illusoryforce

10mth

Commented

are they werewolves or shapeshifters?! please make up your mind! those are two different creatures

"Why are you apologizing for the sins of your people? We know your people are known for their shapeshifting ability, and this man killed the real servant and took his face to try and kill the Royal Consort. This is just one of their underhanded ways to try and undermine me as always," Rowena said in a cold, seething tone as a deathly searing aura descended in the entire room, making Asher feel as if his surroundings had turned into a scorching hell.

The Damned Demon

Fantasy · Resurgent

illusoryforce

10mth

Replied to SIDUZ

what's the GIF from?

New Eden boasted a class system with unlimited possibilities, as one could mix and match skills from all the trees, as long as they had the skill points to learn them and form their own class.

New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live

Games · Galanar

illusoryforce

11mth

Replied to Adamo_Amet

still doesn't clear things up. the boy was in total isolation in the cell. I thought at first that he died and Alexander took over but now it seems like Alexander is an alternate personality

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Murim: Struggle of the Weak

Eastern · Adamo_Amet

illusoryforce

11mth

Commented

See I've been so confused since the end of the prologue. was the boy stealing from people and teaching the orphan girl math Alexander this whole time? there wasn't a confirmation to this and it seemed like we were reading an entirely different character

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Murim: Struggle of the Weak

Eastern · Adamo_Amet

illusoryforce

11mth

Commented

Huh? what's the point?

For his lungs, Lloyd had given him hardened gourd bottles to break through, using only the strength in his exhale. Each bottle was bigger than the next, and it took him an entire month to break the first one.

Born in Blood

Fantasy · CovidCandy

illusoryforce

11mth

Commented

what a head scratcher this opponent is gonna be

ch 1676 13th Generation Heir Of The Iron Pillar Mane Clan!

Walker Of The Worlds

Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist

illusoryforce

1yr

Replied to Demons_and_I

the novel has a lot of potential and I'm liking it so far. to make it better, I think having someone edit your work will help with the flow cuz some errors are popping up every now and then. Also some of the transitions to third person POV when giving background info on the other characters seems a bit random. I suggest taking your time hashing out details in the story that paint a more descriptive story than having frequent power trips. Show more struggling in this survival type world in not just battles but also in other stuff like scrounging up food, water, shelter, weapons, etc. It's fine that the system gives them reward for weapons but I also think it happens convienently. instead they should display intellect in using resources available to them. personally, if the system shop was ONLY for buying information and not essentials like HP and MP potions it would better as it forces the characters to be careful, plan, and improvise. plus it would make more sense to work together strategically in a group than this whole in-group fighting that seems unnecessary. if I was the mc, I just wouldn't deal with all of the drama cuz it means no one can be trusted even a little bit to have my back in a fight. that's very dangerous. might as well go solo. sorry for the long message. I do like your work though. it reminds me of outside of time a little bit and it could be just as good

To make things even more dramatic, he also made sure the {Crimson Bear} got a few nasty hits on him.

God Ash: Remnants of the fallen.

Action · Demons_and_I

illusoryforce

1yr

Replied to Demons_and_I

the ape was rated as deadly vs the crimson demon bear that was rated as special. that shows it's already stronger and so it makes no sense to be so cautious like that

It had previously been eyeing the {Crimson Demon Bear}, intending on fighting it, then devouring it. If it had managed to do that, it would be many times more powerful than it was right now, and Cain wouldn't even stand a chance.

God Ash: Remnants of the fallen.

Action · Demons_and_I

illusoryforce

1yr

Commented

this part needs work. the are is strong enough already. it could have killed the bear. clarification is needed

It had previously been eyeing the {Crimson Demon Bear}, intending on fighting it, then devouring it. If it had managed to do that, it would be many times more powerful than it was right now, and Cain wouldn't even stand a chance.

God Ash: Remnants of the fallen.

Action · Demons_and_I

illusoryforce

1yr

Commented

drinking one potion per second? sounds wasteful and again unrealistic. I doubt the enemy would give home time to drink it if the ape is that fast

To maintain his steady consumption of mana, he was constantly drinking vial after vial of mana regen potions. He had stockpiled a lot of mana potions, but they were being consumed very fast. He was drinking one potion per second.

God Ash: Remnants of the fallen.

Action · Demons_and_I

illusoryforce

1yr

Commented

This is honestly an unreasonable thing to do in a fight where your opponent is your equal or better. fights are unpredictable and stuff like this can get you killed. especially if you're ambushed

To make things even more dramatic, he also made sure the {Crimson Bear} got a few nasty hits on him.

God Ash: Remnants of the fallen.

Action · Demons_and_I

illusoryforce

1yr

Commented

thank you!!!

ch 135 Newbie Goes Out to Sea

Outside Of Time

Eastern · Er Gen

illusoryforce

1yr

Commented

lol love this dude!!!

Xu Qing thought about it and shifted his gaze to look into Zhang San's eyes.

Outside Of Time

Eastern · Er Gen

illusoryforce

1yr

Replied to Viriti

Primal Hunter on Royal Road

ARCHER

Virtual World: Rise of the Sword Saint

Action · Plagiarist_Astre

illusoryforce

1yr

Commented

He's twelve now? it's only been a year and some time no? at most 2 years

Of course, Yaan would be unable to win such a high level competition at his young age and entry level cultivation, but the sheer fact that a 12 year old child could compete at all would be a massive shock to the other factions. Plus, it would also boost Great Elder Wan's status even further within the sect.