking forward to reading this beautiful handiwork of that author.
cuttlefish that loves diving is a popular author in qidian. so ill give full 5 stars for now. it can change when i read more than 50 chapter. so dont disappoint me.
i am not gonna be a scumbag that rate full 1 star to a novel that i haven't read.

Martial Arts Master
4 days ago

MilordInkBrush: I'm now done looking it over. I left a note for you at the bottom, as well. It was well written. Now, I'm off to sleep. (it's late here)

Sword Saint System
4 days ago
Thanks so much!!!! (*ˊᗜˋ*)/
I'd never have noticed the small mistakes myself. View More

MilordInkBrush: I'm now done looking it over. I left a note for you at the bottom, as well. It was well written. Now, I'm off to sleep. (it's late here)

Sword Saint System
5 days ago

slipith: One star to counteract those idiots spamming 5 stars and praises...
How do u guys function? It is a demerit to every other novel out there. Community level here is even worse rhan Twitch

Carefree Path of Dreams
5 days ago
the genre is fantasy... I think. the chapter's not totally completed yet, though. View More

MilordInkBrush: Sure. put me on Commenting, and I'll definitely review yours. What's the genre?

Sword Saint System
5 days ago
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sNtO9zRAZ4saKooSNcMJekSYf7wtY5S0HDLI0-CStKQ/edit?usp=sharing

ᕕ (ᐛ) ᕗ thanks a bunch View More

MilordInkBrush: Sure. put me on Commenting, and I'll definitely review yours. What's the genre?

Sword Saint System
5 days ago

ISharpe: I gave it solid 3s because it looked interesting, but I'm not gonna sink spirit stones into this...if there's anyone in charge of the marketing and pricing watching I'll just say this...I understand wanting to make money from the story. I also understand making people pay for a story early when not that many chapters are out yet. But when there are already 400+ already translated and your charging people from chapter 42....it doesn't look good. Which is a pity...Something tells me this is a story that'll mostly just be visited by people who were reading all along. As someone who was interested but hasn't really started yet. Since I'm already supporting two novels with chapters that cost 9-11 SS each to unlock I'm gonna have to give this story a hard pass

Reincarnator
5 days ago
it's okay. same things happens to me, I'm always rereading my work and finding small flaws ;- ; View More

DamnPlotArmor: I'm going to put my humble self at average 3 stars because I'm not shameless enough to show off my broken English and cringe worthy of terrible grammar I put into this novel.

I promise that I will trying my best to keep up with at least one chapter a day. Eventhough it took me two freaking days to come up with the first chapter.

For some reason, every times I reread my work, I ended up fixing things here and there. 10 drafts later, I still found flaws and kept deleting this line and added this line. 20 hours later, I was banging my head against the wall and gave up rechecking the quality and post it here right away.

Please have mercy on this poor soul and go easy on me ... MEAW!

Battle Royale of the Sinners
1 week ago
Hey, I was wondering if you could give my writing some sort of feedback? Currently I got none, so if you're willing, may I send you a link to my google doc? View More

Gushheart: Overall, the writing is too good to be a webnovel. I was blown away by the first few chapters. I have never seen writing of this quality in any webnovel so far. So kudos to the author. Can't really say anything about updats since i finished the 16-17 chapters there in one sitting, but if its anything like the effort put in to writing this and its definitely good.

Sword Saint System
1 week ago
Hey, I was wondering if you could review my writing for me? Seeing as to how you've got standards, I was hoping to get an opinion on my own. Nobody's really giving me feedback so at this point I'm just reaching out. I can send you a link to my google doc if you're willing :D View More

MilordInkBrush: Mhm. Can't remember the last time I wrote a 5 star review. But I think this book deserves one right now. The author was true to his word. There are no grammatical mistakes- or any writing mistakes I can see, and the world building is fiiiine. Already love the MC.

Just add it. Don't be shy- add this lovely story to your library, and do this author some good for the holidays.(2018)

Milord signing out!

Sword Saint System
1 week ago
intellectual *claps* View More

sixkai: I had hopes for this story due to the reveiws, but in reality, the entire plot was bland; I had to skip chapters because it was so cringey.

I would not give this childish story a chance if I were you. The main character seems more like a pitiful, idealized self-insert by the author than anything.

His Genius Wife is a Superstar
1 week ago

sixkai: I had hopes for this story due to the reveiws, but in reality, the entire plot was bland; I had to skip chapters because it was so cringey.

I would not give this childish story a chance if I were you. The main character seems more like a pitiful, idealized self-insert by the author than anything.

His Genius Wife is a Superstar
1 week ago

xander001: This novel is utter trash, but i can't stop myself from reading. It's like eating junk foods, you know its bad but you can't stop yourself. And also this lowers my iq every chapter that i read. Maybe that's why i still keep reading, it already lowered mine enough to be negative. I'm posting this review so you guys can learn from my mistakes. If im stranded with a gun with 2 bullets in an elevator with hitler, bin laden, and the author. You guys can bet that i'll shoot the author twice, one in the head and one in the balls. So if he happens to miraculously survive due to his thickest plot armor, he can't procreate anymore.

Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God
1 week ago

valvinix: Im just dropped this novel... This story has a potential but after reading 53 chapters im already lose interest and the FML kinda a bit annoying.

Provocative Fiery Wife: My Superior is an Affectionate Spitfire
1 week ago

Rumour: What started out as a promising story has turned into a repetitive waste of time. Truly a pathetic piece with little to recommend for it. Weak storyline unbelievable character development, a poorly conceived MC and lame secondary characters.

Provocative Fiery Wife: My Superior is an Affectionate Spitfire
1 week ago

Chokhoni: Ya so true For me i have drop this book from my library too

The 99th Divorce
1 week ago
hate to spoil that for you but yeah. and, uh, the author does something bad and then tries to justify it. View More

ADreamcatcher: same if he is the ML, I'm done lol

The 99th Divorce · C14
1 week ago
Ah, indeed. Okay, I agree with that review so much more. It's become a watered down version of Bring the Nation's Husband Home. Well, that and a bunch of hinted subplots. View More

Chokhoni: Yeah i did a review again its down on the comment section

The 99th Divorce
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Chokhoni: Yeah i did a review again its down on the comment section

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Indigo Emperor
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Indigo Emperor
1 week ago
Reading Status: C376
Spoiler Alert: This novel's basically like a watered down version of Bring the Nation's Husband Home. As in, they're fighting, like, every other chapter. And she gets raped a few times by the male lead. But the misunderstandings don't last nearly as long.

Basically: misunderstanding ---> making up ----> another misunderstanding ---> making up ---> repeat

Translation quality: 4/5
Nothing much to say. Quite good, but nothing mind blowing, seeing as to the simplistic nature of the novel.

Stability of Updates: 5/5
I don't ever see a reason voting down for sake of slow release speed. Everybody has their life outside of this, so any speed is fine. Nevertheless, this novel's chapters are so short so fast update speed it great.

Story Development: 2/5
Just okay. Have a feeling the author is a 40-year old closet virgin, as each "*** scene" makes me ROFL. Like lol, doing the deed ain't supposed to hurt if you prepare properly. Reason it's 2/5, not 3/5, is because of the author's flippancy towards romantic plot lines. And the use of rape. I mean one minute the Female Lead is unhappy with the Male Lead, then two chapters later it's as if nothing happened.

Also, every time the female lead gets into any sort of trouble, she's never able to get out of it herself. There's always some "coincidental" appearance by some character to be the hero and save her. It's annoying, like what was the point of reviving if you can't even solve your own troubles?

Character Design: 1/5
Holy Moly, do I have a lot to say. But to cut the story short, the characters are so... one dimensional. The female lead, despite the male lead telling her how much he loves her, and how Tang Mingying means nothing to him, gets all "YoU CheAtEd!!" and teary. Why is she so weak? She cries at every opportunity like what the hell. It's as if every other chapter I happen upon her crying.

And the male lead too. Dude, you get angry way too easily, plus you raped her so... Also, it's never clarified how he falls in love with her. Like the two of them, each chapter they're either being horny or angry at each other. There's no in between.

World Background: 1/5
All we know is that this is set in Kingstown or something. That the Li family and the Rong family are of similar statures. That there's a big luxury shopping mall and a university. There's some outskirt places where people are kidnapped and taken to. The end. Oh, and Li Sicheng drives a black Maybach. View More
The 99th Divorce
1 week ago

brendorc: Terrible plot! Keeps getting worse! There is too much negativity in this story.
I give this author below 30% ranking in writing skills & story development.
Reason being that this story does not grow or mature but just keeps revolving around ugly midunderstandings & rape plots. Why would you, author have such a fascination & fixation on rape? Are novels/stories not meant to be tools through which morality is advanced & encouraged? Why keep harping on immoral themes? What lessons are you advancing & imparting?
Don't you realise even from the comments left, that this is a terrible terrible plot?

The 99th Divorce
1 week ago
yeah it's not that good though. View More

Chokhoni: Never judge a book by its cover totally applies here considering how there were lots of negative comments even before this book was release by qidian but give it a try and you'll realise how good it is .The male lead is sinfully gorgeous (😁) and not a dumbass who you always want to strangle for siding and believing unconditionally with the second female white lotus (arrgh imagine the level of frustrations)and thats a huge plus from me and even female lead who had learn her lessons from her past life tears off the faces of white lotus hehe well what more can you ask its a great book so far

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holachica: Okay, first thing. WHY. Poor guy... he didn't deserve that, though also, kinkyyy.

Second thing. DOING THE DEED AIN'T SUPPOSED TO HURT. If it hurts that much, you've obviously done something wrong. You're supposed to "prepare" first, you know, not stick the thing right in. Can't help but feel that this author is some forty year old closet virgin...

The 99th Divorce · C253
1 week ago
Okay, first thing. WHY. Poor guy... he didn't deserve that, though also, kinkyyy.

Second thing. DOING THE DEED AIN'T SUPPOSED TO HURT. If it hurts that much, you've obviously done something wrong. You're supposed to "prepare" first, you know, not stick the thing right in. Can't help but feel that this author is some forty year old closet virgin... View More
The 99th Divorce · C253
1 week ago
That mother of Li Sicheng is a dumbass. View More
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